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Yep sometimes he is wildly inconsistent. Other times he's very consistent. For instance he's been saying, at least from 2005 to 2021, that Anakin's fall, was on him. Because he was to selfish and greedy. George hasn't changed on that position. But Dave tries to take blame off of Anakin completely. And would rather blame the Jedi order for Anakin's fall.
I think the real problem is that the films are...pretty uneven, really.

TPM, when considered in the larger context, seems mostly pointless as a film. You see Anakin as kind of an innocent kid, you hear some vague thing about a prophecy, and you see the Jedi order exists, but you don't learn a ton more about the Jedi order, what drives them, how they make decisions, what they perceive as going on, etc., etc.,

AOTC you see a young Anakin who is brash and full of energy, you get the first hints that he has the capacity for great darkness, but you don't get any other sense of the Jedi. In the films, Anakin just...kinda does evil stuff because he's angry and whatever. But why he gives in, and other Jedi don't, is never explored.

Then by ROTS, you've jumped way far ahead, and now Anakin is grumpy because he's not a master, and then he's too attached to Padme, and falls to evil in some attempt to save her due to his attachment issues.

The main thruline in this is "Anakin's got attachment issues. He lost his mom young, twice, when he left to join the Jedi, and then when she died to the Tusken raiders, he'll go bananas when you hurt people he loves or threaten them, and...uh.....that's about it." Within only the films, Anakin's fall is entirely because he made bad choices, but there's never any exploration of why he made those bad choices. Other than, you know, attachment issues and apparently a Galaxy Far Far Away not having any therapists.

But TCW is also "official" Star Wars material, and because there's no "hierarchy" of material anymore, it's every bit as "canonical" as the films. TCW does show us the way that the Jedi were kind of clueless. I think it's clear that individual Jedi do care about things, but the order as an institution seems incapable of doing anything other than reacting to what's right in front of its face.

At the end of the day, I think you can lay the blame for Anakin's turn both at Anakin's feet for his own bad choices, and to some extent at the Jedi's feet for (A) not recognizing what was going on more broadly, and (B) having dumb rules that forbade attachments and promoted emotional asceticism.
 
I think the real problem is that the films are...pretty uneven, really.

TPM, when considered in the larger context, seems mostly pointless as a film. You see Anakin as kind of an innocent kid, you hear some vague thing about a prophecy, and you see the Jedi order exists, but you don't learn a ton more about the Jedi order, what drives them, how they make decisions, what they perceive as going on, etc., etc.,

AOTC you see a young Anakin who is brash and full of energy, you get the first hints that he has the capacity for great darkness, but you don't get any other sense of the Jedi. In the films, Anakin just...kinda does evil stuff because he's angry and whatever. But why he gives in, and other Jedi don't, is never explored.

Then by ROTS, you've jumped way far ahead, and now Anakin is grumpy because he's not a master, and then he's too attached to Padme, and falls to evil in some attempt to save her due to his attachment issues.

The main thruline in this is "Anakin's got attachment issues. He lost his mom young, twice, when he left to join the Jedi, and then when she died to the Tusken raiders, he'll go bananas when you hurt people he loves or threaten them, and...uh.....that's about it." Within only the films, Anakin's fall is entirely because he made bad choices, but there's never any exploration of why he made those bad choices. Other than, you know, attachment issues and apparently a Galaxy Far Far Away not having any therapists.

But TCW is also "official" Star Wars material, and because there's no "hierarchy" of material anymore, it's every bit as "canonical" as the films. TCW does show us the way that the Jedi were kind of clueless. I think it's clear that individual Jedi do care about things, but the order as an institution seems incapable of doing anything other than reacting to what's right in front of its face.

At the end of the day, I think you can lay the blame for Anakin's turn both at Anakin's feet for his own bad choices, and to some extent at the Jedi's feet for (A) not recognizing what was going on more broadly, and (B) having dumb rules that forbade attachments and promoted emotional asceticism.
I think the only reason Luke's character development works, such as it is, is that he has a relatively simple path written for him. No one has any issues believing Luke will step up, accept his destiny and do the right thing.

Selling someone going the other direction is much more difficult while making them compelling.
 
I think the only reason Luke's character development works, such as it is, is that he has a relatively simple path written for him. No one has any issues believing Luke will step up, accept his destiny and do the right thing.

Selling someone going the other direction is much more difficult while making them compelling.
Yep. Not impossible, but definitely harder.
 
I think the real problem is that the films are...pretty uneven, really.

TPM, when considered in the larger context, seems mostly pointless as a film. You see Anakin as kind of an innocent kid, you hear some vague thing about a prophecy, and you see the Jedi order exists, but you don't learn a ton more about the Jedi order, what drives them, how they make decisions, what they perceive as going on, etc., etc.,

AOTC you see a young Anakin who is brash and full of energy, you get the first hints that he has the capacity for great darkness, but you don't get any other sense of the Jedi. In the films, Anakin just...kinda does evil stuff because he's angry and whatever. But why he gives in, and other Jedi don't, is never explored.

Then by ROTS, you've jumped way far ahead, and now Anakin is grumpy because he's not a master, and then he's too attached to Padme, and falls to evil in some attempt to save her due to his attachment issues.

The main thruline in this is "Anakin's got attachment issues. He lost his mom young, twice, when he left to join the Jedi, and then when she died to the Tusken raiders, he'll go bananas when you hurt people he loves or threaten them, and...uh.....that's about it." Within only the films, Anakin's fall is entirely because he made bad choices, but there's never any exploration of why he made those bad choices. Other than, you know, attachment issues and apparently a Galaxy Far Far Away not having any therapists.

