First Predator Story

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Felconer

New Member
Ahhh fail (computer)
Your update to the story is good, I like it, as for ideas I'm not really sure, you could however get Nuori to form a rebellion so to speak where she forms an army of Past humans that have been switched and lead a direct or strategic attack against the science building.( assuming theirs enough survives to foam an army )
V_V

Just my crazy suggestion on things, and that's the reason why I don't write stories

And merry Christmas
 

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BoSkarr

Well-Known Member
Perhaps she can rescue Xeno's(former humans) and they can help. Have her make a translator or a bad blood scientist can do it and stuff like that.
I too am making a Predator story and need ideas. Mainly I need names.
 

Davisa16

New Member
Oooo that would be good :) I have heaps of names you could try:

Koto-sa-tu
Hiriash
Montith
Quan-gor-pa
Taranya
Doyion
Wer-thou-mut
Hor-no-ziayu
Farnoicallab
Cazutiophar
Mollscita
 

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Davisa16

New Member
gahh.... story has come to hault.... those major problems led to an... unfortunte event.... which im still recovering from. might get around to adding more, might not. sorry :/
 

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