First Predator Story

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Davisa16

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Third version of The Switch, not much but enough to update :)
I NEED IDEAS PLEASE PM ME!!!! or even better email me at bellagrace_dc@hotmail.com that way story updates come quicker!!!


The switch
She opened her eyelids slowly, the dim lighting easy for her vision to adjust to.
It felt as though she'd been asleep for years as she sat up and swung her legs around so
they hung off the edge of the solid steel table. The thin pants she was wearing only just
fit but she could have sworn they were to big when she picked them out to wear that morning,
and her shirt what had happened to that? Her black and grey mid sleeved top had been replaced
with a thin zip up jacket the same faded black colour as her pants. As she became more aware
of her surroundings she made mental notes of the room she was in; thee thick metal walls
riveted together, a fourth with a large window apparently able to be turned opaque and a
very solid door with no apparent handles. The floor was a suspended metal great with a
solid metal sheet below it, and the roof was just a seamless sheet of metal. And as for
furnishings there was only the metal bed table thing she sat on and a large what looked
like a giant cylindrical tank, but it wasn't easy to tell as it was in the far corner of
the room cloaked in shadows. Her thoughts were interrupted by the door to her room being
opened rather noisily. A tall figure stepped into the room and closed the door behind him,
then proceeded to walk up to her. His face was covered in a metal mask and his hair was in
thick dreadlocks that appeared to made from something other than hair, his skin from what she
could see was mainly smooth with slightly protruded scales/lumps covering certain areas and
riddled with scars. It was quite obvious that this thing was not human.
"how was your sleep?" he asked as he stood looking the girl over. "was it undisturbed?"
"Why do you want to know"?" was her answer.
"to ensure that you, our guest is happy with the services provided" was his reply.
"in that case it was very good, no disturbances, but why am I here? What do you mean
I'm your guest?"
"you questions will be answered later, for now I ask that you follow me"
"okay...."
So she got up and followed him. They entered the room next to the one they had come
from and the girl was instructed to sit whilst another one of these masked men checked
her over carefully as though she was a delicate piece of equipment that had just been dropped.
"first blood you may leave now" the second 'man' said before continuing to examine the girl.
Her escort left and the second 'man' introduced himself "I am the one in charge of this
facility, you may call me Shirethayan" the first blood came back in carrying a fresh set
of clothes, a pair of shoes and a black pair of fingerless gloves. The first blood introduced
himself now "You can call me Scar I'll be your guide as you learn your way about this place,
I will answer any questions you may have and will be at hand at all times during your 48
hour quarantine"
"okay....what do you mean by quarantine?" the girl asked
Shirethayan answered "you have undergone an experiment 12 years in the making to give a human
the body and mind of a yautja but still keep your main memories and knowledge but overall to
become a yautja in full"
Now it all made sense to the girl, she now knew why she recognised these metal masked men.
They were the humanoid alien called a predator or yautja, they were what she had looked up
to in the last few years when life spat itself in her face, they were the most feared
creatures in the universe, stronger, smarter, more aware than anything imaginable and they
had chosen her to give a purposely grown body with her basic human resemblance
(but in yautja form) her main memories and personality THIS WAS GOING TO BE GREAT!!!!
"Scar please escort her to the cafeteria so that she can get some proper food into her and
take her on a few laps of the facility just to use up some of the stored energy she probably has."
"yes Shirethayan. Come on we better get you settled in properly"
Scar led the girl out of the examining room and back to her room so she could get changed.
"what d'ya think" she said as she came out of the room dressed in the all black outfit Scar
had chosen for her, the gloves were nice they kept her hands warm whilst still allowing
