Xamd
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Thank you. Goona start building them this weekend and make about ten. I probably won't use that many but its always good to have spares.
Human Yautja
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Thank you. Goona start building them this weekend and make about ten. I probably won't use that many but its always good to have spares.
mortenharket
Sr Member
@Strigoi no problem lol, I fancy playing it again myself now ha ha. One hell of a game that was.
Kerrigan is a bad ass and a great character, starts off as an assassin type operative known as a ghost and is basically captured by aliens and transformed into their hive queen. Story of her is here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sarah_Kerrigan.
It was the second picture one of your posts reminded me of.
Your a dab hand with photoshop, the nails look pretty good. Now get to work and get making the costume
Kerrigan is a bad ass and a great character, starts off as an assassin type operative known as a ghost and is basically captured by aliens and transformed into their hive queen. Story of her is here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sarah_Kerrigan.
It was the second picture one of your posts reminded me of.
Your a dab hand with photoshop, the nails look pretty good. Now get to work and get making the costume
Xamd
New Member
Ok so here is the first chapter to my story to my character, enjoy.
~Chapter one - Mother~
The agonising pain in my chest refused to end. Another one of those things moved in my chest, like a restless child in the womb. This was the eighth time I have held one of these things safe within my breast. The bright lights of the containment cell refused to let me sleep, blinding my bruised eyes. I could not move, the paralysis of pain creaping through my bones and tendons. Even when the door hissed open and the footsteps of my father could be heard, I could not beg him to stop his actions, I could do nothing.
"Hello there my dear." His voice was coated in distain and false sweetness. He was here for one reason only, for the price growning within me. The first one that had come out was bigger than the rest, its head covered in ridges. She was special, I knew it. The scanner was placed over me, two heartbeats on the monitor blinked.
"Not ready yet, it seems." Pushing the scanner to the side he grinned like a mad man. This man was my father, this beast, this animal had created me. A harsh slap to my broken jaw brought me back to reality. Draging me from the table I landed in a heap on the floor, the horrible sound of my fingers breaking under his shoe greeted my ears but the pain did not.
"Your becoming weak little one, they are taking longer to grow. Perhaps I shall lets this one find its own way out of you. What do you think?" All I could do was whimper and shut my eyes tight, too broken and wounded in the mind and body. His laugh was wicked, filled with sick pleasure. God I wanted him to shut up, and for once god listened. Looking up from the ground his shoes were missing and a pair of reptile like skin four toed feet were in their place. Blood splatted on the floor in fat dropplets and I twisted my head to look up. Suspended from a blade through his chest my father hung, his mouth lax in a silent scream of anguish. The creature that held the blade emitted a low growl so deep it felt as though it resignated through the floor and into my bones. A quick twist of the beasts wrist and the blade shreded is heart and lungs, pointing the blade to the floor the body slid off of the blade landing like a doll in a mess of limbs.
The blade retracted into a large metal rectangle strapped to its wrist, the tips peaking out, smeared in crimson. He stood about seven feet in hight and was built like a wall. His skin was a beautiful shade of light green covered in black stots, skulls and bones littering his body. The beast tilted it head at me but a sudden scream left my lips and the creature was at my side looking me up and down. Whether my father thought this thing was ready or not it was coming out now. I heard the door open again and there stood three more of these creatures. I had little time to examine them as another waves of pain washed through me. They began growling and barking at one another, clearly arguing.
My screams were reaching a pitch that I didn't realise I could reach. My eyes screwed shut and my nails digging into my hands. Suddenly my body weas being pulled into a sitting possition. One of the was sitting behind me holding me still, prising my hands open and purring low. While the noise was soothing the pain would not let me settle. Turning my head to the side I opened my eyes to see my savior behind me. A strange mask covered his face, the same was to be said of the others. Blood began to run down between my breasts which they noticed very quickly. Opening my shirt the huge scar was reviled, terrible stitched and obviously opened more than once it ozzed fresh blood at a worrying pace.
I could feeling it moving to the surface, sliding and slipping. Looking down I could see the scar tissue being pushed from the inside. It was following the route its sisters had taken before it, when they had been extracted. The stitching burst and the little things head poked out, looking left and right squeaking and hissing. I had no energy to scream anymore, no want to do anything but curl up and dissapear. One of the humanoids infront of me grabbed it and in one quick pull, removed it from my chest. Its neck was snapped instantly, its body tossed aside and their attention drawn back to me. I drew my knees to my chin but the one behind me pushed them down and held them there with his own legs.
"Please" I begged "I just want to sleep." The one infront of me who was taller than my green spoted friend opened the pack on his back. He had pale cream skin and dark brown spots covering his body, looking around I realised the other two were gone as was my fathers body. the pain was slipping away slowly with every breath I took. Slowly as my sences settled I realised they were both purring, my body moving slightly from the reverbiration of the green ones chest. A hand was placed over my eyes gently and I could feel cold steel against my wound. To tired to fight i simply remained as still as I could through the short ordeal and when the hand was removed from my face I looked down to see a cleanly stitched line, the blood gone and very little bruising.
"Thank you." It was bearly above a whisper, but it was all I could manage. As soon as the last sylable left my lips a horrific shrieking roar echoed through the whole facility. The door opened to reveal the other to humaoids growling and clicking. They were comunicating, that much I could gather but their chat was cut short by another shriek.
