Hi Zlurpo,
Not sure about whether you’re looking for feedback on this…
but for what it’s worth, I think the only thing that’s really jumping out at me as being an issue (outside of the other things you mentioned) is this ONE thing…
The point where the sleeves begin (at the top of the sleeve where it meets the shoulder):
It’s just a bit too much of a “bump” on each shoulder; it just stands UP when it should be more of a smooth transition from the shoulder down into the sleeve.
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Can that be corrected in some way? Is there some sort of sewing or stitching method that better allows these things to flow together a little smoother?
(If it’s not already obvious, I’m not a person who knows anything about the techniques of doing these sorts of jobs, so please understand that I’m asking this sincerely when I ask IF it’s possible… I honestly don’t know)
For your reference, here’s 2 of the (few) shots of the original that we have that show this aspect of it.
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Everything else is looking Really GREAT with this project, by the way!

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Really looking forward to seeing the finished results