full use of her hands and provided bonus grip. And the shoes, they had thick rubber soles
with good grip also, but didn't make her feat hot.
"it suits you, much better that your original outfit"
"thanks, I did not intend on wearing that out fit anywhere but from my room to the shed at
my house but somehow I ended up here instead..."
"ok whatever"
"so........how come I still look like me?"
"huh?"
"Shirethayan said that I'll be yautja but I still look like me"
"oh. You still look like you coz you are still yourself, you haven't switched bodies yet"
"whaaaaa.......??? then how come I'm heaps taller than I was this morning, my clothes didn't
even fit?!"
"I thought someone would have explained to you about that"
"about what?"
"we told you that this experiment was 12 years in the making, it was thought of 2 years before you
were born...but...we began the experiment when you were 11....and you were to young then to do the
switch...but we didn't want to wait until you were old enough because you would have become to attached
to your world and we wouldnt have been able to remove you." the yautja stopped to let the girl take in
what he had just said before continuing.
"and so that we wouldn't lose you...we.....took you when you were at your most defenceless and put you
in suspended animation...the last morning you remember was....when you were thirteen.....your now almost 18
years old young blood"
The girl froze, she had been kept in suspended animation for almost 5 years!
".....arh.....erm...okay....I guess...that explains it.....was that what the covered tank in my room is?
Where I spent that time? or is it my other body?"
"the tank in your room is your new body it is fully matured now and when you see it later on you will
notice that it looks like you...well a bit."
"ok and how long do I have left of the quarantine? It's been over 24 hours surely, I couldn't have woken
up straight away"
"your 48 hour quarantine officially finishes in about 10 hours, you slept through most of it and you
need to be in the lab by the time its over so we can get rid of this (he gestures to the girls body)
and give you one of our more suited bodies for what you will be doing...bearing in mind though, that you
can't go back once it's done."
"well I guess we should be heading back soon if we want to get something to eat for dinner....there is
a couple of other things that I've been wondering about though...."
"and they would be?"
"for one why don't you take off your bio's if your not on a hunt, secondly why we're you called a first
blood when you quite obviously have been on more than one hunt because of those scars that differ in age,
and lastly....erm...it's kind of a weird question but...will I get all the weapons?"
"well, we don't usually keep our bios on but because we are in the main science building it's safer to
keep them on in case an experiment goes wrong, I'm called a new blood because I have only been on one
official hunt, most of these scars come from the Xenomorphs that are kept in the training grounds for
the younglings to practise neutralising before they themselves go on a hunt. I get to be the one that
removes claws, tail barbs and the second mouth."
"oh ok, but what about the weapons?"
"you will be allowed to go into the armoury and choose what you wish, from there you will be taken to
your permanent home in the main housing area, you will be able to go back and forth from the armoury
until you are satisfied that you have all you wish at your disposal, although I do suggest you make
sure you get blades, at least 2 kinds of combi sticks, a smart disk and a shoulder cannon.
You may then go to the training grounds as a young blood and train before going on a hunt to
secure your title in this world."
"awesome! Hey umm if I'm almost eighteen what's the date?"
"it's the 25th of March"
"really, that means there's only....6 days till my birthday!!'
"your kidding right?"
"no, why would I be kidding??"
"coz that's my birthday as well"
"naaaa really?"
"yep"
"how old are you then"
"19 this year"
"jeez I knew you were young but I didn't think youd be that close in age to me"
"well yeah.....I'm pretty young, to be working here anyway"
"ok, are we friends now?"
"yeah, but well be even better friends once you don't look so ugly! Jokes."
"hey you should look at it from my perspective mr metal face!"
"good point, you wanna go get something to eat now? I'm starving I skipped lunch waiting for you
to wake up."
"yeah I'm kinda getting bored of walking in circles"
So Scar led her to the cafeteria