"She's awake." I mumbled, to which I recieved stares from all of their lifeless masks.
"And she sounds pissed."
Chapter two ~ Grief coming soon
~Chapter one - Mother~
The agonising pain in my chest refused to end. Another one of those things moved in my chest, like a restless child in the womb. This was the eighth time I have held one of these things safe within my breast. The bright lights of the containment cell refused to let me sleep, blinding my bruised eyes. I could not move, the paralysis of pain creaping through my bones and tendons. Even when the door hissed open and the footsteps of my father could be heard, I could not beg him to stop his actions, I could do nothing.
"Hello there my dear." His voice was coated in distain and false sweetness. He was here for one reason only, for the price growning within me. The first one that had come out was bigger than the rest, its head covered in ridges. She was special, I knew it. The scanner was placed over me, two heartbeats on the monitor blinked.
"Not ready yet, it seems." Pushing the scanner to the side he grinned like a mad man. This man was my father, this beast, this animal had created me. A harsh slap to my broken jaw brought me back to reality. Draging me from the table I landed in a heap on the floor, the horrible sound of my fingers breaking under his shoe greeted my ears but the pain did not.
"Your becoming weak little one, they are taking longer to grow. Perhaps I shall lets this one find its own way out of you. What do you think?" All I could do was whimper and shut my eyes tight, too broken and wounded in the mind and body. His laugh was wicked, filled with sick pleasure. God I wanted him to shut up, and for once god listened. Looking up from the ground his shoes were missing and a pair of reptile like skin four toed feet were in their place. Blood splatted on the floor in fat dropplets and I twisted my head to look up. Suspended from a blade through his chest my father hung, his mouth lax in a silent scream of anguish. The creature that held the blade emitted a low growl so deep it felt as though it resignated through the floor and into my bones. A quick twist of the beasts wrist and the blade shreded is heart and lungs, pointing the blade to the floor the body slid off of the blade landing like a doll in a mess of limbs.
The blade retracted into a large metal rectangle strapped to its wrist, the tips peaking out, smeared in crimson. He stood about seven feet in hight and was built like a wall. His skin was a beautiful shade of light green covered in black stots, skulls and bones littering his body. The beast tilted it head at me but a sudden scream left my lips and the creature was at my side looking me up and down. Whether my father thought this thing was ready or not it was coming out now. I heard the door open again and there stood three more of these creatures. I had little time to examine them as another waves of pain washed through me. They began growling and barking at one another, clearly arguing.
My screams were reaching a pitch that I didn't realise I could reach. My eyes screwed shut and my nails digging into my hands. Suddenly my body weas being pulled into a sitting possition. One of the was sitting behind me holding me still, prising my hands open and purring low. While the noise was soothing the pain would not let me settle. Turning my head to the side I opened my eyes to see my savior behind me. A strange mask covered his face, the same was to be said of the others. Blood began to run down between my breasts which they noticed very quickly. Opening my shirt the huge scar was reviled, terrible stitched and obviously opened more than once it ozzed fresh blood at a worrying pace.
I could feeling it moving to the surface, sliding and slipping. Looking down I could see the scar tissue being pushed from the inside. It was following the route its sisters had taken before it, when they had been extracted. The stitching burst and the little things head poked out, looking left and right squeaking and hissing. I had no energy to scream anymore, no want to do anything but curl up and dissapear. One of the humanoids infront of me grabbed it and in one quick pull, removed it from my chest. Its neck was snapped instantly, its body tossed aside and their attention drawn back to me. I drew my knees to my chin but the one behind me pushed them down and held them there with his own legs.
"Please" I begged "I just want to sleep." The one infront of me who was taller than my green spoted friend opened the pack on his back. He had pale cream skin and dark brown spots covering his body, looking around I realised the other two were gone as was my fathers body. the pain was slipping away slowly with every breath I took. Slowly as my sences settled I realised they were both purring, my body moving slightly from the reverbiration of the green ones chest. A hand was placed over my eyes gently and I could feel cold steel against my wound. To tired to fight i simply remained as still as I could through the short ordeal and when the hand was removed from my face I looked down to see a cleanly stitched line, the blood gone and very little bruising.
"Thank you." It was bearly above a whisper, but it was all I could manage. As soon as the last sylable left my lips a horrific shrieking roar echoed through the whole facility. The door opened to reveal the other to humaoids growling and clicking. They were comunicating, that much I could gather but their chat was cut short by another shriek.
"She's awake." I mumbled, to which I recieved stares from all of their lifeless masks.
"And she sounds pissed."
Chapter two ~ Grief coming soon
Xamd
New Member
Please do post your story here. Thank you for the complement, the costume will appear progressivly over time. Hoping it will be ok since it my first.
Wolfie1381
New Member
phwaar, liking those nails 
for trophies, how about including a chain of "dog tags" or whatever - the lab security IDs/badges that the scientists wore? taking out all the ones that hurt you and keeping a record of their deaths.
for trophies, how about including a chain of "dog tags" or whatever - the lab security IDs/badges that the scientists wore? taking out all the ones that hurt you and keeping a record of their deaths.
Xamd
New Member
phwaar, liking those nails
for trophies, how about including a chain of "dog tags" or whatever - the lab security IDs/badges that the scientists wore? taking out all the ones that hurt you and keeping a record of their deaths.
