There’s the fan-expectations card again. Look, most people wanted to see a Star Wars movie when they bought their tickets, after all the title has Star Wars in it. Or is that an already heavily biased expectation? Cuz I’m not sure any previous Star Wars movie plot (prequels included) was based on characters screwing up things and then bumbling through til the end credits. That is the point he’s trying to make that there are instances when structuring a plot like that works but Star Wars might not be the one. Again, if you're okay with it good for ya.
Minor point here re: characters screwing up: Characters' mistakes form the basis for a ton of Star Wars. For example, Obi-Wan admits his mistake in trying to train Anakin the way he was trained, which in turn led (or at least contributed) to the rise of Vader. No Vader, no story. The Jedi f-up on a
galactic scale by failing to discern the causes of the Clone Wars and the rise of the Sith, and completely missed Palpatine as the true threat. Again, no screwup, no story. Qui-Gon makes the decision to train Anakin in spite of the council saying "Dude, DO NOT DO IT. This kid has anger issues." And that's just the events of the prequels.
In ANH, the whole rescue of Leia is basically one botch to the next once they leave Tatooine and before they reach Yavin. They fly to Alderaan, but -- whoops! -- it's been blown up. Instead of high-tailing it out of there, they chase a TIE fighter, get too close to the Death Star, and get pulled in by a tractor beam. They then have to hide in the floor compartments to avoid detection, steal stormtrooper armor, Chewie and Han shoot up whatever command station making a ton of noise and leaving bodies to clean up, they find Leia, sneak into the detention block...for about 3 seconds before the whole plan goes to hell because they fail their "con" roll,
destroy the detention center, break Leia out, Han fails his "con" roll
again, and they get trapped in the detention center with zero chance of fighting their way out. Leia blows a hole in the wall, they dive into the garbage chute -- and it's lucky that didn't just go straight to an incinerator, by the way -- and get stuck in...a trash compactor! They're
almost crushed to death, but R2 makes his hacking roll and saves them. They walk out of the compactor -- apparently thinking it's a smart idea to ditch their disguises in the process (whoops) -- and...run straight into a squad of stormtroopers. Han shoots a bunch of them, he and Chewie give chase, Luke and Leia try to get back to the ship. Along the way, Han chases a couple of troopers and then runs into
another full squad and has to run away. Luke and Leia escape several troopers, find themselves at a bridge, Luke shuts the door then shoots the control panel...only afterwards realizing that he
also blew up the controls to extend the bridge. He has to swing across -- which he manages to do -- and then he and Leia finally can make it back to the ship. Obi-Wan
dies fighting Vader, the rest escape...buuuut their ship is being tracked. Also the Falcon gets shot up a bunch and 3PO almost melts. The only difference is that they manage to succeed in (1) rescuing Leia (at the cost of Obi-Wan's life), and getting the plans back to the Rebels (at the cost of the Empire knowing where the Rebel base is). Oh, and the trench run is a series of f-ups, too. The Y-wings get almost completely wiped out, the X-wings almost get wiped out too, and even Luke almost gets fried by Vader if not for Han's timely appearance on the scene. It's only because Luke can use the Force that they manage to destroy the Death Star at all.
In ESB,
both the A and B stories are all about screwups. Luke repeatedly screws up with Yoda, failing to understand his advice, and goes to confront Vader which is arguably the greatest screw-up of all since it almost gets him killed which would have led to the permanent installation of the Empire. Meanwhile, Han's ship keeps breaking down and he can't fix it. He manages to land on an asteroid....inside a space slug that almost eats the Falcon. He barely manages to fool the Empire with his fly-by trick, but
fails to fool Fett who tracks him to Cloud City, where Vader has already set up a reception, and uses them all as bait for Luke -- including freezing Han which leads to Han being taken to Jabba where he would otherwise have remained stuck on Jabba's wall indefinitely.
In both cases, it's all about their mistakes. No mistakes, no drama, no story.