But TCW is also "official" Star Wars material, and because there's no "hierarchy" of material anymore, it's every bit as "canonical" as the films. TCW does show us the way that the Jedi were kind of clueless. I think it's clear that individual Jedi do care about things, but the order as an institution seems incapable of doing anything other than reacting to what's right in front of its face.

At the end of the day, I think you can lay the blame for Anakin's turn both at Anakin's feet for his own bad choices, and to some extent at the Jedi's feet for (A) not recognizing what was going on more broadly, and (B) having dumb rules that forbade attachments and promoted emotional asceticism.
I agree that the films are uneven but honestly, its because the scope of the PT story was just too big.

OT is a relatively simple story. Rebels vs Empire and a coming of age/hero's journey for Luke. Luke is also the central focus of the films with the spotlight focused on him with other characters supporting his story. Hence it fits well within 3 films.

PT is trying to do way too much. World building the previous Republic, explain how the jedi order fell and the Empire came to power, Obi Wan and Anakin's relationship, Anakin and Padme's relationship, Anakin's fall. Things need to give or be edited out but no one said no to Lucas. Just watching the films themselves shows how disjointed the story is (1 is young Anakin just becoming a jedi, 2 is Anakin is a already quite skilled with adventures in between and starting his forbidden love and start of the clone wars, and 3 ends the clone wars and shows the fall and rise of the Empire). Honestly would be like if you only watched the MCU Avengers movies back to back and Star Wars PT would have benefitted from the cinematic universe treatment lol.

The contention I have with TCW is although it is canon, Lucas wasnt the full authority, Filloni was and as mentioned before, he made decisions that contradict Lucas such as the jedi being arrogant/flawed which was not something Lucas was pushing for as Joek3rr stated. You can argue that this is on Lucas since he is meant to be the final person managing everything and letting it pass essentially means he approves it though.

The prevalent theme of Anakin's fall does seem to stem from attachment and the promise of being the one driving unrealistic expectations. Anakin is greedy, basically wanting what he wants and not compromising (Master title as well as seat on the council, marry Padme despite it being forbidden by Jedi rules but still be a jedi, prevent his loved ones from dying. I do think Lucas wanted to show this greed stems from Anakin's impoverished background as a slave who literally was property and a child to a single mother and despite the praises that he will be the most powerful jedi ever, he cant even protect his own mom that continues to drive this fear and greed. Unfortunately, this isnt pressed upon more because PT is trying to cover way too many things. Honestly, having Episode 2 be episode 1, 2 cover clone wars, and 3 being RotS which Anakin as a slave being backstory would have worked better but again, this needed Lucas to have Kurtz, Maria, and/or Spielberg to actually counter and oppose him to happen.
 
I agree that the films are uneven but honestly, its because the scope of the PT story was just too big.

OT is a relatively simple story. Rebels vs Empire and a coming of age/hero's journey for Luke. Luke is also the central focus of the films with the spotlight focused on him with other characters supporting his story. Hence it fits well within 3 films.

PT is trying to do way too much. World building the previous Republic, explain how the jedi order fell and the Empire came to power, Obi Wan and Anakin's relationship, Anakin and Padme's relationship, Anakin's fall. Things need to give or be edited out but no one said no to Lucas. Just watching the films themselves shows how disjointed the story is (1 is young Anakin just becoming a jedi, 2 is Anakin is a already quite skilled with adventures in between and starting his forbidden love and start of the clone wars, and 3 ends the clone wars and shows the fall and rise of the Empire). Honestly would be like if you only watched the MCU Avengers movies back to back and Star Wars PT would have benefitted from the cinematic universe treatment lol.

The contention I have with TCW is although it is canon, Lucas wasnt the full authority, Filloni was and as mentioned before, he made decisions that contradict Lucas such as the jedi being arrogant/flawed which was not something Lucas was pushing for as Joek3rr stated. You can argue that this is on Lucas since he is meant to be the final person managing everything and letting it pass essentially means he approves it though.

The prevalent theme of Anakin's fall does seem to stem from attachment and the promise of being the one driving unrealistic expectations. Anakin is greedy, basically wanting what he wants and not compromising (Master title as well as seat on the council, marry Padme despite it being forbidden by Jedi rules but still be a jedi, prevent his loved ones from dying. I do think Lucas wanted to show this greed stems from Anakin's impoverished background as a slave who literally was property and a child to a single mother and despite the praises that he will be the most powerful jedi ever, he cant even protect his own mom that continues to drive this fear and greed. Unfortunately, this isnt pressed upon more because PT is trying to cover way too many things. Honestly, having Episode 2 be episode 1, 2 cover clone wars, and 3 being RotS which Anakin as a slave being backstory would have worked better but again, this needed Lucas to have Kurtz, Maria, and/or Spielberg to actually counter and oppose him to happen.
TPM is the real odd-man-out in the trilogy, in that it feels the least connected to...well, anything, really. It's gorgeous and presents some interesting locales, but the story itself is so...pointless overall that it just feels like George just wanted to do a kiddie Star Wars movie and...yeah, that's pretty much it. His kids were pretty young then, so maybe he just wanted to make a Star Wars movie they'd love as 5-9 year olds, and that's the end of it.

The rest of the PT, though...it's like it can't decide what it wants to focus on. There's so much...stuff in what you wrote, and the PT....I don't even know that I'd say it's trying to focus on any of it, as much as I'd say it's just hitting you with a firehose of unrefined ideas and expecting you to make sense of it. It never quite does enough with any of its various threads.

- the fall of the Republic and how and (more importantly) why that happened.
- the toll of the Clone Wars and how it affected the clone soldiers, the Jedi, and the rest of the galaxy.
- the relationship between Anakin and Padme and how it gradually crumbled due to Anakin's own emotional issues.
- the ways in which the Jedi order failed to recognize and then stop the rise of Palpatine and its own downfall.