Thank you. I was thinking of using lab badges and a few dog tags, smear them in blood. Gonna have a few queen xeno teeth as well since she kills her in the next chapter. Any idead on how to make her teeth, they are that kinda see through black pearl kinda thing.
And thanks Predator_addict for the complements.
Naasad Tal
Well-Known Member
Your story is gonna be amazing!!! cant wait to read the next chapter, & I really am looking forward to what you come up with for your armor. Keep up the good work!!!
Xamd
New Member
Your story is gonna be amazing!!! cant wait to read the next chapter, & I really am looking forward to what you come up with for your armor. Keep up the good work!!!
I'm gonna be away all weekend but i'll be writing the rest of the story and hopefully have it up on monday. Started buying up supplies for the armour, dreads and bio. Glad you like the story.
Naasad Tal
Well-Known Member
SWEET...cant wait!!! have you got any designs/concepts drawn up for you armor?
Xamd
New Member
Nope not yet but here is a little teaser of the next chapter.
~chapter 2 - Grief~
The queens head spun around at my scream, her eyeless face gazed upon me. Slowly, she approched me, so gently. Her threataning demenor gone in an instant, a small whine coming from her torn throat.
"Its okay darling" my voice was gentle, slow. I raised my hand up and she pressed her slimey muzzle to it. Tears slithered down my face unchecked, it wasn't fair. This creature was all I had, she was my child in essence and now I had done something inforgivable. I had led her straight into a trap, which she would be destoyed in.
"I love you."
ancientpredator
New Member
Go on X´amd. I see a good and intresting story unwinded inside you. I recognize many many things of a dark and deep story which would give at least goosebumps to most of the readers.
I´m also writing stories by the way.
I´m also writing stories by the way.
Xamd
New Member
Here's chapter 2 enjoy.
~chapter 2 - Grief~
The facility went on lockdown and all the main exsits were sealed. The beast's looked about as the alarms sounded, trapped like mice in a maze. I was carefully pulled to my feet, my knees shaking. Exahustion was creaping up on me, twinned with pain I could bearly keep my eyes open. Another roar shook the room, she was near. There clicks and growls confused me, I didn't know what they were or any names.
"Who are you?" My voice was that of a dying child, weak, frightened and pathetic. The green one turned me to face him and tilted his head, his hand raised and I tensed waiting for a strike but instead a hissing sound filled the space between us. I opened my eyes to see him removing the mask the face under it was a strange surprise. The rubbery strands of hair framed his head to where the mask ended, his eyes were a gentle shade of green with blue rings around the outside, the skin on his face was such a light green it was almost white. Four mandibles framed a small mouth like structure filled with sharp teeth. He pressed a hand to his chest and growled one word.
"Rhi'ko" I could only assume it was his name, he gestured behind me to the tall cream and brown one who too had taken his mask off, they all had. They were all pretty much the same. The two that had left earlier I was convinced were twins. They were many shades of orange and red, black marking on their crown, identicle.
"Tsuna" The tall one nodded.
"Det'kia, Det'kan" Yep they had to be twins, the both gave a brief nod before I realised I had not told my name. But I didn't know my real name, the name my mother gave me. What did she look like again? What happened to her? Father said she didn't love me, what did I do for her to hate me? My head began to hurt so I just told them the name the facility had given me. I pressed my hand to my chest the same as Rhi'ko and told them.
"X'amd" A nod from them all told me they understood but Rhi'ko decided to say it, or try.
"X'amned" I gave a soft laugh and repeated my name, to which he nodded. I didn't think they would be able to say it, not with mouths like that.
Suddenly the door to the room dented, several hisses coming from the other side. I was pulled behind Tsuna, swiftly they put their masks back on and posed for attack. The hits kept coming and the door buckled viciously leaving a gap at the bottom. One of the creatures slid into the room, I had seen them so many times I was not truly effected by there discusting visage. I growled at them and roars were exchanged but this one felt farmiliar she felt comforting to me.
"Stop it." An eyeless face stared straight at me as I pushed past Tsuna. I slowly approached my hand offered out as a sign of kindness. It lowered its body, no longer ready to strike. The noise at the other side of the door had stopped, they were watching. Softly I placed my hand on the front of its head. It was slimey and wet, moving its head so I was touching its teeth it gave a strange pur and slowly opened its mouth. I ran my fingers over its deadly teeth, the four humanoids behind me clicking in confusion.
"We need to go, its dangerous little one." It hissed in some form of agreement and ran, the others following suit. I turned and the four beasts regarded me with an element of ditrust.
"Do you honestly think that I have only hand one of those things in me? I've had eight. The smell, they recognise me as their host, their mother." My voice sadened at the end of the sentence and they settled.
"Can we please leave?" I looked at them hopefully, my eyes begging. This place was my hell and I wanted out. Gently my hand was tugged by Det'kia and I was urged out of the room through the gap at the bottom of the door. Once in the corridore they gathered around me like a group of wolves protecting a wounded cub. We walked throught the facility at a slow pace, Tsuna looking at a computer on his wrist constantly. We approched a lage set of double doors that hissed open once we were close enough. Computers and buttons lined the walls, we had reached the control room. The scattered about plugging their wrist computers into the main controls, the door behind me closed and locked. They were trying to open the main exsits. Minutes slipped past before my own voice hit my ears.
