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I honestly really like her in most roles and it was very hard seeing not only her, but so many other great actors, both established and new, get the poor writing/execution treatment that they did in the end.
Cant build a house without first having a solid foundation (writing in this case)
Dont blame the actor for a bad script. There is only so much an actor can do if they are in a bad movie (see Nicholas Cage).

But honestly, are they trying to make a mockery of Holdo? "Meditation and astrology bring a calmness to her military strategy?" Does she also go butt-tanning after military briefings and keeps a copy of "Eat, Pray, Love" next to her copy of Sun-Tzu? How is anyone not supposed to make a mockery of this character?

Blowing Admiral Ackbar out into space very unceremoniously is one thing. Having him fill Holdo's role in the story is an entirely other thing.

Talk about ruining characters. They would have had to completely rewrite the way Admiral Ackbar had previously been portrayed. A new "throwaway" character is better for that role.

It would have been nice to see him live or die differently. But play the foil to Poe? No thank you. That's not my Admiral Ackbar.
I think it could work if they downplayed the "there is a traitor in the Resistance" aspect (which honestly didnt go anywhere) and more the conflict between aggressive new youth and the wisdom of the old. Poe is super brash and arrogant (see opening of episode VIII which could have been pulled off far better) but the point is Poe is overconfident because his skills allow him to survive seemingly impossible things. However, as a commander, he cannot and should not put his men in seemingly impossible challenges and expect them to survive.

Having a scenario where Akbar takes command and Poe sees a potential vulnerability in the First Order and wants to attack while Akbar is hesitant (cause its a trap) and the resulting fallout as Poe takes a squad to attack, hits the trap and has the squad wipe out with only him escaping. Later in the movie, a legitimate opening does appear but the Resistance cant fully exploit it because of Poe's previous action so Ackbar goes out a hero, having the Resistance flee while he uses the mother ship to put the first order out of commission temporarily while the others flee. Then Poe learns a lesson about leadership to evolve his character in episode IX and Ackbar goes out a hero.
 
I think one thing a lot of the writing is lacking is legitimate consequences in situations where characters mess up or get messed up. Too much of the Sequel Trilogy is "too easy"; an example off the top of my head is that Leia would have been a lot harsher on a pilot under her charge for disobeying orders, let alone mutiny than she was on Poe in TLJ.
 
I don't know if I agree. I don't see Poe doing what he did, if Ackbar was in command. Holdo is kinda tailor made to rub Poe the wrong way, right from the start.

I agree... Poe didn't need to rebel against leadership, if they would have had Ackbar. I would have removed the Poe mutiny sub plot all together.
 
I think it could work if they downplayed the "there is a traitor in the Resistance" aspect (which honestly didnt go anywhere) and more the conflict between aggressive new youth and the wisdom of the old. Poe is super brash and arrogant (see opening of episode VIII which could have been pulled off far better) but the point is Poe is overconfident because his skills allow him to survive seemingly impossible things. However, as a commander, he cannot and should not put his men in seemingly impossible challenges and expect them to survive.

Having a scenario where Akbar takes command and Poe sees a potential vulnerability in the First Order and wants to attack while Akbar is hesitant (cause its a trap) and the resulting fallout as Poe takes a squad to attack, hits the trap and has the squad wipe out with only him escaping. Later in the movie, a legitimate opening does appear but the Resistance cant fully exploit it because of Poe's previous action so Ackbar goes out a hero, having the Resistance flee while he uses the mother ship to put the first order out of commission temporarily while the others flee. Then Poe learns a lesson about leadership to evolve his character in episode IX and Ackbar goes out a hero.

See, in the 10 minutes of careful thought you put into this, you have created a more consistent/coherent and MEANINGFUL narrative that would have flowed MUCH BETTER than what RJ filmed.

Of course, when Kylo's wingman blasted the bridge and blew Leia et al into space, I think a BETTER way to have done that scene would have been Leia to "sense" Kylo's presence and the impending bridge attack (as she seems to do in the film), and then turn as the torpedo hit the bridge and either:
1) Force "hold" the bridge officers against the bulkhead, or
2) Force "deflect" the blast away from the bridge

In either event, it would show that Leia was VERY strong in the Force now, would potentially save some of the bridge crew (including Ackbar), and avoid the whole "I'm Marry Poppins, ya'll!" version we got
 
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Some great shots of the Obi-Wan stunt that Mark uses for TESB rehearsal. The way he nonchalantly handles the saber during his interview, I'm sure today has many of us wincing in pain !