And so on, and so forth, and blah blah blah.

Remember how the trailer or poster for AOTC had "A Jedi shall not know love" or whatever? That literally never comes up in the film. It's never said. It's never referenced. It's sort of understood as background information because we saw the trailer, but I don't remember anywhere in the film where it's actually said that Jedi are forbidden to marry and why.

I suspect that Lucas is the kind of guy who has a million ideas swirling in his head, and he lives with them in there for years, just stewing away, shifting and changing constantly, and then he gets to a point where he fixes them to film. But I also think that when he tells his story, because he's lived with that stuff for so long, he doesn't see how he's failed to connect this or that element or raise this other thing that matters, or how he's completely ignored some other aspect because, for him, this is all still happening in his head. He's in it. He's living it. All the time. So, when he sees stuff on the screen, he's always filling in the blanks.

But when anyone else tries to decipher what's going on, all they see are dropped threads and ideas and stuff that isn't explained or which comes out of nowhere or which contradicts this or that.

Like, midichlorians. Apparently they date back to one of his earliest drafts, and he defended their addition that way (I always intended to...), but like....that's not the story we were told. All we have is what you told us, man. We don't live in your head!

When I was in high school, I used to get points deducted on papers that I wrote sometimes, because I thought I'd explained things, or I thought they were totally obvious and didn't need explaining. Eventually, I had a teacher who explained to me "Dan, you have to lay this stuff out. You can't assume that anyone reading this knows what's going on in your head, or will make the connections you've already made. That's why you write the paper -- to explain the connections." I think George could've used more people like that in his life after ESB.
 
TPM is the real odd-man-out in the trilogy, in that it feels the least connected to...well, anything, really. It's gorgeous and presents some interesting locales, but the story itself is so...pointless overall that it just feels like George just wanted to do a kiddie Star Wars movie and...yeah, that's pretty much it. His kids were pretty young then, so maybe he just wanted to make a Star Wars movie they'd love as 5-9 year olds, and that's the end of it.

The rest of the PT, though...it's like it can't decide what it wants to focus on. There's so much...stuff in what you wrote, and the PT....I don't even know that I'd say it's trying to focus on any of it, as much as I'd say it's just hitting you with a firehose of unrefined ideas and expecting you to make sense of it. It never quite does enough with any of its various threads.

- the fall of the Republic and how and (more importantly) why that happened.
- the toll of the Clone Wars and how it affected the clone soldiers, the Jedi, and the rest of the galaxy.
- the relationship between Anakin and Padme and how it gradually crumbled due to Anakin's own emotional issues.
- the ways in which the Jedi order failed to recognize and then stop the rise of Palpatine and its own downfall.

And so on, and so forth, and blah blah blah.

Remember how the trailer or poster for AOTC had "A Jedi shall not know love" or whatever? That literally never comes up in the film. It's never said. It's never referenced. It's sort of understood as background information because we saw the trailer, but I don't remember anywhere in the film where it's actually said that Jedi are forbidden to marry and why.

I suspect that Lucas is the kind of guy who has a million ideas swirling in his head, and he lives with them in there for years, just stewing away, shifting and changing constantly, and then he gets to a point where he fixes them to film. But I also think that when he tells his story, because he's lived with that stuff for so long, he doesn't see how he's failed to connect this or that element or raise this other thing that matters, or how he's completely ignored some other aspect because, for him, this is all still happening in his head. He's in it. He's living it. All the time. So, when he sees stuff on the screen, he's always filling in the blanks.

But when anyone else tries to decipher what's going on, all they see are dropped threads and ideas and stuff that isn't explained or which comes out of nowhere or which contradicts this or that.

Like, midichlorians. Apparently they date back to one of his earliest drafts, and he defended their addition that way (I always intended to...), but like....that's not the story we were told. All we have is what you told us, man. We don't live in your head!

When I was in high school, I used to get points deducted on papers that I wrote sometimes, because I thought I'd explained things, or I thought they were totally obvious and didn't need explaining. Eventually, I had a teacher who explained to me "Dan, you have to lay this stuff out. You can't assume that anyone reading this knows what's going on in your head, or will make the connections you've already made. That's why you write the paper -- to explain the connections." I think George could've used more people like that in his life after ESB.
Completely agree which is why while I enjoy some of PT (mainly due to growing up with it), I know its a flawed potential masterpiece that needed more timing. George had way too many concepts he wanted to cover that wouldnt be possible to do well in a trilogy. He either needed to cut concepts and focus on certain aspects or have more time, hence the MCU approach lol although that wasnt a thing back then (George did basically try to do the MCU before the MCU with clones wars and EU stuff).

George is definately an ideas man. When it works, it works and is quite innovative and cool like the wide variety of planets showing how rich of a universe Star Wars really is (an insect planet, a planet just above an ocean, a metropolis, etc) which we can clearly see when someone else takes the reigns (Disney and how every planet is desert, snow, or forest now). He isnt good at cutting down his ideas and also needs someone to help trim or drop the stupid ones (like Anakin and Padme despite the age difference which Marcia called out or Jar Jar Binks). PT is the result of just an ideas man given free reign without anyone to reign him in. It has heart but is a jumbled mess. ST is when a corporation tries to make "art" for money and fails miserably which is why I dont think it will age well. People will like the individual characters (I see fans of Kylo Ren and wishing he was the protagonist or people who like Rey cause first female jedi on screen) but that is more due to their actors rather than the story imo.
 