"ahhh it feels good to get that bio off I tell ya"
"I can image, are they uncomfortable?"
"not really, but mines a bit small at the moment, im going to finish making my new one tomorrow,
if your switch goes well you can come and watch."
" that sounds like a good idea. Hey your not even wearing your bio now...how can i understand you?"
"we may have made a few adjustments done to your hearing and speech...to make explaning this easier
of course"
"and exactly how did you do that?"
"I think they added some yautja DNA before you were put in suspended animation an then once you were
'asleep' they put earplugs in with speakers built into them that had a recording of every word in
our dictionary with a translation in your language after them."
"what do you mean you think?"
"when I started working here 2 years ago the Eldars made sure that the lab workers didn't release
any information on this experiment in case the bad bloods found out and started abducting soldiers
and giving them stolen bodies"
"well that's a good excuse and by stolen bodies I'm guessing you mean other yautja that they've killed"
"yep, the bad bloods are outcasts and they will seek revenge in all kinds of ways"
The two selected what they wanted from the food set out. They then went and sat at a table and ate
together before returning to the girls room where Scar proceeded to tell her what you could use certain
weapons for.

"so how long left until I get to switch?"
"you've got half an hour, the laps of the facility used up almost about 4 hours followed by the 2
hour dinner and then my almost 3 hour weapons introduction so you don't have to long to go."
"can I see my yautja now?"
"I was waiting for you to ask, yes you can"
So they walked up to the tank and Scar uncovered it.
"holly sh......is that really going to be me"
"yep"
"Its so....huge...and....hey ya know it does look like me, if you don't focus on the mandibles and stuff."
"that's because they combined a little of your DNA into it, just enough to make you look like you."
The door opened and Another yautja entered the room.
"I see you have settled in well"
"yep"
"Scar can you go and make sure the lab workers will be ready for her in 10 minutes"
"ten minutes! But we still have at least 20minutes before she was meant to go!"
"don't argue with me scar or you'll be taken off this job!"
"yes, Kanohkar"
"good, youngling please follow me"
"okay....where are we going?"
"to the room you went when you first woke up, you need to be prepared."
"prepared how?"
"you need your head shaved again, you need to get into an operating gown and you need to then come
back here and sit on that table until the lab surgeons come and perform the switch."
"shave my head again?"
"we shaved it before you were put into suspended animation"
"oh, ok then I spose we should hurry up and get this over and done with"
"you are surprisingly happy about this"
"dude! I've been dreaming of this since I first saw the predator movie!"
"ahh, I see ok then. Well let's go"
Whilst Scar went to the lab Kanohkar prepared the girl for the switch.

Once the girl was dressed in her operating gown and her head shaven Kanohkar returned her to her room.
He then left and went to update the records of the experiment.

"hello 19"
"excuse me? Since when was I number 19? since I 'woke up' I've been called Youngling and Youngblood
but never 19!"
"well you see, the switch experiment is the nineteenth to involve a human, the others have been new
breeds of Xeno's that we needed hosts or prey for."
"so basically experiment 19 will be the only one that a human actually lives afterward"
"in a way yes, only you won't be human any more you'll be yautja"
"awe nah!"
"well if your finished with your commenting then I would like to start the switch, after all it's what
we've all been waiting for, so if you'd lay down now while we give you this sedative we shall begin"
"will I get to see my friends and family again?" was the girls last words, they caused the yautja in
the room to hang their heads in shame. They hadn't told her that her family were dead, they had been
so busy preparing that no one had thought to. But how would they have been able to persuade her to
stay for the experiment if they'd told her that her family had been killed in a car crash and that
they had removed her whilst she was unconscious from the car and put her straight in suspended animation.
But all that didn't matter, they wouldnt tell her, but they would let her see her friends....well
the one she called Izzy anyway. She was the only one that could be trusted with the information in
the human world.

The surgeons worked non stop for hours carefully graphing parts of the girls brain into her new
yautja body, making sure that she had enough of her old memories to have her knowledge and personality
but wouldn't act human. The surgery took just under 9hours to complete and it took another hour and a
half to kick start the girls new body so that her new life could begin. After the surgery the girl was
moved whilst still sedated to a new room that was much smaller and had no window, only a solid door with

a viewing hole in it, also the room was lined with a thin material that when electricity was passed
through it would send enough electricity to any one in the room to knock them out. It was literally a
prison cell but with scientists standing outside it not guards.

The ear splitting sound of metal against metal woke the girl up abruptly, she was standing up and in a
fighting pose within a second, waiting for an attacker to fly at her; but none came, so she relaxed
keeping herself alert enough to be able to jump into action again if need be. The noise had ceased almost
as soon as it had started, as though it was meant to wake her and send her into battle mode.
The girl was puzzled over why this was, were the scientists testing her? Her head tilted slightly
as she pondered about this thought but she soon dismissed it and went to sit back down on her makeshift
bed in this strange new room.

For the next 3 weeks the girl was woken up by the sound and each day the girl would be out of bed
and in a fighting stance before an attacker would have been able to strike, had there been one that is.
A tray of food was sent though a slot in the door in the morning and in the evening as well as numerous
tablets, none of which the girl took, she crushed them in her hand and blew the dust into the corridor
though the food slot. This made the scientists angry and on more that one occasion got the girl knocked
unconscious by the electric pulse. On these occasions she would wake to find a bleeding needle mark on her
arm where they had forcibly given her the drugs. This made the girl angry and unlocked a hidden rage
inside her. But she kept this rage a secret just to get her revenge.