 
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I don't know if I agree. I don't see Poe doing what he did, if Ackbar was in command. Holdo is kinda tailor made to rub Poe the wrong way, right from the start.
And the audience. Which I actually think is intentional. I don't know that it's necessarily the right choice, but it does strike me as at least an intentional one, and one that I find interesting. More on that in a bit.

This whole discussion about Ackbar vs. Holdo is just so typical of Star Wars Fans today and why Disney is in a damned if they do and damned if they don't situation. If they had put Ackabar in the Holdo role fans would complained that it was it was out of character, the mask had a spot that was 1mm too large, the eyes were the wrong shade of yellow, etc. and they should have just made a new character. Of course, they make a new character, and the fans complain that they created a new character, and they should have used a legacy character like Ackbar.
Yep. I think a large portion of the fanbase has become quite precious about "their" Star Wars, and it's become effectively impossible for them to disentangle what's actually in the movies from all the other extraneous sources of information about these characters (old EU novels, comic books, the adventures they had with their favorite action figures, etc.).

Like, the use of the word "unceremoniously" being applied to Ackbar's death. I'm sorry, is the guy who has all of 3 lines in ROTJ actually deserving of some degree of ceremony vis a vis his death and its aftermath? Should we have a big eulogy sequence in the middle of the film? Should we have it be a big character moment for him as he dies? Why? Because his character was so well developed?

Ackbar was an action figure and a meme. And yeah, I know he appears briefly in the Clone Wars cartoon, and I remember him showing up in some of the EU novels that got similarly shot out into space (and honestly...good riddance to most of them). But the character -- such as he is -- isn't really all that big a deal. I get that he may have been someone's favorite action figure as a kid or whatever. But you have to be able to separate your own personal experience with that character -- much of which may have been entirely created by you and you alone -- and the actual narrative of the film. If it had been the Hammerhead figure that was your favorite, and you saw some Ithorian in the background and learned it was officially acknowledged to be THE Momaw Nadon (don't feel bad if you have no idea who the hell that is), I don't think it would matter.

Ackbar's death deserves no ceremony not simply because he's barely a character at all in the series, and because he's barely in TLJ. Like, if they hadn't confirmed it was Ackbar, and someone had just said "What? No, that's just some random Mon Calamari," would anyone give a damn? No, it's only because the "IT'S A TRAP/TARP/CARP/MIDNIGHT SNACK!" meme guy that people get bent out of shape because he got spaced.

As I've said many times over the years, once they decided to make the sequel trilogy feature OT characters, it should have been blatantly obvious that there'd be a lot of dead OT characters before the story was done. And when they jettisoned the (mostly crap) EU, folks should've just...moved on. But honestly, even if the EU had survived somehow, or bits and pieces of it had, it still wouldn't matter for purposes of the movie. Movies are here to tell a story, not tick fan boxes. Ackbar's death isn't important to the story. At most, it'd deserve maybe a line about "With Ackbar and the rest of the high command dead, and Leia comatose, Holdo's in charge." And that's it. There's your ceremony. Ackbar's dead, it's a war, **** happens. Now, on with the story.
It's the nuked refrigerator issue.

When fans like the movie, you can throw Indy out of a plane with an inflatable raft. Or have him dragged across the Mediterranean clinging to a periscope. Or Luke Skywalker can make a gigantic space station explode with one little shot into a tailpipe.

But when fans dislike the movie as a whole . . . then they start tearing into everything. Plausibility, tone, respect for characters, etc.
Exactly. We forgive the flaws of the movies we love -- but they're still present. I tend to think it's the same thing with the whole "Mary Sue" controversy. Luke has barely any training. Out of the roughly 6-ish hours of footage, he has...what, maybe 15 minutes of training? We're never told how long he actually takes because time moves at the speed of plot in Star Wars movies, and always has. Nobody stops to analyze how long Han and Leia were on the run from the Empire in ESB to compare it to how many days/weeks/months Luke spent training with Yoda. Even though it's exactly the same issue that you see with the weird use of time in TLJ. But because people didn't like TLJ, now this becomes a "MAJOR PLOT HOLE!!!" and fodder for endless youtube rants. Rey has a similar amount of training. She's also naturally good at stuff the way Luke is, presumably because of the Force. But also because JJ wanted to seed a "mystery" about it, he lampshades it constantly. Nobody talks about how quickly Luke picks up blocking blaster bolts with the sabre while he can't see. We get a teeny bit of lampshading when "Fake Wedge" talks about how impossible it is to hit a 2m target, and Luke says he used to do it back home in his T-16. So here's this guy who's presumably at least a somewhat experienced pilot who says a given task is impossible, Luke's like "Psh. I do that stuff all the time, homie," but that's not him being a "Gary Stu."

