Solo4114
Master Member
Re: Star Wars Episode VII
I think the real problem is lack of vision other than a few visions. By that, I mean that I think he came up with some cool ideas -- scenes or visuals or whathaveyou -- but he didn't have a coherent vision for how to achieve them. So the story that he started writing ended up being dramatically different from the story he finished writing.
Someone should've reminded Lucas about Chekov's law. What the hell is this prophecy? Why do the Sith want revenge? What is the significance of force ghosts? You can't just introduce crap, show it's important, and not deal with it!! I swear the man would give directions from LA to Boston and never mention any roads. He'd be like "well, you kind of need to drive, see? Except according to Campbell it's the journey. I think Boston's in Pennsylvania. Who are you again?"
Hopefully whomever writes ep vii will have taken a high school creative writing course.
I think the real problem is lack of vision other than a few visions. By that, I mean that I think he came up with some cool ideas -- scenes or visuals or whathaveyou -- but he didn't have a coherent vision for how to achieve them. So the story that he started writing ended up being dramatically different from the story he finished writing.