On the first day of the 4th week the girl was already awake when the noise sounded to wake her up,
but instead of going into battle mode she just sat on the bed and stared out the viewing port in her
cell door at the ever present scientists observing her. She sat staring until her breakfast was sent in,
it consisted of the usual thick slice of bread, a piece of strange fruit, some jams and a few pieces of
cold meat. Once she had eaten her meal the tablets were sent in. The girl picked through them and chose the
smallest if them all, a tiny blue one, which she put in her mouth and then spat back into the tablet
container as a frothy blue mess. She then threw this out through the food slot aiming to hit at the closest
scientist. She knew that the electric pulse was coming and so she laid down on the floor and scrunched
herself up into a ball, then the pulse came and she lost consciousness. When the scientists entered the
room they were shocks to find that the girl wasn't quite unconscious she had been getting used to the
shocks and was now half awake, they tried to give her the injection of drugs but she leapt up and was in
battle mode before they could come any closer. She flew at the nearest scientist releasing his knife
from its sheath and then she sprinted to the corner of her cell where she could face the scientists face on,
but instead the scientists retreated. She took her chance and ran through the open cell door, she was
free for now. They hadnt told her about this torture so now they were going to pay. But little did she
know that living hell was just around the corner.

"Release the hound" was what the girl herd as she approached the science building entrance.
It took only a few seconds for the hound to catch up to the girl, it jumped onto her and pinned
her to the floor, but she slashed at it with the knife she had taken from the scientist.
It was in the midst of this small battle of beast and girl when the guard turned up, they
called off the hound but kept her pinned to the floor as her knife was retrieved. Then she
was rolled into her stomach and her arms and hands bound behind her back. She was dragged to her
feet and taken to another cell much smaller than the last. She was then chained to the back wall
in full view of the armoured guards outside.

The girl sat there with her arms and hands bound firmly behind her back. Getting chained to a wall
was not in her escape plan. The bite from the hound on her shoulder was causing her a great deal of
pain and her ribs were throbbing, she was also covered in small cuts and bruises but they didn't cause
her any pain.
One of the guards came in holding a syringe containing a pale bluefish liquid. He paused a moment and
looked down at the bleeding mess of a girl. he then said to her "if you don't struggle against getting
the injections and take your tablets then you don't need to be kept like this. we didn't want to do this
to you but you made us by your constant antics with the tablets." the girl didnt respond, she just
adjusted her sitting position so that her shoulder was in an easy position for the guard to give her
the injection. The guard was slightly shocked, the girls files had said she response to reasoning but
he didn't think it would be effective. "Thank you" he said as he knelt down and injected the serum into
the girl. It took only a matter of a seconds before the girl slumped over, only held in her upright
position by the chains that were attached to her bonds.

Scar came to visit the girl and comfort her many times while she was chained to the wall, he even got
permission to be the one to give her the hourly doses of mild sedative, which the girl let him give her.
The sedative was to keep her under control but it was also mixed with another drug that helped minimise
another rage outburst. Scar continued to visit the girl and give her the doses of sedative whilst her
wounds healed and she learnt to control her anger, almost two months later the girl was allowed to
leave the science building, she was taken by scar to her new home.

"Scar, what happened to me in the lab ?"
"What do you mean?"
"I remember getting the pulse but not completely becoming unconscious, and I remember running through
the halls. Nothing else. But I can remember everything afterwards."
"You had an outburst of rage. Yautja learn to control their rage when they're young but you hadn't learnt
how to yet and so when the scientists finally managed to make you lose it you had such a rage that they
let a hound onto you!"
"Oh...ya know what really set me off was that I spent my birthday in a cell getting knocked unconscious
and pumped full of drugs."
"I don't blame you for doing it you know"
"What?"
"If I had been in your position I would have done what you did, especially since that would have been my
birthday to."
"Oh. And thanks for visiting me while I was all chained up...I...I needed someone to help me stay sane."
"Your welcome. Now lets stop with this sad stuff and get you clothed in some proper yautja clothing."
"Like what?"
"Leather, animal skins and some fabrics to cover up where the sub don't shine, your feet and to protect
your hands."
"Oh. Ok"
And so Scar led the girl to the clothing store and selected an outfit consisting of a pair of thin fitted
pants and a crop top type thing made from leather and animal skins/fur. Also she had a pair of leather
fingerless gloves, a pair of leather boots with thick rubber soles and an armband made of twisted leather
with fur and feathers in it. Then the pair continued on their way toward the girls new house.