Similar issue with Holdo. People say she's a "bad character" or is "badly written." I disagree. I don't think she's badly written at all. I think she's written in a way that they find displeasing, which (as I noted) is probably by design. We're supposed to chafe at her refusal to involve Poe. We're supposed to be "rooting" for Poe because he's our hotshot hero whose brash plan is supposed to save the day. That's how these things are supposed to work. We're supposed to dislike Holdo for shutting him out and not telling him "the plan." We're supposed to find Holdo maybe a little off-putting because she's wearing an evening gown instead of a military uniform. What we're supposed to feel that Poe is right, Poe is justified, Holdo is "mean" or whatever. And then the movie pulls the rug out from under you and you realize that Poe was stupid, Poe's mutiny got people killed when Holdo was trying to keep them alive, and that Poe wasn't entitled to a ****ing explanation from his superior officer just because he's a hero from the last movie.

"But Holdo should have--" Imma stop you right there. Because chances are, whatever comes next is just going to be some variation of "--what I would've preferred to see." And that's fine, you're entitled to your preferences. I have mine, too. But a character not doing what I prefer, or a film not doing what I prefer doesn't mean that the character is "written badly."

I think the PT has a lot of technical flaws to it. It also has some real technical brilliance to it and some visionary art design. I didn't always think that way, though. For a long time, I hated the PT and everything about it. I hated the bright and shiny look it had as compared to the dingy and grimy look of "my" Star Wars. I likewise hated the story the PT told. I still would've preferred that Anakin's motivations had been completely different, and that the story had done more to focus on how my preferred motivations drove him to the path of evil. But I can't say that Lucas' chosen motivation for Anakin is bad. It's just not what I wanted. I think Lucas does an ok job of conveying how Anakin's fall is brought on by attachment/abandonment issues. Lucas shows us how Anakin hates being a slave as a kid. How he wants to free his mom, how he gets his own freedom but she sacrifices hers for his. We see how he tries to go save her with his new powers, but fails because she's too far gone and he didn't get there in time. We see his first embrace of evil/vengeance when he slaughters the Tusken Raider village, and we see his remorse for that action, his shame. And then we see him repeat similar mistakes when he fears losing Padme and tries to gain ever more power to prevent that, going so far down the path of evil that he seems irredeemable. Lucas shows us all of that. I think he could've paced it a bit better, but it's all there. It's not bad. It's just...not what I wanted.

This is something I think a ton of Star Wars fans aren't able to do. They can't separate their own preferences and what they like from technical analysis of the films and stories. And that leads to all the nitpicking and the complaints about all manner of stuff, and because just saying "I didn't like it" doesn't feel like it carries any weight, it all gets wrapped up in technical jargon. "Plot holes" and "filming mistakes" and "bad writing" and "bad characterization," and so on and so forth. Maybe sometimes it is, but it's rarely any worse than what you see in the OT. And yet, the OT gets a pass and we don't see endless screeds about how crappy it is. Why? Because ultimately all of this boils down to "I just didn't like it."

And that's fine. We don't have to like everything with "Star Wars" on it. It's probably better if we stop trying to, for that matter. But we also shouldn't try to apply technical analysis to stuff we just don't like, especially if we won't apply that analysis consistently.
 
And the audience. Which I actually think is intentional. I don't know that it's necessarily the right choice, but it does strike me as at least an intentional one, and one that I find interesting. More on that in a bit.


Yep. I think a large portion of the fanbase has become quite precious about "their" Star Wars, and it's become effectively impossible for them to disentangle what's actually in the movies from all the other extraneous sources of information about these characters (old EU novels, comic books, the adventures they had with their favorite action figures, etc.).

Like, the use of the word "unceremoniously" being applied to Ackbar's death. I'm sorry, is the guy who has all of 3 lines in ROTJ actually deserving of some degree of ceremony vis a vis his death and its aftermath? Should we have a big eulogy sequence in the middle of the film? Should we have it be a big character moment for him as he dies? Why? Because his character was so well developed?

Ackbar was an action figure and a meme. And yeah, I know he appears briefly in the Clone Wars cartoon, and I remember him showing up in some of the EU novels that got similarly shot out into space (and honestly...good riddance to most of them). But the character -- such as he is -- isn't really all that big a deal. I get that he may have been someone's favorite action figure as a kid or whatever. But you have to be able to separate your own personal experience with that character -- much of which may have been entirely created by you and you alone -- and the actual narrative of the film. If it had been the Hammerhead figure that was your favorite, and you saw some Ithorian in the background and learned it was officially acknowledged to be THE Momaw Nadon (don't feel bad if you have no idea who the hell that is), I don't think it would matter.

