So, I skimmed the video in about...eh..10 min or so. I was...unimpressed. Most of the stuff the guy points out are just, you know, nitpicks. It's nothing that strikes me as objective criticism of how the film doesn't work as a film. It's more about "I wanted something different." That and the usual discussions like "The characters didn't act logically."
Look, back in the TPM days, this stuff was a lot less common. But now? Every ******* with a Youtube account can post a video offering their "incisive takedown" of XYZ film, and has basically made the same points over and over and over.
Also, I don't know if the quality of their criticism of TPM went downhill for this criticism video, or if it was never that good and I just viewed it differently, but I have to say I didn't see anything in my skim of the video that really explored anything other than surface level stuff. It's mostly "This wasn't logical" and "that isn't what you'd expect them to do" and "that decision was a dumb decision." I tend to think criticisms of this sort are what you hang your hat on when the film just doesn't work for you subjectively on a gut level, because it's not really about the film failing on an objective level. Like, saying "Why doesn't everyone just get in three ships and fly in three different directions? Their plan is dumb" doesn't really get at a fundamental flaw of the film; it points out a mistake that characters made. I think it's much more of a valid criticism to say that, for example, Finn's close friendship with Poe isn't really earned through the course of TFA, and therefore makes little sense in TLJ. For example, in TFA, Finn and Poe barely interact during the course of the film; they escape the First Order ship together, get shot down, you think Poe is dead, and then they meet up on the base at the end and act like they're best friends when they've basically known each other for all of 30 minutes or whatever, and then continue this behavior in TLJ. That's the film relying upon the positions the characters occupy to act as shortcuts for them actually building an emotional connection between each other. To me, that's much closer to an objective failure of the films than, say, the fact that their plan for escaping the FO fleet is crappy or that Holdo could've just told Poe "Here's my plan" instead of withholding it from him.