"Daddy please stop it." I turned to see that Rhi'ko had openind up all the files on me and seemed to be transfering evberything to his wrist computer, they gathered round to see what exactly I was begging my father to stop doing. I pressed my back against the wall and slid down it, my hands pressed against my ear, and eternity seemed to pass before I felt a gentle clawed hand running through my hair. Looking up into the eyes of my green skinned friend I noticed he looked very disturbed, they all did. Purring he moved closer and pulled me against him. looking over his shoulder I noticed the computer screen was destoryed, they had not enjoyed the show.
"I'm okay." Pulling back he regarded me before he stood and pulled me to my feet, rubbing the tears from my face I smiled weakly. A bark came from behind, it seamed as though Det'kan had opening an exit and at the same time had started the self destuct. the door hissed open and Rhi'ko grabbed my hand. My body ran even though it felt like I would fall to pieces I ran. Darting down one corridor to the next I could hear the screams of the scientist as the creatures tore them to shreds, smiling inwardly I ran faster.
The exit was in sight and our pace increaced, esacping the facility in to the snow. Running a further five hundred yards we stopped my body screaming in pain. Lookin g back I culd see the facility, my prison. Several explosions set off around the hell hole causing me to jump in fright. the building sank into the icy water dissapearing forever. Looking up I saw the sun for the first time in thirteen years, its was so beautiful, so pure, but something tugged at my scences telling me something was very wrong. Looking back at the opening in the ice I told my friends one thing.
"RUN!" Turning, I ran their footsteps following me before the sound of water splashing and a powerful roar. The queen scrambled out the freezing water and persued us all. Catching us up quickly she attacked swining her tail knocking us all down. She payed little attention to me and went straight for the kill on Tsuna, but a shuriken to the throat forced her attention away giving them time to reasemble. They all attacked.
The screaming and roaring wouldn't end. I closed my eyes and dug my nails into my hands. this wasn't freedom. I had to pick a side but one was my child and the other my saviors. My mind swam, my head pounding, my heart in my throat. I mad my decision.
"ENOUGH!"
The queens head spun around at my scream, her eyeless face gazed upon me. Slowly, she approched me, so gently. Her threataning demenor gone in an instant, a small whine coming from her torn throat.
"Its okay darling" my voice was gentle, slow. I raised my hand up and she pressed her slimey muzzle to it. Tears slithered down my face unchecked, it wasn't fair. This creature was all I had, she was my child in essence and now I had done something unforgivable. I had led her straight into a trap, which she would be destoyed in.
"I love you." The spear drove straight through her head, her brain destoyed but she remained alive, bearly. She wined looking at me without eyes, sadened by my betrayl. Falling to my knees I held her muzzle, crying.
"Please forgive me, I'm so sorry." Her acidic blood dripped down my arm burning in a twisted path, but I didn't feel it. Her hand swept the blood off, my pinky dangling by a thread of flesh. Kissing her teeth and apologising one last time I grabbed the spear and twisted it.
She went still.
Slumping to my knees, exhaustion in so many forms taking over me I curled up in the snow, my eyes drifting shut I saw the feet of my saviours running to me before slipping into a cold black sleep with the voice of a woman calling to me with one message.
"Wake up."
Hope you liked it. Some progress pics will be uploaded later.
~chapter 2 - Grief~
The facility went on lockdown and all the main exsits were sealed. The beast's looked about as the alarms sounded, trapped like mice in a maze. I was carefully pulled to my feet, my knees shaking. Exahustion was creaping up on me, twinned with pain I could bearly keep my eyes open. Another roar shook the room, she was near. There clicks and growls confused me, I didn't know what they were or any names.
"Who are you?" My voice was that of a dying child, weak, frightened and pathetic. The green one turned me to face him and tilted his head, his hand raised and I tensed waiting for a strike but instead a hissing sound filled the space between us. I opened my eyes to see him removing the mask the face under it was a strange surprise. The rubbery strands of hair framed his head to where the mask ended, his eyes were a gentle shade of green with blue rings around the outside, the skin on his face was such a light green it was almost white. Four mandibles framed a small mouth like structure filled with sharp teeth. He pressed a hand to his chest and growled one word.
"Rhi'ko" I could only assume it was his name, he gestured behind me to the tall cream and brown one who too had taken his mask off, they all had. They were all pretty much the same. The two that had left earlier I was convinced were twins. They were many shades of orange and red, black marking on their crown, identicle.
"Tsuna" The tall one nodded.
"Det'kia, Det'kan" Yep they had to be twins, the both gave a brief nod before I realised I had not told my name. But I didn't know my real name, the name my mother gave me. What did she look like again? What happened to her? Father said she didn't love me, what did I do for her to hate me? My head began to hurt so I just told them the name the facility had given me. I pressed my hand to my chest the same as Rhi'ko and told them.
"X'amd" A nod from them all told me they understood but Rhi'ko decided to say it, or try.
"X'amned" I gave a soft laugh and repeated my name, to which he nodded. I didn't think they would be able to say it, not with mouths like that.