Ackbar's death deserves no ceremony not simply because he's barely a character at all in the series, and because he's barely in TLJ. Like, if they hadn't confirmed it was Ackbar, and someone had just said "What? No, that's just some random Mon Calamari," would anyone give a damn? No, it's only because the "IT'S A TRAP/TARP/CARP/MIDNIGHT SNACK!" meme guy that people get bent out of shape because he got spaced.

As I've said many times over the years, once they decided to make the sequel trilogy feature OT characters, it should have been blatantly obvious that there'd be a lot of dead OT characters before the story was done. And when they jettisoned the (mostly crap) EU, folks should've just...moved on. But honestly, even if the EU had survived somehow, or bits and pieces of it had, it still wouldn't matter for purposes of the movie. Movies are here to tell a story, not tick fan boxes. Ackbar's death isn't important to the story. At most, it'd deserve maybe a line about "With Ackbar and the rest of the high command dead, and Leia comatose, Holdo's in charge." And that's it. There's your ceremony. Ackbar's dead, it's a war, **** happens. Now, on with the story.

Exactly. We forgive the flaws of the movies we love -- but they're still present. I tend to think it's the same thing with the whole "Mary Sue" controversy. Luke has barely any training. Out of the roughly 6-ish hours of footage, he has...what, maybe 15 minutes of training? We're never told how long he actually takes because time moves at the speed of plot in Star Wars movies, and always has. Nobody stops to analyze how long Han and Leia were on the run from the Empire in ESB to compare it to how many days/weeks/months Luke spent training with Yoda. Even though it's exactly the same issue that you see with the weird use of time in TLJ. But because people didn't like TLJ, now this becomes a "MAJOR PLOT HOLE!!!" and fodder for endless youtube rants. Rey has a similar amount of training. She's also naturally good at stuff the way Luke is, presumably because of the Force. But also because JJ wanted to seed a "mystery" about it, he lampshades it constantly. Nobody talks about how quickly Luke picks up blocking blaster bolts with the sabre while he can't see. We get a teeny bit of lampshading when "Fake Wedge" talks about how impossible it is to hit a 2m target, and Luke says he used to do it back home in his T-16. So here's this guy who's presumably at least a somewhat experienced pilot who says a given task is impossible, Luke's like "Psh. I do that stuff all the time, homie," but that's not him being a "Gary Stu."

Similar issue with Holdo. People say she's a "bad character" or is "badly written." I disagree. I don't think she's badly written at all. I think she's written in a way that they find displeasing, which (as I noted) is probably by design. We're supposed to chafe at her refusal to involve Poe. We're supposed to be "rooting" for Poe because he's our hotshot hero whose brash plan is supposed to save the day. That's how these things are supposed to work. We're supposed to dislike Holdo for shutting him out and not telling him "the plan." We're supposed to find Holdo maybe a little off-putting because she's wearing an evening gown instead of a military uniform. What we're supposed to feel that Poe is right, Poe is justified, Holdo is "mean" or whatever. And then the movie pulls the rug out from under you and you realize that Poe was stupid, Poe's mutiny got people killed when Holdo was trying to keep them alive, and that Poe wasn't entitled to a ****ing explanation from his superior officer just because he's a hero from the last movie.

"But Holdo should have--" Imma stop you right there. Because chances are, whatever comes next is just going to be some variation of "--what I would've preferred to see." And that's fine, you're entitled to your preferences. I have mine, too. But a character not doing what I prefer, or a film not doing what I prefer doesn't mean that the character is "written badly."

I think the PT has a lot of technical flaws to it. It also has some real technical brilliance to it and some visionary art design. I didn't always think that way, though. For a long time, I hated the PT and everything about it. I hated the bright and shiny look it had as compared to the dingy and grimy look of "my" Star Wars. I likewise hated the story the PT told. I still would've preferred that Anakin's motivations had been completely different, and that the story had done more to focus on how my preferred motivations drove him to the path of evil. But I can't say that Lucas' chosen motivation for Anakin is bad. It's just not what I wanted. I think Lucas does an ok job of conveying how Anakin's fall is brought on by attachment/abandonment issues. Lucas shows us how Anakin hates being a slave as a kid. How he wants to free his mom, how he gets his own freedom but she sacrifices hers for his. We see how he tries to go save her with his new powers, but fails because she's too far gone and he didn't get there in time. We see his first embrace of evil/vengeance when he slaughters the Tusken Raider village, and we see his remorse for that action, his shame. And then we see him repeat similar mistakes when he fears losing Padme and tries to gain ever more power to prevent that, going so far down the path of evil that he seems irredeemable. Lucas shows us all of that. I think he could've paced it a bit better, but it's all there. It's not bad. It's just...not what I wanted.

