cboath
Master Member
Clearly, this thing was not well thought out ahead of time or RJ wouldn't have tossed most of the stuff JJ started.
If they planned out anything, they clearly didn't do enough. Say, there is a ghost dark sider behind the scenes pulling the strings. Great. Should have been introduced well before 9. If this was about closing the skywalker saga (which it has not been), then you need to focus on that in the actual movies. You can't just say 'we planned it because we but in the art of book'. 99% of your audience won't see that book. If it's part of the plan it needs foreshadowed earlier on. Otherwise - even if planned - it comes off as just pulling it out of your @#$ as the last second.
These are things that are set in outlines if you have a set plan you're working from as both would be major points that have to be raised and resolved.
Don't go comparing it to the OT either. That was very different. ANH was made not knowing if they'd ever get to do another one so there wasn't really anything left in the air that need resolved. This is part of what makes 8 not that great as a middle piece. It hasn't left anything to resolve really. It's like ROTS, the bad guys won (ish in this case) and that's the end. There is nothing that has to be resolved from the ST in 9. The only hanging plot point, really, is what happens in a final fight between Rey/Kylo and she's already basically 2-0. She won in TFA and technically, if you knock each other out and one wakes up before the other one enough to steal a ship and escape, they could have offed the other beforehand as well.
If you structure a 3-film story, you want to raise issues in 1 that are resolved there but more that aren't. Issues that going into 2 and get resolved in 3. They've failed to do that. Rey hasn't lost to kylo yet, so there's no excitement for a 3rd round. The first order runs more like the keystone kops with the way they have Hux screaming way over the top seemingly all the time. Seeing as the knights are supposedly back, they should have been brought in in 8. Again, the vast majority of the audience doesn't obsess over this stuff. The Knights of Ren was a throwaway line in 7. Half the audience at least likely won't remember it for 9.
For all the defense, the next set of three (whether it's a trilogy is still unknown i think) is being done by the same people. The next one after that is supposedly all RJ. Putting three different people in charge of what's supposed to be a single set isn't the way to go. You want a coherent vision and a coherent story that follows all the way through. JJ has also said a number of things were tossed by RJ he wanted to build on so he has to go another way in 9. Planning fail. It all smacks of a lack of coherent plan. RJ clearly didn't like the direction JJ wanted to go. That, in and of itself, is fine. but he seemingly had unilateral power to flat out change the course which isn't a good thing. If you're going to do that, you better make a vastly superior product and he did not.
If they planned out anything, they clearly didn't do enough. Say, there is a ghost dark sider behind the scenes pulling the strings. Great. Should have been introduced well before 9. If this was about closing the skywalker saga (which it has not been), then you need to focus on that in the actual movies. You can't just say 'we planned it because we but in the art of book'. 99% of your audience won't see that book. If it's part of the plan it needs foreshadowed earlier on. Otherwise - even if planned - it comes off as just pulling it out of your @#$ as the last second.
These are things that are set in outlines if you have a set plan you're working from as both would be major points that have to be raised and resolved.
Don't go comparing it to the OT either. That was very different. ANH was made not knowing if they'd ever get to do another one so there wasn't really anything left in the air that need resolved. This is part of what makes 8 not that great as a middle piece. It hasn't left anything to resolve really. It's like ROTS, the bad guys won (ish in this case) and that's the end. There is nothing that has to be resolved from the ST in 9. The only hanging plot point, really, is what happens in a final fight between Rey/Kylo and she's already basically 2-0. She won in TFA and technically, if you knock each other out and one wakes up before the other one enough to steal a ship and escape, they could have offed the other beforehand as well.
If you structure a 3-film story, you want to raise issues in 1 that are resolved there but more that aren't. Issues that going into 2 and get resolved in 3. They've failed to do that. Rey hasn't lost to kylo yet, so there's no excitement for a 3rd round. The first order runs more like the keystone kops with the way they have Hux screaming way over the top seemingly all the time. Seeing as the knights are supposedly back, they should have been brought in in 8. Again, the vast majority of the audience doesn't obsess over this stuff. The Knights of Ren was a throwaway line in 7. Half the audience at least likely won't remember it for 9.
For all the defense, the next set of three (whether it's a trilogy is still unknown i think) is being done by the same people. The next one after that is supposedly all RJ. Putting three different people in charge of what's supposed to be a single set isn't the way to go. You want a coherent vision and a coherent story that follows all the way through. JJ has also said a number of things were tossed by RJ he wanted to build on so he has to go another way in 9. Planning fail. It all smacks of a lack of coherent plan. RJ clearly didn't like the direction JJ wanted to go. That, in and of itself, is fine. but he seemingly had unilateral power to flat out change the course which isn't a good thing. If you're going to do that, you better make a vastly superior product and he did not.