FMA Edward Elric's State Alchemist Certification [DONE]

[Sandman0077]

Getting back into Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood and I have been wanting to make this for quite some time now. First time making a paper prop, so please be generous with your reviews. Done entirely in Microsoft Paint and GIMP. I kinda like the way the writing came out. Gives it a nice rich handwritten quality to it I think.

Screenshot of the original:

Mine version:

I plan to make some on parchment paper perhaps, but I wanted some reviews first. Accurate? Quality? Etc?

Thanks!

 

[Sandman0077]

A lot of views, but no feedback. Well, anyone??

 

[Piggieh]

I just saw it and i think you've done a good job I have in plans to make Edwards robotic arm, so this can be a good detail to it D

 

[Organic Mechanic]

It looks great! Loved this(these) show(s) and the Manga.

My only real critique would be the redesign of the watermark, but really, you've improved on the original there. :cool :thumbsup

 

[Sandman0077]

It looks great! Loved this(these) show(s) and the Manga.

My only real critique would be the redesign of the watermark, but really, you've improved on the original there. :cool :thumbsup

Agreed, but I wasn't sure if it was just the artists being lazy or what, so I tried to make it more realistic? Is that the word I'm going for? Idk, but thanks for the feedback!

 

[michelmoermans]

This is nitpicking but the horn of the lion watermark comes out on the first line in the original with you it's one line down. Other then that you did a good job, I only have trouble reading what it says but that's the same with te screencap so it'll probably be me

 

[Sandman0077]

This is nitpicking but the horn of the lion watermark comes out on the first line in the original with you it's one line down. Other then that you did a good job, I only have trouble reading what it says but that's the same with te screencap so it'll probably be me

I see what you're saying about the horn. I used a different image which is why.

 

[Balgosa]

It looks pretty good to me.

 

[Sandman0077]

Thanks! Now I just need the watch.

 

[DanielS]

Looks awesome!! Thanks for sharing it

 

[Sandman0077]

No problem! Glad people are liking it.

 

[GardsVision]

This looks amazing and now that i have a great watch i need to print this out as well!

I was just wondering if you had one where the "background" was white so i could just age some paper and print on it.

 

[Sandman0077]

The only other version I have is just the text with a white background. Sorry!

 

[GardsVision]

No worries, still a lovely design Just need to get my hands on a good printer now