This is something I think a ton of Star Wars fans aren't able to do. They can't separate their own preferences and what they like from technical analysis of the films and stories. And that leads to all the nitpicking and the complaints about all manner of stuff, and because just saying "I didn't like it" doesn't feel like it carries any weight, it all gets wrapped up in technical jargon. "Plot holes" and "filming mistakes" and "bad writing" and "bad characterization," and so on and so forth. Maybe sometimes it is, but it's rarely any worse than what you see in the OT. And yet, the OT gets a pass and we don't see endless screeds about how crappy it is. Why? Because ultimately all of this boils down to "I just didn't like it."

And that's fine. We don't have to like everything with "Star Wars" on it. It's probably better if we stop trying to, for that matter. But we also shouldn't try to apply technical analysis to stuff we just don't like, especially if we won't apply that analysis consistently.

So, if I'm understanding this correctly, your take is "We tend to be more critical of things we dislike, and more forgiving of things we do like." That's a fair and valid point. The one aspect I would disagree with you on is that no one, and I mean no one, is capable of watching something without their own bias getting in the way. We aren't emotionless robots and we can't entirely ignore our own life experience. For good or ill, those things are always going to be at play when discussing anything so you can't disregard them entirely. No one is able to be 100% objective, but there are benchmarks of what generally constitutes good fiction versus bad fiction. Literary analysis (or in this case film analysis) couldn't exist if there were no standards by which to make a judgement on these things. You literally couldn't teach someone how to write if it was all arbitrary. I mean grammar is important, no? Why wouldn't works of fiction be judged by the same criteria? By your estimation, how does an English teacher have any right to grade an essay, or short story?

The reason the discussions hone in on things that are "negative" is that those of us who are more critical are trying to understand why we dislike it. I will concede that it does get taxing at times and the cottage industry that grew up around outrage has basically failed to accomplish their goals of getting the studios to change, but I digress. If we're going to have a rational discussion about fiction though, why would we throw away the very tools that allow us to understand or appreciate it?

Surely there's an explanation of why one story is beloved, and another is loathed? Those things are quantifiable, based on the rules of fiction, based on life experience, based on previous works in the same franchise. I know this doesn't sit well with a lot of people, but most fiction depends on these rules in order to be comprehensible, let alone considered great. There's nothing wrong with liking any story, but the metrics that people use to discuss them are very real. I don't think it's very helpful to dismiss critical elements like plot holes, bad writing, poor characterization, or any of those things as being invalid if someone dislikes something. Those things are quantifiable tools used to create fiction, so why must we ignore those tools when discussing the end result? We can make a judgement on the construction of a wooden bedframe based on how the carpenter used the tools. The same concept applies to a work of fiction and how well the author uses those tools to tell their story.

Ultimately if a character is written to be unlikeable- that's fine- but how well they're received by the audience is going to depend on what purpose they serve to the overall plot. If that plot is uninteresting or unintelligable- it doesn't matter how good or bad the character is written. Even the most despicable characters have the ability to generate the audience's ire to the point where they "love to hate them."
 
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So, if I'm understanding this correctly, your take is "We tend to be more critical of things we dislike, and more forgiving of things we do like." That's a fair and valid point. The one aspect I would disagree with you on is that no one, and I mean no one, is capable of watching something without their own bias getting in the way. We aren't emotionless robots and we can't entirely ignore our own life experience. For good or ill, those things are always going to be at play when discussing anything so you can't disregard them entirely. No one is able to be 100% objective, but there are benchmarks of what generally constitutes good fiction versus bad fiction. Literary analysis (or in this case film analysis) couldn't exist if there were no standards by which to make a judgement on these things. You literally couldn't teach someone how to write if it was all arbitrary. I mean grammar is important, no? Why wouldn't works of fiction be judged by the same criteria? By your estimation, how does an English teacher have any right to grade an essay, or short story?

The reason the discussions hone in on things that are "negative" is that those of us who are more critical are trying to understand why we dislike it. I will concede that it does get taxing at times and the cottage industry that grew up around outrage has basically failed to accomplish their goals of getting the studios to change, but I digress. If we're going to have a rational discussion about fiction though, why would we throw away the very tools that allow us to understand or appreciate it?
To be clear, I'm not suggesting that people shut down their emotions and abandon all concepts of analysis. What I'm saying is that very often people take their emotional dislike of something -- or more accurately, their general preference for "something other than this," especially with respect to products they otherwise love -- and try to dress up that dislike in language that sounds more objective and rational. Except, it isn't. It's just that they don't really like it. Now, sometimes people are just casting about for things to explain their dislike, and they land on some concept in artistic criticism that they think sorta embodies that, so they point to that concept as a way to explain their dislike. But other times, people try to use that language not merely to explain their position, but rather to empower it.

