This is a minor thing, but there is still repetitive/unnecessary dialogue that shouldn't even be making it to the final script draft, much less through editing.
Bo gets back from chasing the critter and says she's found the nest.
Next scene in the cockpit when she's calling up a holo map: she says she identified the location of the nest. Yeah, you told us that already.
They plan the rescue and someone says they can't use jet packs because of the noise.
A couple scenes later they land and start walking, and Bo says they can't use jet packs because of the noise. Not only was that already stated, but even if it hadn't, this wouldn't be the time anyone would say such a thing, because you don't say we walk from here if you're already walking from here. It's a writer's cheat to have a character say something that they really would have said earlier because the audience needs the info----sometimes you get in a corner and can't avoid it, but they sure could've here.
The Simpsons made a "this for the writers in the audience" joke like that once: there was a cut from one situation to another completely new one that had not been established at all prior, so Homer says something like "I'm glad we all decided to drop everything and head to the park", when they're already in the car and driving there. Bart says "what an odd thing to say."