The two yautja walked past the last street before entering a large clearing, in the far side of that
clearing was a small house. It had a very simple look to it, rectangular, slightly pointed roof,
fence around it. Door.
"is that it over there?"
"yep."
"how come it's so far away from the other homes?"
"because youll like it better, and also you won't be constantly going on hunting trips or to work."
"okay...."
"oh yeah just be careful when you go in the forest there is a Xenoc in there."
"and a Xenoc is what exactly?"
"you should know you came up with it."
"so what your saying is that you created the xenomorph cat hybrid that I drew?"
"well not exactly, technically your cat decided to come here with you...Oscar is it?"
"WHAT!!! You turned my cat into a hybrid creature?!"
"not exactly we created a suitable body for him that suited our world....but he escaped and fled to
the forest, and every time we try to catch him we come back empty handed"
"well then you don't know much do you. Get me a whistle."
Scar handed her his whistle.
"watch this."
The girl whistled a five part tune.
"and that does what exactly."
"5...4...3...2...1"
The giant hybrid cat leapt out of the undergrowth and landed in front of the girl.
"holly shi...."
"hello my darling, how are you?"
"how did you do that?"
"Oscar is my darling boy, he knows his mummy AND to come when he's called."
"how did we not know this information?"scar muttered to himself.
The two continued to walk toward the house, all the time with the Xenoc Oscar following the girl happily.

"so this is it, home sweet home."
"you like?"
"it's....interesting." the girl said as she walked through the door that Scar held open.
"Interesting good or interesting bad?"
"Interesting....interesting...."
"Is that bad?"
"Ahhhhh....I dunno...."
"Your sooooo helpful"
"I know right."
"Well anyway, apart from interesting what do you think?"
"It's nice....I guess....I like the view though the glass wall thingy."
"Thought you like that. You can go hunting in the forest once you've got your weapons. But I must
worn you that forest isn't well known and many yautja have ventured in and never returned."
"Don't worry I won't be doing to much hunting for a while."
"Why?"
"You mean you don't know about my ribs?"
"No..."
"I was a very unpopular child, got bashed a couple times. Year 3 was just a few punches and a headlock,
year 4 was a full on bashing tackled put in a headlock, punched in the gut and chest, thrown on the floor
and kicked in the ribs till the cows come home as well as getting my jaw out out of place on a separate
occasion. Year 7 punched and kicked a couple times, oh and then there was year 8! Same people from years 3
and 4 got me again punched kicked and chased down the street with a dagger! Since year 4 my ribs have been
hell, year 8 was hell in term 3. My best friend izzy ruptured her spleen and was out of action for the
rest I the year and then I got bashed again and was in living hell, then later on we did athletics and I
again injured my ribs that turned out to be fractured."
"And you kept going....your not normal, I can't believe they didn't know this when they added your DNA to
the yautjas.They didn't even check."
"You guys need to think before you do. Your worse than me!"
"What? It's not our fault you hide your emotions! How were we to know ?"
"Oh, I don't know maybe watch your monitors more often!"
"How'd you know about that! Who gave you this information?!"
the girl didn't answer. She wasn't going to keep fueling this fight, instead the girl inspected the house
fully as Scar went about explaining the different types of game that filled the forest. No sooner had they
gotten comfy watching a hunt on the T.V. like monitor was it time for Scar to leave.
"Why do you have to go?"
"I've go to go and check up at the science building a well as update the experiment files and then go and
prepare the next batch of Xenos for the younglings."
"Ok. Bye then....night."
"Cya tomorrow Nuori."
"Nuori?"
"It's your name, I wasn't meant to tell you until tomorrow when you get your blades, but I figured you
deserve to know it."
"Cool, I have a name now!"
"Well goodnight again"
"Night Scar"