Remember how the trailer or poster for AOTC had "A Jedi shall not know love" or whatever? That literally never comes up in the film. It's never said. It's never referenced. It's sort of understood as background information because we saw the trailer, but I don't remember anywhere in the film where it's actually said that Jedi are forbidden to marry and why.
Isn’t there a scene between Anakin and Padme where she states she thought Jedi are forbidden to love, and Anakin states attachment and possession are forbidden?
 
Right, Jedi are not permitted to fall in love with individuals; they are supposed to love all equally.
 
I think most of the PT's material could have been covered (and it would have made an awesome trilogy) if it had just been done better.


The thing is, ANH was totally a case of "trying to cover too much ground for one movie". But they pulled it off successfully. That was arguably the secret sauce of it. Viewers in the 1970s came out of it feeling gobsmacked by how "believable" the place felt. That wasn't just the ILM effects, it was the way the world-building felt so deep. Luke doesn't just have a floating landspeeder, he has an old dented one. He's annoyed when he sells it and the newer model has tanked the value of his. Han doesn't just fly at lightspeed, he has to get precise calculations to avoid crashing. Obi-Wan isn't just an old wizard, he fought in "the clone wars" - an idea that was casually tossed out in about 2 sentences even though most 1970s filmmakers would have considered that a whole franchise.

Politics? Look at how much political backstory was casually delivered in ANH: There was a republic ruling the place. That govt has been gradually collapsing after a period of wars. One Emperor has seized control via the military. He has preserved the existing figureheads at lower levels and rules with an iron fist higher up. There has been a persistent rebellion against the Emperor's new rule. The rebels are affiliated with a certain old religion that was popular in the past. The Emperor wants to make some examples & stamp the rebels out.

Again, that was just the political content of ANH alone. And people don't think of that movie being "heavy on politics". It's made for 9yo kids with low attention spans.

IMO the prequels did not need more movies to deliver their content, they just needed more effective filmmaking. The long story of Palpatine causing the clone wars & taking power . . . I think it was masterfully worked out by George Lucas. But it wasn't told to the audience efficiently. Same with other things like the Anakin & Padme love story.
 
Isn’t there a scene between Anakin and Padme where she states she thought Jedi are forbidden to love, and Anakin states attachment and possession are forbidden?

Right, Jedi are not permitted to fall in love with individuals; they are supposed to love all equally.

A Jedi can have a different lover on every planet they visit, they just can't fall in love. I have to think the Jedi have a pretty good legal team that pays child support unless there's a male and female Force power for that. A power like Force Contraception or something.
 
Completely agree which is why while I enjoy some of PT (mainly due to growing up with it), I know its a flawed potential masterpiece that needed more timing. George had way too many concepts he wanted to cover that wouldnt be possible to do well in a trilogy. He either needed to cut concepts and focus on certain aspects or have more time, hence the MCU approach lol although that wasnt a thing back then (George did basically try to do the MCU before the MCU with clones wars and EU stuff).

George is definately an ideas man. When it works, it works and is quite innovative and cool like the wide variety of planets showing how rich of a universe Star Wars really is (an insect planet, a planet just above an ocean, a metropolis, etc) which we can clearly see when someone else takes the reigns (Disney and how every planet is desert, snow, or forest now). He isnt good at cutting down his ideas and also needs someone to help trim or drop the stupid ones (like Anakin and Padme despite the age difference which Marcia called out or Jar Jar Binks). PT is the result of just an ideas man given free reign without anyone to reign him in. It has heart but is a jumbled mess. ST is when a corporation tries to make "art" for money and fails miserably which is why I dont think it will age well. People will like the individual characters (I see fans of Kylo Ren and wishing he was the protagonist or people who like Rey cause first female jedi on screen) but that is more due to their actors rather than the story imo.

I think that's what frustrates us OT SW fans, who were around to see them during their initial theatrical run. George is like Walt Disney, Steve jobs, or Richard Branson... he is an ideas man but needs talented people around him to help reign-in and focus his ideas.

The PT was George without a censor. No holds barred. And the PT had SO MANY GOOD MOMENTS, so many "almosts" and beginnings of good ideas that simply weren't assembled well into a cohesive whole. But there were glaring deficiencies in the directing, acting, and pacing. Plus, George was experimenting again, but this time he had the money and ILM talent to tinker more than ever before.

And the ST? they really tried. And they were almost there with TFA. But even then, there are some obvious (in retrospect) decisions that could have made the film better, tighter. Por ejemplo:

1) Do NOT show Kylo Ren's face until he removes his mask on the suspended walkway when talking to Han. If you still want to have him remove his mask when interrogating Rey, then fine... but show him from behind, or darkly lit. When Han says "I want to see the face of my son," then THAT is when you show Ben Solo's face for the first time.

2) Outside Maz Kanata's bar, when the First Order trooper yells "Traitor!" at Fin... that SHOULD have been Captain Phasma fighting Fin. It would have made SO MUCH MORE SENSE for them to have their first standoff there, and then Han saves Fin's hide by shooting Phasma with Chewie's bowcaster.

3) Hans' death.. we all know that Ford essentially came back for the $$$ with the promise that they would whack Han. His death should have a least been in willing sacrifice to save the attack on Starkiller Base.

4) Fin and Poe jumping a 2 seater TIE figthter when they escape the First Order star destroyer? Really? Standard TIEs are 2 seaters now? Poe running towards a standard TIE when Fin yells out... "No, we need on of the larger prototypes that can fit both of us!" would have gone a long way to remove that issue.

5) Han and Leia being separated just... well, I could see them still being at odds, and having fights, but him running off and abandoning the New Republic/Resistance? What we needed was a scene reminiscent of them on Hoth in the hallway, still bickering, barely still together, but obviously still in love.

6) Leia not running up to Chewie after Han's death? Sorry JJ, inexcusable. That was an easy two point shot that you whiffed.
 