Suddenly the door to the room dented, several hisses coming from the other side. I was pulled behind Tsuna, swiftly they put their masks back on and posed for attack. The hits kept coming and the door buckled viciously leaving a gap at the bottom. One of the creatures slid into the room, I had seen them so many times I was not truly effected by there discusting visage. I growled at them and roars were exchanged but this one felt farmiliar she felt comforting to me.
"Stop it." An eyeless face stared straight at me as I pushed past Tsuna. I slowly approached my hand offered out as a sign of kindness. It lowered its body, no longer ready to strike. The noise at the other side of the door had stopped, they were watching. Softly I placed my hand on the front of its head. It was slimey and wet, moving its head so I was touching its teeth it gave a strange pur and slowly opened its mouth. I ran my fingers over its deadly teeth, the four humanoids behind me clicking in confusion.
"We need to go, its dangerous little one." It hissed in some form of agreement and ran, the others following suit. I turned and the four beasts regarded me with an element of ditrust.
"Do you honestly think that I have only hand one of those things in me? I've had eight. The smell, they recognise me as their host, their mother." My voice sadened at the end of the sentence and they settled.
"Can we please leave?" I looked at them hopefully, my eyes begging. This place was my hell and I wanted out. Gently my hand was tugged by Det'kia and I was urged out of the room through the gap at the bottom of the door. Once in the corridore they gathered around me like a group of wolves protecting a wounded cub. We walked throught the facility at a slow pace, Tsuna looking at a computer on his wrist constantly. We approched a lage set of double doors that hissed open once we were close enough. Computers and buttons lined the walls, we had reached the control room. The scattered about plugging their wrist computers into the main controls, the door behind me closed and locked. They were trying to open the main exsits. Minutes slipped past before my own voice hit my ears.
"Daddy please stop it." I turned to see that Rhi'ko had openind up all the files on me and seemed to be transfering evberything to his wrist computer, they gathered round to see what exactly I was begging my father to stop doing. I pressed my back against the wall and slid down it, my hands pressed against my ear, and eternity seemed to pass before I felt a gentle clawed hand running through my hair. Looking up into the eyes of my green skinned friend I noticed he looked very disturbed, they all did. Purring he moved closer and pulled me against him. looking over his shoulder I noticed the computer screen was destoryed, they had not enjoyed the show.
"I'm okay." Pulling back he regarded me before he stood and pulled me to my feet, rubbing the tears from my face I smiled weakly. A bark came from behind, it seamed as though Det'kan had opening an exit and at the same time had started the self destuct. the door hissed open and Rhi'ko grabbed my hand. My body ran even though it felt like I would fall to pieces I ran. Darting down one corridor to the next I could hear the screams of the scientist as the creatures tore them to shreds, smiling inwardly I ran faster.
The exit was in sight and our pace increaced, esacping the facility in to the snow. Running a further five hundred yards we stopped my body screaming in pain. Lookin g back I culd see the facility, my prison. Several explosions set off around the hell hole causing me to jump in fright. the building sank into the icy water dissapearing forever. Looking up I saw the sun for the first time in thirteen years, its was so beautiful, so pure, but something tugged at my scences telling me something was very wrong. Looking back at the opening in the ice I told my friends one thing.
"RUN!" Turning, I ran their footsteps following me before the sound of water splashing and a powerful roar. The queen scrambled out the freezing water and persued us all. Catching us up quickly she attacked swining her tail knocking us all down. She payed little attention to me and went straight for the kill on Tsuna, but a shuriken to the throat forced her attention away giving them time to reasemble. They all attacked.
The screaming and roaring wouldn't end. I closed my eyes and dug my nails into my hands. this wasn't freedom. I had to pick a side but one was my child and the other my saviors. My mind swam, my head pounding, my heart in my throat. I mad my decision.
"ENOUGH!"
The queens head spun around at my scream, her eyeless face gazed upon me. Slowly, she approched me, so gently. Her threataning demenor gone in an instant, a small whine coming from her torn throat.
"Its okay darling" my voice was gentle, slow. I raised my hand up and she pressed her slimey muzzle to it. Tears slithered down my face unchecked, it wasn't fair. This creature was all I had, she was my child in essence and now I had done something unforgivable. I had led her straight into a trap, which she would be destoyed in.
"I love you." The spear drove straight through her head, her brain destoyed but she remained alive, bearly. She wined looking at me without eyes, sadened by my betrayl. Falling to my knees I held her muzzle, crying.
"Please forgive me, I'm so sorry." Her acidic blood dripped down my arm burning in a twisted path, but I didn't feel it. Her hand swept the blood off, my pinky dangling by a thread of flesh. Kissing her teeth and apologising one last time I grabbed the spear and twisted it.
She went still.
Slumping to my knees, exhaustion in so many forms taking over me I curled up in the snow, my eyes drifting shut I saw the feet of my saviours running to me before slipping into a cold black sleep with the voice of a woman calling to me with one message.
"Wake up."
Hope you liked it. Some progress pics will be uploaded later.
predator666
New Member
Very impressed by the story! Really enjoyed reading it
Xamd
New Member
Some of the best stuff I have read in a long time. Well done.