Nuori turned off the monitor and sat watching the blank screen for a long time with Oscar curled up
beside her before deciding that shed better get some sleep and so she went to bed. It was around 3am
earth time when the knocking woke her up, it took a minute for her to process where she was but soon was
back to pondering over the sound. Oscar sat on the end of the bed, his legs hanging of either side, fully
alert and ready to pounce.
"What's up Bosc?"
The Xenoc stared at her, probably wondering why on earth she would ask such a dumb question. But Nuori
seemed to get down sort of message from the stare and said "we'll you don't have to be sarcastic"
She then got up and walked stealthily to the main room where the glass wall was. She peered through the
glass at the face of the other yautja standing outside her house. She was startled and took a few
steps back but again walked right up to the glass and stared intently at the face of the other yautja.
He was taller that Scar, had more horrific scars, was leaner and had less armour. Who was this yautja?
He looked familiar.. She decided to go and find out.

The cool night air washed over her as she left the house and trailed around the corner to where
the other yautja stood watching her.
As she approached she called to him. "Who are you, and why are you here. Speak your name!"
He replied with "my name is Jahn. I am an outcast and I came to see you."
Nuori froze. An outcast! The other name given to bad bloods! And one was here to see her?
"What do you want with me?"
"Firstly I want to know your name, I know the first blood has given it to you. Secondly i want you
to come with me to a place in the forest where we an talk without fear of wandering eyes."
"My name is Nuori, but how did you know that he had told me?"
"You said so in your night mumblings."
"Oh......where is this place in the forest?"
"My hunting camp, now please Nuori follow me."
Nuori followed Jahn through the forest taking mental notes of her surroundings and observing Jahn.
He had a limp most likely caused by whatever the wound was that he had bound with a scrap of leather
now bright green due to the amount if blood seeping out of the wound.
When at last the two arrived at the hunting camp Jahn was limping badly and leaning heavily on the
makeshift cane he had fashioned out of a branch on the way.
"What happened to your leg Jahn? Can I have a look at it?"
"I...was attacked...by a guard....when I tried to...take some scraps of food...from the bins...at the
cafeteria." He said through clenched teeth.
"Here I'll take a look" Nuori carefully unwrapped the temporary dressing and gasped at the severity of
the wound. The end of a spear was lodged deep in his leg. It went almost to the bone and had severed
at least 2 arteries.
"I need to take the spear head out"
"Please Nuori leave it I can see a healer at the main camp. I need you to pay attention and listen to
what I have to say."
"But..."
"Nuori!"
"Ok. What is it?"
"The scientists at the lab aren't satisfied with how the switch turned out. They think that you have
kept to many of your human traits and the new information of your rib injury has rattled them all.
They are most likely going to call you back today and will examine you some more to decide whether or
not eliminate you. You need to go straight to the armoury and get your weapons, then meet scar and get
your blades. Once this is done put on all your armour and equip yourself with the necessary weapons
needed to survive. If and when they call you back to the lab make a run to the forest and head here.
The camp will be gone but I will leave a marker here for you. Make sure you lose anyone who trails
you on your way here and bring Oscar with you, he knows his way here. You must hurry though there
won't be much time if they figure out your intentions and send guards after you. Please don't take
this as a joke Nuori, you aren't someone that we can afford to lose. Our spies inside the facility
have watched you since you were brought into the facility and put into suspended animation. They kept
the scientists from losing interest in the experiment and they made sure that every time an Eldar stood
against the experiment that it wasn't terminated. Don't disappoint us Nuori, your still the girl you
were when we first met you back on earth, don't change yourself for them."
"I...I can't believe it....they actually hate me already....what is wrong with me?! Why do I make enemies
so quickly?"
"They don't hate you, they're scared of you. So scared in fact that they can't make clear decisions about
what to do."
"Jahn"
"Yes Nuori"
"Were you the one that I met back on earth?"
"Yes, I didn't think you'd remember. The scientists tried to get rid of all your memories except
those of your friends and main personality defining experiences."
"They aren't very clever those scientists. They can't get rid of who a person is let alone one that
is living hell. See you later Jahn"
"Goodbye Nuori."
Nuori smiled evilly and slipped away running swiftly through the dimly lit forest toward the armoury,
not only did she have to equip herself with weapons and armour she also had to gather as much Mutt armour
as she could to tinker around with so that Oscar could have his own armour. The evil smile was still
spread across her face as she sped into the town and entered the armoury.