I think that's what frustrates us OT SW fans, who were around to see them during their initial theatrical run. George is like Walt Disney, Steve jobs, or Richard Branson... he is an ideas man but needs talented people around him to help reign-in and focus his ideas.

The PT was George without a censor. No holds barred. And the PT had SO MANY GOOD MOMENTS, so many "almosts" and beginnings of good ideas that simply weren't assembled well into a cohesive whole. But there were glaring deficiencies in the directing, acting, and pacing. Plus, George was experimenting again, but this time he had the money and ILM talent to tinker more than ever before.

And the ST? they really tried. And they were almost there with TFA. But even then, there are some obvious (in retrospect) decisions that could have made the film better, tighter. Por ejemplo:

1) Do NOT show Kylo Ren's face until he removes his mask on the suspended walkway when talking to Han. If you still want to have him remove his mask when interrogating Rey, then fine... but show him from behind, or darkly lit. When Han says "I want to see the face of my son," then THAT is when you show Ben Solo's face for the first time.

2) Outside Maz Kanata's bar, when the First Order trooper yells "Traitor!" at Fin... that SHOULD have been Captain Phasma fighting Fin. It would have made SO MUCH MORE SENSE for them to have their first standoff there, and then Han saves Fin's hide by shooting Phasma with Chewie's bowcaster.

3) Hans' death.. we all know that Ford essentially came back for the $$$ with the promise that they would whack Han. His death should have a least been in willing sacrifice to save the attack on Starkiller Base.

4) Fin and Poe jumping a 2 seater TIE figthter when they escape the First Order star destroyer? Really? Standard TIEs are 2 seaters now? Poe running towards a standard TIE when Fin yells out... "No, we need on of the larger prototypes that can fit both of us!" would have gone a long way to remove that issue.

5) Han and Leia being separated just... well, I could see them still being at odds, and having fights, but him running off and abandoning the New Republic/Resistance? What we needed was a scene reminiscent of them on Hoth in the hallway, still bickering, barely still together, but obviously still in love.

6) Leia not running up to Chewie after Han's death? Sorry JJ, inexcusable. That was an easy two point shot that you whiffed.
Agree with your comments on PT but completely disagree with your comments on ST. To be honest, the more I look into how the ST was planned, the more I think the project was doomed to failure.

Some clear issues from the beginning:

1) The board brainstorming "what is Star Wars" with no mention of heros journey, family, or core values that make Star Wars universal which shows the group only had a superficial understanding of Star Wars and its appeal

2) The presumption they can do "better than George" by tossing out his script and not even using it for reference given the fact he immediately saw that they didnt adopt his ideas

3) Focus on women and alienating the original audience. Lucas always said Star Wars was for little boys and it shows. Battles, lasers, ships, and war. That doesnt mean that Star Wars doesnt have female fans or strong female role models but altering the story to appeal to another audience will naturally impact the final product. Nevermind the fact that they adopted mary sueish traits which make any story boring.

4) The plan to create a trilogy with 3 different directors with limited oversight over the story. Although a basic storyline was apparently made when JJ made TFA, Johnson often comments how free he was to write his story when writing TLJ. Given that Abrams was not expected back, the third director could have also gone in a completely different direction which is the perfect example of too many cooks in the kitchen.

5) the lack of proper research before engaging in the project. Just the simple claim that "unlike Marvel, Star Wars doesnt have additional material" is honestly surprising given just how much Star Wars material there is out there with the EU. Even if tentatively canon, they can pillage the EU for ideas by seeing what storylines were fan favorites (which they seem to be doing now).

The approach to Star Wars did not inspire confidence from the beginning. They did a good job selecting some good actors (Adam Driver was obviously a huge get given his current career and I do want to see more Daisy with a good script to see what she can do) and some decent sets but thats honestly about it.
 
Isn’t there a scene between Anakin and Padme where she states she thought Jedi are forbidden to love, and Anakin states attachment and possession are forbidden?
Is there? I swear I don't remember it. If it's there, it's like a throwaway line and it's never mentioned again.
Right, Jedi are not permitted to fall in love with individuals; they are supposed to love all equally.
Where's it say that, though? Like, do they say that in the film or is that something fans came up with post hoc?
I think most of the PT's material could have been covered (and it would have made an awesome trilogy) if it had just been done better.


The thing is, ANH was totally a case of "trying to cover too much ground for one movie". But they pulled it off successfully. That was arguably the secret sauce of it. Viewers in the 1970s came out of it feeling gobsmacked by how "believable" the place felt. That wasn't just the ILM effects, it was the way the world-building felt so deep. Luke doesn't just have a floating landspeeder, he has an old dented one. He's annoyed when he sells it and the newer model has tanked the value of his. Han doesn't just fly at lightspeed, he has to get precise calculations to avoid crashing. Obi-Wan isn't just an old wizard, he fought in "the clone wars" - an idea that was casually tossed out in about 2 sentences even though most 1970s filmmakers would have considered that a whole franchise.

Politics? Look at how much political backstory was casually delivered in ANH: There was a republic ruling the place. That govt has been gradually collapsing after a period of wars. One Emperor has seized control via the military. He has preserved the existing figureheads at lower levels and rules with an iron fist higher up. There has been a persistent rebellion against the Emperor's new rule. The rebels are affiliated with a certain old religion that was popular in the past. The Emperor wants to make some examples & stamp the rebels out.

Again, that was just the political content of ANH alone. And people don't think of that movie being "heavy on politics". It's made for 9yo kids with low attention spans.