In other words, people use technical language that's oriented around criticism and literary/artistic analysis not simply to put words to their gut feeling, but because those words are accorded a certain degree of respect that "Eh, I just didn't like it" often is not. In that sense, the language "empowers" their position. It doesn't simply validate it like someone else saying "Yeah, I didn't like it either." It makes their position far less assailable because they're appealing to a kind of authority that the language carries.

Consider the difference between someone saying "I think it would've been cooler if [character] had done [thing] instead," vs. "It's a complete betrayal of the common characteristics that [character] embodies in their position as the [literary concept] figure; the [literary concept] figure would have done [thing]."

Like, (and I'm just making this up, since I haven't watched any of Loki Season 2), let's say Loki does a thing in an episode that gets people irritated. Someone could write "Ugh, that thing that Loki did just really annoyed me. Anyone else bothered by this?" Or they could say "Loki's behavior in Episode 7 was such an example of how the writing of this show has degraded over time. The writers have forgotten Loki's roots as a classic mythological trickster figure, and are so busy trying to rehabilitate him and make him likable that they've forgotten the role these characters play. It makes no sense that Loki, the literal God of Deceit, would [do thing] especially when you compare him to other classical mythological figures like the Kitsune, or Anansi, or..." You get the idea.
Surely there's an explanation of why one story is beloved, and another is loathed? Those things are quantifiable, based on the rules of fiction, based on life experience, based on previous works in the same franchise. I know this doesn't sit well with a lot of people, but most fiction depends on these rules in order to be comprehensible, let alone considered great. There's nothing wrong with liking any story, but the metrics that people use to discuss them are very real. I don't think it's very helpful to dismiss critical elements like plot holes, bad writing, poor characterization, or any of those things as being invalid if someone dislikes something.
Sure there are. There are absolutely reasons to dismiss someone's deployment of "plot holes" or "poor writing." First, "poor writing" is a pretty broad critique of a work. But it's still (at least as I see it usually deployed) used as a means of applying objective criteria to what is ultimately a subjective matter. In other instances, people just flat-out misuse the concept in their efforts to critique. Like, someone saying something is a "plot hole" when it very clearly isn't (at least, not the way they're using it). Like, if someone says it's a "plot hole" that Anakin kills the Tusken Raiders in AOTC when he does...uh....they're just...wrong. It's not really a "plot hole." It might be something that hasn't been sufficiently alluded to (i.e., his violent tendencies, his anger, etc.) but it's not a plot hole the way that concept is meant to be used.

But that's not really what I'm talking about.

Those things are quantifiable tools used to create fiction, so why must we ignore those tools when discussing the end result? We can make a judgement on the construction of a wooden bedframe based on how the carpenter used the tools. The same concept applies to a work of fiction and how well the author uses those tools to tell their story.
I'm not suggesting that we abandon tools of criticism. What I'm suggesting is that the things people tend to latch on to are actually not what their real problem is with the film. Like, I really dislike The Rise of Skywalker. And there are aspects of TFA that I don't like either. But the problems I have with it aren't things like "Why the hell does the Sith knife line up the way it does exactly? How could they have known where she'd stand to look at the wreckage of the Death Star?" And I'm also not saying things like "It's a plot hole that there even is Death Star wreckage, and that said wreckage maintains exactly the shape of the knife after multiple decades." First, it's not a plot hole, and second, the thing I'm pointing to isn't actually the thing that bothers me.

What bothers me about TROS is that the whole thing feels very slapped together at the last minute, that story beats just kind of happen without a lot of lead-in, that it relies on a lot of nostalgia and "positional" storytelling (i.e., Ben and Rey kiss because people in this position are supposed to do that sort of thing in this sort of movie), rather than actually taking the time to tell the story in a way that better lays the groundwork for these things to happen.

Everything I've written is my own subjective opinion. I'm not trying to appeal to authority or use the authoritative language of criticism (e.g., "This is an example of [thing you give a name to in criticism as a type of failure]." I've seen plenty of videos, however, that focus on that kind of thing.

More to the point, though, there are plenty of other films I enjoy that have similar problems, so why are they problems in one film, but not in another? And if we're all focused on what great big problems they are...why do we ignore them in the films we like? If these are objective criteria, why is one movie good but the other one bad when both have the same failing? And if they both have the same failing, but one is good and the other is bad, why are we busy trying to point to this failing as if it actually matters? Clearly, it doesn't matter, or at least it doesn't matter nearly as much. So there must be something else going on, and if we're going to try to describe our problems with a story, maybe we should try to get to the bottom of that.