"Hello Nuori"
"Oh...ahh...umm hi Scar"
"What are you doing her?" Scar asked
"I was...umm...I came to get my armour and weapons." Nuori replied.
"Ahhh I see, I wondered when you'd show up."
"Why are you here Scar?"
"I needed some new armour, I went on a hunt whilst you were in your cell and it got wrecked,
I thought I had enough spare pieces but I was wrong"
"Oh"
"You look like you've had a rough night Nuori..."
"What? How?"
"You've got scratches all over you, your practically blood green."
Nuori looked herself over, she WAS blood green. Every part of her was scratched and scraped.
"What happened?"
"I...went for a run last night...and this morning....in the forest....toooo...erm check out the game..."
"Cool, anything out there worth getting as a trophy?"
"Not really."
"You want your blades?"
"YES OF COURSE I WANT THEM!"
"We'll you've gotta decide how they'll look."
"Can I make them?"
"Umm...I..I guess you could...I spose"
"AWSOME! Give me a crash course in blade work."
"Alright...you can make your bio as well...and armour if you really want."
"We'll I guess my day is going to be a busy one then"
Nuori's evil smile again spread across her face at the thought of finally owning her dream armour.

The next 8 hours went by in what felt like minutes as Nuori shaped, engraved, sharpened, pounded and
polished her bio, armour and blades as well as matching armour for Oscar, whom shed called to the
armoury after deciding to start from scratch on his armour. Those that could had come to the armoury
after the few who had come to replace their weapons and armour had spread the word of the mysterious
Youngblood who was talented in armour and weapon making. By the time Nuori was finished with her armour,
blades and bio as well as with Oscars armour and bio she was utterly exhausted having spent almost 9 hours
slaving over the furnace creating the armour that she had dreamed about for years. The crowd of yautja
around her whispered comments and opinions to each other as Nuori put on her armour and assembled her
new gauntlets. Parts of the armour looked as though it were made of scales, other parts were covered
in intricate patters that had been engraved into it. Oscars armour was the same. But without doubt the
stand out feature if their armour was the bio masks, Nuoris was sculpted in the shape of a dragons face.
And Oscars was similar but instead of a dragon his was more like a snake.
The crown of each was adorned with a row of small sharpened horns on either side and each also had large
fang like protrusions coming from the jaw area. The lenses were made of the reflective wing membrane of
a ShunShor which is a dragon like creature that looks like a mix between a crocodile a dragonfly.
The armour was a bright silver with its fine detailing done in variegated blues, purples as greens.
Nuori's wrist blades and Oscars claw extensions resembled the traditional yautja blades but were thinner,
more elongated and were engraved with the images of what their bios resembled along with their names
and a few words that described them. For instance Nuori's blades had a detailed dragon engraved on them
along with her name Nuori and the words evil, devilish, deadly and stealthy. She didn't know it yet
but Nuori was the first yautja to have made armour like this in nearly a millennia.

Just as Jahn had said the guards came to escort her after her armour and weapons were finished
(along with Oscars) Scar had left Nuori at the armoury earlier once he'd finished his new armour
to go and prepare another batch of Xenos, and so didnt know that she was being escorted back to the
science building. When the group escort reached the edge of the clearing near her house Nuori lunged
at the closest guard leaving a deep gouge in his face, then sprinted into the forest with Oscar hot
at her heels. It was the second time since being a yautja that she had been chased down like this,
only now she had armour and weapons to protect herself as we'll as Oscar whom she was thinking of renaming
Os'aya'khar which meant he who is the demons son in an ancient version of the yautja's language.

Nuori and Oscar ran silently through the lush forest, the guards not so silently catching up to them.
"Hey bosk, BIRD!!."
Oscar disappeared up a tree and Nuori slowed her pace. The guards caught up.
"Youngblood I demand that you stop immediately or we will be forced to use any means necessary to
neutralise you." The lead guard shouted to her as he and his squad approached the now slowing girl.
"Why? Why should I stop? I know where your going to take me I know what will happen. So tell me why
should I stop? But no matter what you say or do I will keep runnin' till I drop."
The lead guard wasn't happy with this response and was filled with a rising anger, he replied with.
"So be it. You chose to be difficult. You chose to meet the consequences." And with that he radioed
in with the science building and asked for a group of hounds to be acquired immediately.