IMO the prequels did not need more movies to deliver their content, they just needed more effective filmmaking. The long story of Palpatine causing the clone wars & taking power . . . I think it was masterfully worked out by George Lucas. But it wasn't told to the audience efficiently. Same with other things like the Anakin & Padme love story.
I think what worked about ANH was that you were thrown in in media res. The audience knew it wasn't "expected" to understand every reference or tossed off mention of the Senate or the Emperor or politics or whatever. It'd either be revealed, or it wasn't that important. And for the most part, that stuff is just the backdrop to the main story, which is Luke's journey.

With the PT, a big part of "why are we showing this?" is (arguably) to highlight the differences between the OT and PT eras, and to explore how/why the Republic fell. That's a huge event that sets in motion the events of the next three films, and it's barely addressed. And when it is addressed, it's done in really boring, unnecessarily complicated ways...for a 2hr film. You could do the PT as a longer-form narrative, say something like 3 seasons of a 6-8 episode hour(ish) long show, and it'd be an amazing story. You could even make it 4 seasons to showcase more of the Clone Wars and their impact. The core ideas are there. They just don't have enough time to breathe, and 2 hours (and change) are taken up by a kiddie movie that really doesn't matter a ton in the grand scheme of things. It's backstory that could be alluded to in dialogue while you explore its impact on Anakin as an adult in how it shapes his attachment issues.
A Jedi can have a different lover on every planet they visit, they just can't fall in love. I have to think the Jedi have a pretty good legal team that pays child support unless there's a male and female Force power for that. A power like Force Contraception or something.
They do. It's called "recruitment." Just wait a couple years and we'll pick the kid up if they show force abilities and take 'em off your hands. ;)
I think that's what frustrates us OT SW fans, who were around to see them during their initial theatrical run. George is like Walt Disney, Steve jobs, or Richard Branson... he is an ideas man but needs talented people around him to help reign-in and focus his ideas.

The PT was George without a censor. No holds barred. And the PT had SO MANY GOOD MOMENTS, so many "almosts" and beginnings of good ideas that simply weren't assembled well into a cohesive whole. But there were glaring deficiencies in the directing, acting, and pacing. Plus, George was experimenting again, but this time he had the money and ILM talent to tinker more than ever before.

And the ST? they really tried. And they were almost there with TFA. But even then, there are some obvious (in retrospect) decisions that could have made the film better, tighter.
I've been saying the same thing for years about the PT. George is an idea guy. Out of 10 ideas, 5 are complete crap. 3 are pretty good and could be massaged into something great with good collaborators. 2 are pure unadulterated genius that you just sit back in awe of. The OT was (mostly) the latter 5 with the 3 pretty good ideas massaged by collaborators.

The PT was all 10 up on screen.

Even flawed, I've come to really respect the PT, though, as a product of genuine artistic effort. I may not like everything in it, but it's got soul and passion coming out its ears, and I can't help but respect that. By contrast, the first and third films of the ST feel like paint-by-numbers affairs, and the second one feels like it belongs in an entirely different trilogy.
Agree with your comments on PT but completely disagree with your comments on ST. To be honest, the more I look into how the ST was planned, the more I think the project was doomed to failure.

Some clear issues from the beginning:

1) The board brainstorming "what is Star Wars" with no mention of heros journey, family, or core values that make Star Wars universal which shows the group only had a superficial understanding of Star Wars and its appeal
Yeah, while at one time I thought that JJ understood Star Wars better than this, I think what he really understands is "vibes." Both with Trek and Star Wars, he knows how to ape the "vibe" of a thing, but not how to get at the soul of it. I don't think Kennedy ever really got the "soul" of it, and from the sound of things she's generally a pretty good organizer and facilitator, but someone in that room needed vision, and it doesn't sound like a lot of people there had that.
2) The presumption they can do "better than George" by tossing out his script and not even using it for reference given the fact he immediately saw that they didnt adopt his ideas
I don't think anyone need be beholden to George's ideas for the sequels. I mean, some of what I heard made me think "Man, I'm glad they didn't make that." But that said, what George always brought was soul to his work. Good or bad, it always came from a genuine, earnest place and one that went beyond merely "vibes."
3) Focus on women and alienating the original audience. Lucas always said Star Wars was for little boys and it shows. Battles, lasers, ships, and war. That doesnt mean that Star Wars doesnt have female fans or strong female role models but altering the story to appeal to another audience will naturally impact the final product. Nevermind the fact that they adopted mary sueish traits which make any story boring.
Here I strongly disagree. I don't think anyone was any more of a "Mary Sue" than Luke or Anakin were "Gary Stus". I also don't think it's a problem to want to expand the audience beyond just little boys and to include little girls. I don't think that was ever part of the problem with the ST. I do think you identify the bigger problems below, though.
4) The plan to create a trilogy with 3 different directors with limited oversight over the story. Although a basic storyline was apparently made when JJ made TFA, Johnson often comments how free he was to write his story when writing TLJ. Given that Abrams was not expected back, the third director could have also gone in a completely different direction which is the perfect example of too many cooks in the kitchen.
I don't know if that was the "plan" but I definitely think (a) not having a coherent thru-line planned other than "We'll just kinda re-do the OT," and (b) then leaving it to the individual directors to just kinda do whatever led to some really...dissonant storytelling. TFA and TROS kinda fit together, but TLJ stands out as very different from the other two. In a way that just does not mesh tonally or stylistically (and by this I mean narrative style, not the look of the thing). What this suggests to me is that "the plan" was "to make another Star Wars trilogy that ticks a few specific boxes." Regardless of what those boxes were, that kind of approach produced...well, exactly what we got: a mishmash of films and ideas within those films that never quite get to breathe and develop, because we're too busy doing other stuff. I think TLJ holds together the best from a narrative perspective (whether you like the narrative is a different discussion entirely, but it's still more coherent than the other two), but even with that, it's still so dramatically different from JJ's style -- to the point where I'd call it a rejection of JJ's style -- that it really feels out of place among the other two. (Or, the other two feel out of place with TLJ, if you prefer.)