And there's plenty of humor in those situations themselves ("incredible smell you've discovered," "walking carpet," "no reward is worth this," "I think we took a wrong turn," the hydrospanners falling on Han's head, yelling at 3PO about the computer, "shut him up or shut him down," "you don't have to do this to impress me," etc.). One may
prefer the style of humor from the older films, but that doesn't mean there's never been humor in the films or that humor has no place in Star Wars.
I mean fair enough, the Prius is not a bad car objectively. So if the Prius comes out as the new Porsche 911 then it’s fine, it’s all about the fan expectations?
Somewhere at the end, I think part 8. But it’s easier if you just watch it if you’re interested. I get it if you’re not I mean to me it got to the point now where I just can’t be bothered about the whole TLJ/Star Wars business any more. It’s been discussed ad nauseum, probably why the Plinkett one didn’t make too big an impression on me either.
Yes, exactly. The Prius is not a bad car, but if you go into buying one expecting a Porsche 911 because the Prius has body styling reminiscent of a Porsche...yeah, you're gonna be disappointed not because the car is a bad car, but because it didn't meet your expectations.
Look, I'm not saying that it's
unreasonable for fans to be disappointed if their expectations weren't met. Their expectations
themselves might be unreasonable (although for the most part, I don't think so in the case of a lot of TLJ), but the fact that you expected A and got B instead is a perfectly reasonable basis to say "I didn't like the film." All I'm getting at here is that there's been a lot of talk about how
objectively bad TLJ has been and a lot of the criticism isn't really based in objective problems with the film, but rather in subjective problems with what people would have
preferred to see.
Put another way: there's a big difference between me saying "Eric Clapton's music sucks and he's a total hack," and me saying "I just don't like what Clapton does, and his artistic choices turn me off." George Lucas, I think, gets a mix of criticisms. Some are about objective mistakes he makes. He's not a great director; he fails to pull good performances out of many of his actors (especially during the PT era) in spite of the actors' capabilities. His dialogue is clunky and often lacks emotion or is too on-the-nose for an otherwise competent actor to allow the dialogue
not to get in the way of their conveying the character's emotions and mindset.
But, that's different from me finding Jar Jar annoying, or thinking that Anakin's motivations are stupid or uninteresting as the basis for the fall of the Jedi and the Republic. Those are issues with my
preferences rather than with Lucas' execution of what his vision was.
I'll also say that, at least in some cases, it is generally a stupid idea to
frustrate fan expectations just to prove how clever you are. I was a huge fan of How I Met Your Mother, but the finale was hot garbage in my opinion. However, much of that was based on my own expectations being frustrated, in addition to criticisms of the technical execution of the story they tried to tell. I was pissed that they spend 9 years telling a particular story, only to invalidate a lot of what they were doing at the end. And while they might have gotten away with the goal they were working towards
if they had more effectively constructed their story, they actually managed to undercut the goal they were shooting for in the telling.
RLM is pretty consistent as well. It's one of their strengths actually.
Their SW criticism has nothing to do with "Trek vs Wars". Mike brings up Star Trek at the drop of a hat....any hat. And he also criticizes Trek as well. The Plinkett review covers Trek movies. They even give random criticism to older Trek movies and shows during their various projects.
I don't think RLM would call their opinion definitive either. They aren't that egotistical, imo. I don't think it's definitive, but it does distill a lot of the most relevant complaints down to a 1 hour video. Which is much quicker and more entertaining than reading through something like this topic or the dozens of "TLJ is not good" videos. And I've never seen anyone else make the comparison to comedic movie structure, that is novel.
I think you have to ask, though, "Relevant in what sense?" Relevant in cataloguing why people didn't like the film? Absolutely. Their complaints are entirely relevant in that sense, although I think they don't quite go deep enough because a lot of them can be leveled at the original trilogy, which people still revere (mostly). Certainly, ANH and ESB "suffer" from plenty of the things they point out here, which raises the question "Why was that one better than this one?"
But relevant in pointing out objective failures in the construction of the story? I don't see it, really. It's a lot of "Here's stuff I disliked" rather than "Here's stuff that's just objectively bad."