The Sith knife example that I mention is almost a perfect parallel to the doubloon in The Goonies. It functions exactly the same way, and raises exactly the same questions. How the hell did the pirates know where folks would stand? How did they know the rocks wouldn't just erode or whatever? How did the kids know where to stand to line things up? Meh, who cares? It's a fun movie! We like The Goonies! We're not really wondering how the hell One Eyed Willie (*snicker*) built an organ with no discernible source of air to power the organ, which causes flooring to fall away if you play the wrong notes, but somehow said flooring remains perfectly secure as long as you play the correct ones. We're too busy having fun to focus on that "plot hole" (or whatever). So, why do we excuse it there, but not in TROS? Why do we latch on to this "failure" in TROS, when we just kinda shrug and go with it in The Goonies? I'd argue it's because there's something else going on, and that people fail to recognize that because they're too busy pointing out these more minute issues which they simultaneously don't care about in other films. It's missing the forest for the trees.
Ultimately if a character is written to be unlikeable- that's fine- but how well they're received by the audience is going to depend on what purpose they serve to the overall plot. If that plot is uninteresting or unintelligable- it doesn't matter how good or bad the character is written. Even the most despicable characters have the ability to generate the audience's ire to the point where they "love to hate them."
Right, but even then, it's not "bad writing" that audiences don't like a character or even don't like a story. Or rather, it's not necessarily "bad writing." There may be bad writing in some other respect, or it may have nothing to do with the writing of the film at all. It may be a fundamental mismatch of the audience's expectations and what the film was doing. And maybe that's the fault of the filmmaker for failing to understand the assignment, or maybe it's the fault of the audience for getting too wrapped up in their own "head canon" or other expectations. Or...maybe there's nothing "wrong" with the film at all. Maybe it's a good film for what it's trying to do, and the audience is too preoccupied with its own dislike of the experience that it can't see that.

Back to my PT example. I had my own idea for what the PT was probably going to be. I thought its focus would be broader, with more time looking at the political machinations that bring down a democracy and turn it into an autocracy. I thought there'd be more focus on the "wars" part of the Clone Wars. I thought there'd be more examination of how/why Anakin turns to evil. What I got instead was a trilogy that, taken as a whole, is more about Anakin's own emotional development, and which ends the way it does because of that development. I didn't like it. I still don't. I didn't like the reason why Anakin falls in ROTS. I thought it wasn't sufficiently "hero to villain" for my tastes. And it's not. It's not interested in telling that story. Anakin isn't ever really portrayed as much of a hero. His heroism is alluded to, but we don't see that much of it. The film spends way more time on his attachment stuff, and actually bothers to develop that (although not as much as I think it could've used).

I still think a "better" (i.e., my preferred) version of the PT would've started with something kind of like AOTC, without paying any attention to Anakin's life as a little kid. I think it could've introduced him as someone who doesn't understand and doesn't care for the difficulties of democratic politics. I think it could've had a middle film where he's fully engrossed in the war, and has grown fond of his "disposable" soldiers and the sacrifices the otherwise unemotional Jedi are willing to make (note: this wouldn't jive with much of what we see in The Clone Wars cartoon). This would've fueled him to believe that the way forward would be to unify the galaxy under one centralized authority (e.g., the Empire), and when the Jedi opposed them, he'd have fought them fist, tooth, and nail. And I wouldn't have had him kill kids.

But that's not the trilogy we got. What we got is...you know...fine. I get what Lucas is trying to do, I think. I think he does a decent job at doing it, showing Anakin's progression from innocence to corruption. I think he needed more time to tell his story, or better/tighter editing to get it done more effectively, but I think he did it ok. It's not a total failure, certainly. It's just...not at all what I wanted to see and not something that really interests me as it was told. And yeah, the PT has plenty of other smaller flaws, but for me at least, the big thing that makes it a failure is that I just don't like the story Lucas was trying to tell. It's not about any objective failure on his part. It just doesn't resonate with me. No biggie. I enjoy The Clone Wars cartoon, and that gives me much more of the stuff I was looking for, while also (I think) effectively threading the needle on the issue of Anakin's attachment problems. Less so with Padme, and more in his relationship with Ahsoka.

My issue with a lot of the fandom is that they spend an enormous amount of time focusing on these smaller issues with the films -- which also exist in the films they say they love, and which they ignore in those films -- and end up missing what's really bothering them about the movies. By all means, they should try to effectively express what they dislike. But I tend to think that what they dislike is less that "Rey is a Mary Sue" or "TLJ ignored the setup from JJ" and more is about "This didn't go the way I wanted it to," and "JJ's style is, it turns out, actually a bad match for Star Wars films."
 