Thank you very much. Its going to have about six to eight chapters then it ends with her first hunt (first con as predator)
Xamd
New Member
Okay guys and girls here is chapter 3
~Chapter 3 - Home~
The cold blackness that had been cradling me so gently began to dissapear, fuzzy shapes of moving people slowly came into focus. My body was suddenly forced from it gentle waking by horrific levels of pain coursing through nearly every part of me. I tried to call for help but nothing but a strangled whine came out, yet it seems that was all I needed to do to get attention. My four saviors appeared around me and the feel of a warm clawed hand pushing me to lie back down comforted me greatly, so this was real and not some story my mind had made up as it had done so many times before.
"Where am I?" It was a whisper, my voice greatly broken and weak. I desired a megre sip of water, anything. My head was cradled and pulled up slightly and the feel of cold glass met my lips. I was starting to wonder if they could read minds. The feel of water sliding down my throat was a welcome one, I had not drank nor eaten anything for three years. My father kept me alive by feeding my blood what it needed and no more.
"You are safe." I took a few moments to realise that I had understood exactly what he had said. Looking at Tsuna, my eyes asked my questions for me.
"We implanted a chip into your brain to allow you to understand us. How are you feeling?" I pushed myself into a sitting posision, and they aided me, Rhi'ko sat behind me to give me something to lean against.
"I feel weak. How long was I asleep?" I rubbed my eyes and pressed my body back against my green skined friend. My breaths shallow and shaky.
"In your planets time, three days." I knew I needed sleep but dear lord that was excessive. A strange itching sensation crept up my left arm and as I looked at it I wanted to cry. My left pinky was long gone and replaced by a metal one that responed the same as the finger next to it. The burn ran from the knuckle on my pinky to my ellbow, crooked and deep. I didn't need to ask if it would heal, just looking at it I knew I was lucky to still have the arm at all. This area was clearly the medical room, it was covered in cold steel and white blue lights. The door to the area suddenly hissed open to reveal a rather large male approaching looking ill.
"So she wakes." His voice was deep and powerful but it was laced with sorrow. His skin was many shaded of grey and the occasional black spot dotted his frame. He was far bigger than the others but held a vauge resemblance to Tsuna.
"Yes brother," I'm getting good at this "She is awake. Did you watch the files that Rhi'ko found within the facility about her?" The grey one looked down taking a deep and powerful breath.
"Do you beleve thay are genuine?" I seemed to want the answer no, and I wished the same but he would not recive it as Rhi'ko talkled.
"I found him beating her, I followed him into the room and watched as he beat her for no damn reason. Her own father, abusing her like an animal." The rage was seeping off of him in waves. Slowly I raised my hand petted his face whispering to him that it was alright. He calmed, an arm sliding about my waist and holding me gently but securly.
"I had hoped they were not. These kind of actions are unforgivable. Was he repremanded and punished?" His voice was demanding, as though if they hadn't killed him we were going back to do so. Det'kai reached to his side and revealed my fathers ID tag, smeared in blood. That was proof enough. He turned to me and offered it, I took it with a soft smile on my lips and gave a thank you meant for all of them.
"Well little one, if you feel you have the energy we can take you to the galley and get you something to eat." That sounded like a fantastic idea to me, nodding I turned myself so my legs dangled off the edge of the bed ready to jump off but a voice stopped me, the voice of the grey one.
"Before we go my dear I must tell you this, the recorded events were transfered through the whole ship. Everyone here now knows of your endevours and of what your father did to you. Rape in yautja society is nearly unheard of, espcially if they are family. What your father did was dishonerable, and we live through honor." Looking up I was wondering how anyone I didn't know was going to react to me.
"They will treat you with care but at the same time pity. To us your life has been taken from you and we must help you restore it. The males may be hesitant to approach you in fear of frightening you. As for the females they will probably surround you and defend you. It is instinctual to them to protect a wounded female. No one will harm you, I promise." I huge wait lifted from my shoulders. I was safe here, safe. A word I hadent been able to apply to my life for too long.
"Thank you....I'm sorry I don't know your name." The grey one walked to me and lifted me from the table and placed me on the ground gently.
"My name is Tseka, brother of Tsuna and father of Rhi'ko. You are safe in this clan, considering Tsuna is its leader, his word is law. And it appears he has taken you under his wing." Looking to him he seemed to mildly embaressed. So this was my new dad, no not new this was my dad. The last man I simply came from, but he wasn't my father.
"I like the sound of that." Tsuna looked to me releaved, before I could thank them all for their kindness my stomach made a rather loud growl, to which the all stood back, resulting in me bursting out laughing. They didn't know what it was, they thought there was something alive in me, again.
"Its okay, its my stomach. When it gets empty it makes noises to make me go and eat." They looked so very confused looking at my belly as though something was gonna pop out.
"It talks to you?" Det'kan enquired, and he was to an extent right so I mearly nodded. After that we walked at a snails pace to the galley. The few other humaoids we past gave me a small bow of the the head and the females sniffed the air near me.
"Can I ask you something?" The question was meant for anyone, Tsuna looked at me and nodded.
"What is the name of your species and why do the females keep sniffing me?" I strange yet sweet smile came across his face.
"We are Yautja and the females are picking up your scent so they can always find you. Its so they can make sure you are ok." Ok so the females were very protective, but if rape was as bad to them as they were making it out to be and everyone had seen the files I wasnt going to be left alone for a while. We reached the galley which was pretty heavily occupied but the room went silent the moment we entered. The females all stood and slowly approached me, the males moved away. A tall and heavily pregnant female moved to my side the rest of the women behind her.