To me, I think it's really a problem of too many sous chefs and no single chef in the kitchen.
5) the lack of proper research before engaging in the project. Just the simple claim that "unlike Marvel, Star Wars doesnt have additional material" is honestly surprising given just how much Star Wars material there is out there with the EU. Even if tentatively canon, they can pillage the EU for ideas by seeing what storylines were fan favorites (which they seem to be doing now).
I gotta be honest...most of the EU I experienced was, well, crap. Mediocre fan fic that didn't deserve to be retained and certainly shouldn't bind the filmmakers. The more they lifted actual storylines from the EU, the more pissy the fans would've been about why didn't they do this when they did that and so on and so forth. The "worldbuilding" aspects of some of the EU -- much of which was created by the folks at West End Games -- is amazing and worth preserving. The actual stories themselves, though...with a few exceptions are all "mediocre to terrible." Now, granted, I didn't read anything after about 1999, so I don't know about the later EU stuff. But I do know that there was just so damn much of it that it didn't make sense to keep it....unless they did what I'd originally kinda hoped for, which is to fling the story waaaaaaaay far into the future, like, 4-6 generations removed from the OT heroes, to the point where the are figures of legend, and then tell the story. That'd preserve: (1) the EU itself, (2) the "happily ever after" aspect of the original heroes, and (3) the ability to tell new stories without being hemmed in by garbage EU material (or good EU material, for that matter).

I get why, from a business perspective, they wanted to bring the OT heroes back, but as soon as that was announced, I knew people were gonna be unhappy because they'd see their heroes diminished in some capacity.
The approach to Star Wars did not inspire confidence from the beginning. They did a good job selecting some good actors (Adam Driver was obviously a huge get given his current career and I do want to see more Daisy with a good script to see what she can do) and some decent sets but thats honestly about it.
Yeah, I think the cast was fantastic. They're incredibly charismatic and fun to watch and I'd love to see more of them in better stories. And yes, that includes Kelly Marie Tran, whom I think was done dirty by some really disgusting aspects of the "fandom" (and, if you credit some of the rumors, by Carrie Fisher's death and various editing decisions). The look of the sequel trilogy was generally good, but also "safe" in many respects. I used to dislike the slick look of the prequels, but I have to say that in hindsight I appreciate that they were really trying for something different and expanding the view of what the Star Wars universe is. With these films, it was "like the old stuff, but new, but just like the old, but also new."

In a way, this actually highlights something I frequently lament with respect to fandoms and what they say they want. They want new stories, but they want them to feel like the old stories, but also to feel like new stories, and yet to maintain the vibe of the old stuff, but also to be a fresh new experience and... You can't have both. The more you reference the past, the more beholden to it you are, and the more your story is going to come across as old hat. The more distance you get from the old material, the less familiar things will feel, and the less connected they'll feel to the original material. It's the impossible trap that remakes and "legacy sequels" present.

Moreover, I think that if anything the ST proves that far too many people will focus on the surface-level similarities, while ignoring more important issues like narrative cohesion.
 
Where's it say that, though? Like, do they say that in the film or is that something fans came up with post hoc?

From Attack of the Clones:

Padme: It must be difficult having sworn your life to the Jedi... not being able to visit the places you like... or do the things you like.

Anakin: Or be with the people I love.

Padme: Are you allowed to love? I thought that was forbidden for a Jedi.

Anakin: Attachment is forbidden. Possession is forbidden. Compassion, which I would define as unconditional love, is essential to a Jedi's life. So you might say, that we are encouraged to love.

I have inferred from that last statement that Anakin is saying that they should love all equally. True, he doesn't say it explicitly. But if attachment is forbidden, the implication is that a Jedi is not supposed to bond themselves to one person. If not one person, it follows then that all people must be regarded equally. If with compassion, then Anakin suggests they are encouraged to love all people equally.

In fact, now that I look at it in writing, Anakin says that HE is interpreting compassion as unconditional love. Perhaps the Jedi council forbids love entirely, and Anakin is adapting it to his desires?

(Sorry, made a couple edits there.)
 
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From Attack of the Clones:

Padme: It must be difficult having sworn your life to the Jedi... not being able to visit the places you like... or do the things you like.

Anakin: Or be with the people I love.

Padme: Are you allowed to love? I thought that was forbidden for a Jedi.

Anakin: Attachment is forbidden. Possession is forbidden. Compassion, which I would define as unconditional love, is essential to a Jedi's life. So you might say, that we are encouraged to love.

I have inferred from that last statement that Anakin is saying that they should love all equally. True, he doesn't say it explicitly. But if attachment is forbidden, the implication is that a Jedi is not supposed to bond themselves to one person. If not one person, it follows then that all people must be regarded equally. If with compassion, then Anakin suggests they are encouraged to love all people equally.

In fact, now that I look at it in writing, Anakin says that HE is interpreting compassion as unconditional love. Perhaps the Jedi council forbids love entirely, and Anakin is adapting it to his desires?

(Sorry, made a couple edits there.)
See, right there, even in the writing that makes no sense.

Anakin "can't be with the people [he loves]." Buuuuut he's encouraged to love? That's a big deal! I mean, that's kind of like a priest's vows to love all but also to remain celibate. If that's what they were doing, maybe explain that a bit more, no?

The thing is, narratively, none of it matters at all. There's never any tension built around it, no suspicion of Anakin and Padme's illicit marriage, no discussion of "If Anakin marries her, we'll kick him out!" or whatever. It's just a nothing line that goes nowhere, really. It creates no conflicts or complications for Anakin in any serious sense.