I'm not sure where you get the distinction that critical fans are using "authoritative language." The reason those literary terms get used so often is that they're the best descriptors of the tools of fiction by which all critical analysis is even performed, even if the audience isn't super knowledgable about the terms themselves, because it's the closest a person can get to being objective.

Appealing to those rules isn't about a person trying to gain "empowerment" over another, but largely unsubjective rules which can be used to explain why something works or why it doesn't. It doesn't mean the work itself is invalid, just that it could rationally explain the general consensus about its reception with an audience.

Expectations vs. taking the material at face value is another matter entirely, but it's important to note that nine times out of ten, those expectations are often generated by the material itself, not the audiences preferences.

In TFA, a lot was made of Reys origins, and come TLJ it's revealed that she's nobody. Is the audience wrong for expecting that set up to be paid off, only to be told, no just ignore what you just watched in the last movie? No. Most people take the material at face value. If its given screentime it should be relevant. People aren't making judgments out of the ether.
 
IMO when a show's writing pisses off audiences in a specific way, it's usually down to one (or both) of two categories. Either "I didn't want to see it go this way" or "this character wouldn't really act like this."

If the writers avoid those two pitfalls then they can get away with a helluva lot of other stuff. The Indiana Jones fanbase would put up with a flying Titanic sooner than they would put up with Indy robbing artifacts from a museum to pay off a gambling debt.

Note that these two issues both mainly apply to sequels/boots/etc. In the first entry in a story there is usually not enough track record with the characters & franchise for people to have strong expectations.
 
I'm not sure where you get the distinction that critical fans are using "authoritative language." The reason those literary terms get used so often is that they're the best descriptors of the tools of fiction by which all critical analysis is even performed, even if the audience isn't super knowledgable about the terms themselves, because it's the closest a person can get to being objective.

Appealing to those rules isn't about a person trying to gain "empowerment" over another, but largely unsubjective rules which can be used to explain why something works or why it doesn't. It doesn't mean the work itself is invalid, just that it could rationally explain the general consensus about its reception with an audience.

Expectations vs. taking the material at face value is another matter entirely, but it's important to note that nine times out of ten, those expectations are often generated by the material itself, not the audiences preferences.

In TFA, a lot was made of Reys origins, and come TLJ it's revealed that she's nobody. Is the audience wrong for expecting that set up to be paid off, only to be told, no just ignore what you just watched in the last movie? No. Most people take the material at face value. If its given screentime it should be relevant. People aren't making judgments out of the ether.
I do think because of the discontinuity between the two movies, fans have a right to be critical of the lack of address to Rey's past.

As to the language used in fan critiques: saying "I don't like it" isn't enough when there are specifics that stand out which lessen or derail the "flow" of the work being critiqued. I liken it to a car in need of repair: "it doesn't work right" is far too broad in comparison to the more focused "the fuel mix seems to be too lean and I'm not getting the horsepower I normally have with this vehicle". It's not "gaining empowerment", but rather gaining granularity in describing a situation appropriately in order to better communicate it.

It's my opinion that nowadays, too many fear any sort of critical thinking as a devaluation of a thing or an individual. I see it differently: addressing issues shows that we value it greatly; devaluing something would be to not care about it at all and simply seek to discard it.
 
Again, a lot of this comes down to how you consume the material. If you're looking at each new story as an isolated (anthology tale) if you will, then continuity isn't a concern.

If we're approaching it as one cohesive saga, which is how Lucasfilm markets and expects it's audience to accept it, then that becomes an issue.
 
Again, a lot of this comes down to how you consume the material. If you're looking at each new story as an isolated (anthology tale) if you will, then continuity isn't a concern.

If we're approaching it as one cohesive saga, which is how Lucasfilm markets and expects it's audience to accept it, then that becomes an issue.

. . . and that's the biggest core problem with the ST. They made it like 3 isolated movies. Then they acted surprised when it didn't work as a trilogy.
 
I agree that sometimes "bad writing" is used improperly in lieu of "I didn't like it." The reverse also happens where "you just didn't like it" is entirely misused in situations where individuals feel that the object of their affection is being unfairly attacked as an attemp to de-rail criticism.
 
. . . and that's the biggest core problem with the ST. They made it like 3 isolated movies. Then they acted surprised when it didn't work as a trilogy.

At the end of the day, those 3 ST movies made over $4 billion at the box office. We all "think" that Ryan Johnson got on LucasFilm's bad side because people complained loudly about TLJ. Well, he delivered them a > $1 billion movie. And on the Hollywood Excel spreadsheet, that's the bottom line.
 
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