Nuori picked up her pace again, she had made her position clear to the guards and the scientist in
charge of her attempted capture. She wove through the now incredibly dense vegetation as an attempt
to lose her trailers, she succeeded momentarily until they switched their bios to heat seeking mode.
But this didn't matter as Nuori could see the tree that Oscar was now in, he had been following the
chase from the tree tops after finding and catching the prey that he had been asked to retrieve.
The two met eyes and once again the evil smile spread across Nuoris face.

The lead guard watched as his prey escaped whilst the branches above him snapped and plummeted to the
ground, some guards were trapped in the chaos others fled. The ShunShor descended. It's bloodcurdling
cries echoing trough the forest as it began to attack the fleeing guards. The Xenoc had taken its young
and led the monster here to create a diversion so that the two could get away amid the havoc, a clever
plan but not that difficult to pull off. He noted it down as he fled to try and find his prey once again.
The Youngblood was intelligent but the scientists knew heaps about her, her weaknesses, her strengths,
her responses to situations.


Well thats it currently PLEASE SEND ME IDEAS!!! or sadly this story will go nowhere :(
 

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Felconer

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Not bad draft, you have created quite a different but interesting story good job

Can't wait to read when its finished ;-)
 

Davisa16

New Member
Thanks, I've changed a lot of it around and will probably repost soon. I've written more of the story to but I need to rewrote bits and pieces to make it all fit in. :) I didt actually think anyone would bother reading this my stories are usually thought of as retarded :)
 

BoSkarr

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Sounds like Avatar, how the body is grown with human and Na'vi DNA.
Interesting plot. I can't wait to read more.
 

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BoSkarr

Well-Known Member
Hmmmm......
Now it sounds like she is going to the Dark Side. LOL.
Very interestng.
I like the discription of her armor.
 

Davisa16

New Member
Yes it does doesn't it :p she's meant to be kind of an experiment gone wrong (kinda like Justin bieber XD no offence to Justin bieber fans) I let one of my friends read it before I started this topic, he said that she sounded to goody goody and that she needed some bad blood in her. I liked the idea and so second/kinda third time around i made her more evil }:) hopefully with what I'm thinking of doing with the story it'll all turn out good :) Nuori is also my huntresses name for when I suit up :p the armour that I described is what I'd really like to make once I can track down the supplies needed my simple armour at the moment doesn't cut it -_-
 

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Felconer

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yet again good work, i just think that you need to be a little more descriptive when the Nuori is describing the scenery, I also had a little trouble keeping up with who was talking ie: when Nuori and Scar are talking there is nothing to fill in the reader on who is saying the sentence, other wise FANTASTIC JOB! will be waiting for more.
 

Davisa16

New Member
Thanks for the feedback :) I will be doing more editing tonight (as I always do ) ill put in heaps more description and who's saying what :)
 

Davisa16

New Member
updates hopefully onight have started exams :( ahhhrrrrggg!!! HATE EXAMS!!! havent had much time to work on it. ive also been stuck at the doctors of late.....kinda accidentally fractured a couple ribs :p whoops!
 

Felconer

New Member
Ohhh exams fun stuff. Lol hope your ok, how do you fracture ribs without knowing? i fell of a 3 meter fence and landed ribs first on a plank of wood, that hurt like FLIPPING HELL! didnt fracture or brake anything lol
 

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BoSkarr

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I had AZAC's and blueprint and benchmark testing last week.
Fell 12 feet out of a dead tree, landed on my back, got the wind knocked out of me. Was worried about my hat(it got stuck on a limb on the way down).
Now you almost have something in common with Nuori.LOL
 

Davisa16

New Member
haha you guys :p i didnt know i fractured them because i have good pain tolerence (i can be full on punched in le face and feel nothing) sooo yeeeaahhh....
i got em kicked in by some dumbasses that now have injuries :p heheheee yeah ive added to the story now...kinda broke my new computer 2nd day i had it...IM PRONE TO DISASTER!! re posting story now xD

haha the story in the story about le bashing is true unfortunately :(  although at le time i just altered it to have fractured ribs to add to the story, then i found out i did fracture them and was like "DA **** IS THIS!!!! lol it was awkward...."
 

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