I suppose that's why I totally forgot about this exchange: because it doesn't actually matter to the story. Any importance to this point is something we the audience come up with later to "fill in the blanks." But within the narrative of the films, it doesn't matter. There's no suggestion of any consequences if Anakin breaks this rule, and anyway nobody seems to be trying to figure it out at all. There's no conflict for Obi-Wan to protect his best bud and brother's secret but concern that he's breaking some vow. There's no suspicion by Yoda or Mace Windu or any of the other Jedi that maaaaybe Anakin's getting a little too close to Senator Amidala and hey, is that a baby bump? WTF? Aside from (as I recall) one brief furtive glance in ROTS when they meet at a spaceport or something, there isn't even any sense that they're trying to keep this stuff secret.
 
I suppose that's why I totally forgot about this exchange: because it doesn't actually matter to the story. Any importance to this point is something we the audience come up with later to "fill in the blanks." But within the narrative of the films, it doesn't matter. There's no suggestion of any consequences if Anakin breaks this rule, and anyway nobody seems to be trying to figure it out at all. There's no conflict for Obi-Wan to protect his best bud and brother's secret but concern that he's breaking some vow. There's no suspicion by Yoda or Mace Windu or any of the other Jedi that maaaaybe Anakin's getting a little too close to Senator Amidala and hey, is that a baby bump? WTF? Aside from (as I recall) one brief furtive glance in ROTS when they meet at a spaceport or something, there isn't even any sense that they're trying to keep this stuff secret.

I have to agree, with one additional thought. In Empire Strikes Back, Luke is wanting to leave his training because of his attachments to his friends. Yoda explicitly tells him to sacrifice them.

I wonder if Lucas was attempting to build on that in Attack of the Clones; to build a parallel between Luke's and Anakin's temptations. If so, he did so poorly. But it would explain why Yoda was so dogmatic with Luke.
 
Star Wars orienting towards girls -

The main protag in the ST was female. That hurts the box office & popularity with pre-puberty boys. Period.

Q. Was this a creative mistake on Disney's part?
A. That's a different discussion.

I'm just pointing out a commercial/financial reality. Disney has not been on good terms with those lately.


Mary Sue vs Gary Stu -

How many mechanical limbs does Rey have by the end of the ST?
Case closed.

Seriously, I don't think it's comparable. In all of ANH, Luke's super-powers consist of surviving the Yavin battle and making a lucky shot on the Death Star. He was already an amateur pilot and he had some quasi-practice with the DS kill shot (bullseying womp rats in his T-16).

At Bespin Luke was more than halfway through the trilogy and he had just finished training with Yoda for months (FFS). Then he goes up against Vader. Vader toys with him, and then runs out of patience & cuts his hand off after Luke scores the first glancing blow on his shoulder. Compare this to the amount of training Rey has had when she locks horns with Kylo at the end of TFA, and how they came out of that one.

Yes, Rey was more of a Mary Sue. So much so, that I walked out of TFA thinking they were going to surprise us and turn her evil in the subsequent movies. I assumed the ST would be planned out reasonably well and I saw Rey being given unreasonably strong Force powers right off the bat. It wasn't good storytelling if she was the protagonist, but it would have been a pretty clever & practical move if she became the villain later.
 
I have to agree, with one additional thought. In Empire Strikes Back, Luke is wanting to leave his training because of his attachments to his friends. Yoda explicitly tells him to sacrifice them.

I wonder if Lucas was attempting to build on that in Attack of the Clones; to build a parallel between Luke's and Anakin's temptations. If so, he did so poorly. But it would explain why Yoda was so dogmatic with Luke.

There's a much bigger parallel in AOTC. Yoda himself lets Dooku escape at the end so he can save Obi-Wan & Anakin from the pillar that Dooku tried to drop on them.
 
There's a much bigger parallel in AOTC. Yoda himself lets Dooku escape at the end so he can save Obi-Wan & Anakin from the pillar that Dooku tried to drop on them.

Great observation, although one could argue that Yoda assessed the situation with compassion, not attachment, and determined the loss of Obi-Wan and Anakin (potentially the Chosen One) is a greater cost to the bigger picture than letting Dooku get away to be apprehended later.
 
See, right there, even in the writing that makes no sense.

Anakin "can't be with the people [he loves]." Buuuuut he's encouraged to love? That's a big deal! I mean, that's kind of like a priest's vows to love all but also to remain celibate. If that's what they were doing, maybe explain that a bit more, no?

The thing is, narratively, none of it matters at all. There's never any tension built around it, no suspicion of Anakin and Padme's illicit marriage, no discussion of "If Anakin marries her, we'll kick him out!" or whatever. It's just a nothing line that goes nowhere, really. It creates no conflicts or complications for Anakin in any serious sense.

I suppose that's why I totally forgot about this exchange: because it doesn't actually matter to the story. Any importance to this point is something we the audience come up with later to "fill in the blanks." But within the narrative of the films, it doesn't matter. There's no suggestion of any consequences if Anakin breaks this rule, and anyway nobody seems to be trying to figure it out at all. There's no conflict for Obi-Wan to protect his best bud and brother's secret but concern that he's breaking some vow. There's no suspicion by Yoda or Mace Windu or any of the other Jedi that maaaaybe Anakin's getting a little too close to Senator Amidala and hey, is that a baby bump? WTF? Aside from (as I recall) one brief furtive glance in ROTS when they meet at a spaceport or something, there isn't even any sense that they're trying to keep this stuff secret.
Completely agree, and perhaps may be the reason why I enjoyed the Clone Wars series. There is more added like in the end Kenobi did know and ignored it for years, which, for me at least, added a layer to Kenobi’s “you were my brother” line in ROTS
 
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