"My name is Yat'ni, I want to tell you on behaf of all these females that we will be here for you. You are brave and stronge to have lived thrugh such horrors." The females behind her seemed to shudder in anger. It effected them this much. Smiling I looked down at her swollen belly.
"How long till I meet your child?" She smiled and took my hand and placed it against her, the baby moved gently beneth her tough skin. Soon was the answer that she gave. She turned and walked away the others following after giving me a small bow. Moving across the room everyone went back to their business but their eyes watched me. We sat at a large table and food was placed before us instantly. These guys clearly had strange but wonderful taste. I tried everything and to be honest they could have put a plate of sand infront of me and I would eat it. We talked idoly, them telling me about themselfs, their planet and customs, everything. Once the food was gone and our stamachs happy we decided sleep would be the best thing.
"You will be staying in Rhi'kos room. We have not had one prepared for you yet. Is this alright?" Tsuna asked. I nodded in earnest. I didn't want to be alone, not yet. Walking to the room I realised how large the ship was, so many levels and rooms. I was told I could explore tomorrow. As we approached Rhi'kos room Tseka's wrist computer bleeped and he opened it. Some form of message, and he looked a little worried about it.
"What is it brother?" Tsuna looked curiose and worried.
"The news of the little one has reached the other ships. As has the files. The matriarch wished to see her. She will be here it sixteen hours, she wishes to train her." They all looked stuned. Now even though I had been away from life for a while a knew how a hierarcy worked and Matrarch was head female. I suddenly felt ill, but a reasuring hand pressed against my shoulder. Rhi'ko smiled at mew.
"This is good news. If she trains you and has accepted you, no one can harm you and no one can remove you from our society. This is the best news we could have." The biggest smile I had ever had spread across my face. Everyone around me was happy, I was happy for the first time in so long.
"Well off to bed, can't have you meeting her half asleep." I nodded and both me and Rhi'ko entered his room. The walls were covered in various different spieces skulls and the bed was huge. Covered in various different types of furs and pelts, I knew I would sleep well tonight. Rhi'ko nudged me out of my daydream and offered me some clothes to sleep in. Pointing over to the door at the back of the room he told me it was the bathroom if I wanted to change privetly. Wandering over giving him a thank you as I went I changed quickly and returned. I would have a better look at his quarters when I woke. Already in bed Rhi'ko ushered me over and I slepped under the heavy cover. Curling up against him I whispered a good night, his body curled around mine with ease and a soft growl was the last I heard before sleep took me.
~Chapter 3 - Home~
The cold blackness that had been cradling me so gently began to dissapear, fuzzy shapes of moving people slowly came into focus. My body was suddenly forced from it gentle waking by horrific levels of pain coursing through nearly every part of me. I tried to call for help but nothing but a strangled whine came out, yet it seems that was all I needed to do to get attention. My four saviors appeared around me and the feel of a warm clawed hand pushing me to lie back down comforted me greatly, so this was real and not some story my mind had made up as it had done so many times before.
"Where am I?" It was a whisper, my voice greatly broken and weak. I desired a megre sip of water, anything. My head was cradled and pulled up slightly and the feel of cold glass met my lips. I was starting to wonder if they could read minds. The feel of water sliding down my throat was a welcome one, I had not drank nor eaten anything for three years. My father kept me alive by feeding my blood what it needed and no more.
"You are safe." I took a few moments to realise that I had understood exactly what he had said. Looking at Tsuna, my eyes asked my questions for me.
"We implanted a chip into your brain to allow you to understand us. How are you feeling?" I pushed myself into a sitting posision, and they aided me, Rhi'ko sat behind me to give me something to lean against.
"I feel weak. How long was I asleep?" I rubbed my eyes and pressed my body back against my green skined friend. My breaths shallow and shaky.
"In your planets time, three days." I knew I needed sleep but dear lord that was excessive. A strange itching sensation crept up my left arm and as I looked at it I wanted to cry. My left pinky was long gone and replaced by a metal one that responed the same as the finger next to it. The burn ran from the knuckle on my pinky to my ellbow, crooked and deep. I didn't need to ask if it would heal, just looking at it I knew I was lucky to still have the arm at all. This area was clearly the medical room, it was covered in cold steel and white blue lights. The door to the area suddenly hissed open to reveal a rather large male approaching looking ill.
"So she wakes." His voice was deep and powerful but it was laced with sorrow. His skin was many shaded of grey and the occasional black spot dotted his frame. He was far bigger than the others but held a vauge resemblance to Tsuna.
"Yes brother," I'm getting good at this "She is awake. Did you watch the files that Rhi'ko found within the facility about her?" The grey one looked down taking a deep and powerful breath.
"Do you beleve thay are genuine?" I seemed to want the answer no, and I wished the same but he would not recive it as Rhi'ko talkled.
"I found him beating her, I followed him into the room and watched as he beat her for no damn reason. Her own father, abusing her like an animal." The rage was seeping off of him in waves. Slowly I raised my hand petted his face whispering to him that it was alright. He calmed, an arm sliding about my waist and holding me gently but securly.
"I had hoped they were not. These kind of actions are unforgivable. Was he repremanded and punished?" His voice was demanding, as though if they hadn't killed him we were going back to do so. Det'kai reached to his side and revealed my fathers ID tag, smeared in blood. That was proof enough. He turned to me and offered it, I took it with a soft smile on my lips and gave a thank you meant for all of them.
"Well little one, if you feel you have the energy we can take you to the galley and get you something to eat." That sounded like a fantastic idea to me, nodding I turned myself so my legs dangled off the edge of the bed ready to jump off but a voice stopped me, the voice of the grey one.
"Before we go my dear I must tell you this, the recorded events were transfered through the whole ship. Everyone here now knows of your endevours and of what your father did to you. Rape in yautja society is nearly unheard of, espcially if they are family. What your father did was dishonerable, and we live through honor." Looking up I was wondering how anyone I didn't know was going to react to me.
"They will treat you with care but at the same time pity. To us your life has been taken from you and we must help you restore it. The males may be hesitant to approach you in fear of frightening you. As for the females they will probably surround you and defend you. It is instinctual to them to protect a wounded female. No one will harm you, I promise." I huge wait lifted from my shoulders. I was safe here, safe. A word I hadent been able to apply to my life for too long.
"Thank you....I'm sorry I don't know your name." The grey one walked to me and lifted me from the table and placed me on the ground gently.
"My name is Tseka, brother of Tsuna and father of Rhi'ko. You are safe in this clan, considering Tsuna is its leader, his word is law. And it appears he has taken you under his wing." Looking to him he seemed to mildly embaressed. So this was my new dad, no not new this was my dad. The last man I simply came from, but he wasn't my father.
"I like the sound of that." Tsuna looked to me releaved, before I could thank them all for their kindness my stomach made a rather loud growl, to which the all stood back, resulting in me bursting out laughing. They didn't know what it was, they thought there was something alive in me, again.
"Its okay, its my stomach. When it gets empty it makes noises to make me go and eat." They looked so very confused looking at my belly as though something was gonna pop out.
"It talks to you?" Det'kan enquired, and he was to an extent right so I mearly nodded. After that we walked at a snails pace to the galley. The few other humaoids we past gave me a small bow of the the head and the females sniffed the air near me.
"Can I ask you something?" The question was meant for anyone, Tsuna looked at me and nodded.
"What is the name of your species and why do the females keep sniffing me?" I strange yet sweet smile came across his face.
"We are Yautja and the females are picking up your scent so they can always find you. Its so they can make sure you are ok." Ok so the females were very protective, but if rape was as bad to them as they were making it out to be and everyone had seen the files I wasnt going to be left alone for a while. We reached the galley which was pretty heavily occupied but the room went silent the moment we entered. The females all stood and slowly approached me, the males moved away. A tall and heavily pregnant female moved to my side the rest of the women behind her.
"My name is Yat'ni, I want to tell you on behaf of all these females that we will be here for you. You are brave and stronge to have lived thrugh such horrors." The females behind her seemed to shudder in anger. It effected them this much. Smiling I looked down at her swollen belly.
"How long till I meet your child?" She smiled and took my hand and placed it against her, the baby moved gently beneth her tough skin. Soon was the answer that she gave. She turned and walked away the others following after giving me a small bow. Moving across the room everyone went back to their business but their eyes watched me. We sat at a large table and food was placed before us instantly. These guys clearly had strange but wonderful taste. I tried everything and to be honest they could have put a plate of sand infront of me and I would eat it. We talked idoly, them telling me about themselfs, their planet and customs, everything. Once the food was gone and our stamachs happy we decided sleep would be the best thing.
"You will be staying in Rhi'kos room. We have not had one prepared for you yet. Is this alright?" Tsuna asked. I nodded in earnest. I didn't want to be alone, not yet. Walking to the room I realised how large the ship was, so many levels and rooms. I was told I could explore tomorrow. As we approached Rhi'kos room Tseka's wrist computer bleeped and he opened it. Some form of message, and he looked a little worried about it.
"What is it brother?" Tsuna looked curiose and worried.
"The news of the little one has reached the other ships. As has the files. The matriarch wished to see her. She will be here it sixteen hours, she wishes to train her." They all looked stuned. Now even though I had been away from life for a while a knew how a hierarcy worked and Matrarch was head female. I suddenly felt ill, but a reasuring hand pressed against my shoulder. Rhi'ko smiled at mew.
"This is good news. If she trains you and has accepted you, no one can harm you and no one can remove you from our society. This is the best news we could have." The biggest smile I had ever had spread across my face. Everyone around me was happy, I was happy for the first time in so long.
"Well off to bed, can't have you meeting her half asleep." I nodded and both me and Rhi'ko entered his room. The walls were covered in various different spieces skulls and the bed was huge. Covered in various different types of furs and pelts, I knew I would sleep well tonight. Rhi'ko nudged me out of my daydream and offered me some clothes to sleep in. Pointing over to the door at the back of the room he told me it was the bathroom if I wanted to change privetly. Wandering over giving him a thank you as I went I changed quickly and returned. I would have a better look at his quarters when I woke. Already in bed Rhi'ko ushered me over and I slepped under the heavy cover. Curling up against him I whispered a good night, his body curled around mine with ease and a soft growl was the last I heard before sleep took me.
ArielHuntress
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I just love your story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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