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BANE, with little effort or tiring arrives at the scene, he sees the yellow glowing blood splattered on the trees and rocks, ground. he sees the ship, and commands a battle stance , his mini gun cannon slowly slides over his left shoulder, the three green laser beams from his bio located in his right eye socket and also made into the right eye covering on his bio........BANE scans the area, he sees several small predator children murdered, all but two a male and female adolescent preds......he haults his attack , they run to him. they both are ready to fight.............! bane hands the male his hand axe, and the female his sherikens............! they fnd no traces of the humans, or those far away inside the ship............!
the three take the bodies of the younglings back to the family mosuleum where this tale began...........!
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commander: alpha to tango gorup, any sign of these things!? over~
tango leader: not a sign of anything, escept some funky looking plant life, and ancient looking buildings! place is a ghost town ! over~
omega scout: found what looks like a tomb, sacrafocous and all! over~
bravo company lt.: found somethign in sector four, an arena, few rotting corpses, and get this boss, one of them is human! over~
commander: SAY AGAIN, HUMAN! over~
bravo company lt: yes sir, HUMAN! appears to be a male, mid 1908's fatigues, large build, body has been badly decomposed, my guess is about ten years! over~
commander: any tags or markings!? over~
bravo company lt.: looks to be marine corps! no tags, wait found a tattoo of some kind! (turning the body over to read the tattoo.) scanning it now , sir! it looks like it says, mom! over~
commander: (looking to his radio woman) panzy ass sounding tat, for a marine, dont you think hagan!?
toni hagan, radio operator: sir! no sir! you have mom on your left shoulder sir! (looking at him as if she an the commander have had or are in a relationship.)
commander: that's right! (to bravo company lt.) bravo , disregard that last panzy line, sure he was one hellova marine! wrap him up, we'll take him hoe with us! over~
bravo company lt: already in the vacu-body-bag. stranger yet, he's holding one their weapons! what shall i do with it!?over~
commander: detox it, box it, and bring it back to base! over ~ 30 meter spread all weapons off safety, silencers on, scanners on ! let's find these things! (all groups spread out to 30 meters, each one turns on their weapons, and silences them.) their search continues.)
TO BE CONTINUED:
BANE, with little effort or tiring arrives at the scene, he sees the yellow glowing blood splattered on the trees and rocks, ground. he sees the ship, and commands a battle stance , his mini gun cannon slowly slides over his left shoulder, the three green laser beams from his bio located in his right eye socket and also made into the right eye covering on his bio........BANE scans the area, he sees several small predator children murdered, all but two a male and female adolescent preds......he haults his attack , they run to him. they both are ready to fight.............! bane hands the male his hand axe, and the female his sherikens............! they fnd no traces of the humans, or those far away inside the ship............!
the three take the bodies of the younglings back to the family mosuleum where this tale began...........!
CONTINUED:
commander: alpha to tango gorup, any sign of these things!? over~
tango leader: not a sign of anything, escept some funky looking plant life, and ancient looking buildings! place is a ghost town ! over~
omega scout: found what looks like a tomb, sacrafocous and all! over~
bravo company lt.: found somethign in sector four, an arena, few rotting corpses, and get this boss, one of them is human! over~
commander: SAY AGAIN, HUMAN! over~
bravo company lt: yes sir, HUMAN! appears to be a male, mid 1908's fatigues, large build, body has been badly decomposed, my guess is about ten years! over~
commander: any tags or markings!? over~
bravo company lt.: looks to be marine corps! no tags, wait found a tattoo of some kind! (turning the body over to read the tattoo.) scanning it now , sir! it looks like it says, mom! over~
commander: (looking to his radio woman) panzy ass sounding tat, for a marine, dont you think hagan!?
toni hagan, radio operator: sir! no sir! you have mom on your left shoulder sir! (looking at him as if she an the commander have had or are in a relationship.)
commander: that's right! (to bravo company lt.) bravo , disregard that last panzy line, sure he was one hellova marine! wrap him up, we'll take him hoe with us! over~
bravo company lt: already in the vacu-body-bag. stranger yet, he's holding one their weapons! what shall i do with it!?over~
commander: detox it, box it, and bring it back to base! over ~ 30 meter spread all weapons off safety, silencers on, scanners on ! let's find these things! (all groups spread out to 30 meters, each one turns on their weapons, and silences them.) their search continues.)
TO BE CONTINUED:
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COTINUED:
trees swaying in the night air, a camp fire roaring in the center of a small camp, sall opened area in the tree line, six hoses, and two wagons encircl theamp, an older man sits against a tree asleep, twichin as the fliesnibble his neck and face! a woman, and teen aged girl lay in seperate wagons one asleep (the girl) one awake (reading a book) (an ancient book, made from bark, and hand made papyrus, dressed in an acient glothing, medieval looking. across from her, two men in their early 20's stand guard, both semi cLad iN leatHer armor, and boasting small swords at their waists. under the one of the wagons, a man in his earl mid 40's lay Asleep semi clad in hiS lEAtheR pants and tunic, his armor lay near him as he can have it lay. waking up , the oldEr man bY the tree cries out, the demon that makes trophies of man! "my god what was that all about, a dream or nightmare , a vision !" walking to the man uNder the wagon, the woman by herself peers out the canvased wagon and sees the old man walking/running to the other wagon! " morric what is all the excement!?" he wakes the younger man! " wylfebane, wake up, i have had a vision.......we must leave this place at once......!" theyoungerman awakens hitting hishead on the wagon! "father moRric, what in the minds of the ancient's is wrong!? " father morric disstraUght , gittery, frightened, ! "wylfebane, i saw the eyes of the demon. he is coming, we muSt make haste, and LeAVe this haunted wood.!" shaking off the heAd bump, wylfebane tries to calm the cLeric down! grabbing his arms and trying to help control the fear he has foreseen! " damn morric, another bad dream, no more ale befOre bed for you !" "to heLl wth you boy ! i have seen the devil's eyes, felt him near us, we need to leave thiS place now! while we stll have our skinS about us!"
TO BE CONTINUED:
trees swaying in the night air, a camp fire roaring in the center of a small camp, sall opened area in the tree line, six hoses, and two wagons encircl theamp, an older man sits against a tree asleep, twichin as the fliesnibble his neck and face! a woman, and teen aged girl lay in seperate wagons one asleep (the girl) one awake (reading a book) (an ancient book, made from bark, and hand made papyrus, dressed in an acient glothing, medieval looking. across from her, two men in their early 20's stand guard, both semi cLad iN leatHer armor, and boasting small swords at their waists. under the one of the wagons, a man in his earl mid 40's lay Asleep semi clad in hiS lEAtheR pants and tunic, his armor lay near him as he can have it lay. waking up , the oldEr man bY the tree cries out, the demon that makes trophies of man! "my god what was that all about, a dream or nightmare , a vision !" walking to the man uNder the wagon, the woman by herself peers out the canvased wagon and sees the old man walking/running to the other wagon! " morric what is all the excement!?" he wakes the younger man! " wylfebane, wake up, i have had a vision.......we must leave this place at once......!" theyoungerman awakens hitting hishead on the wagon! "father moRric, what in the minds of the ancient's is wrong!? " father morric disstraUght , gittery, frightened, ! "wylfebane, i saw the eyes of the demon. he is coming, we muSt make haste, and LeAVe this haunted wood.!" shaking off the heAd bump, wylfebane tries to calm the cLeric down! grabbing his arms and trying to help control the fear he has foreseen! " damn morric, another bad dream, no more ale befOre bed for you !" "to heLl wth you boy ! i have seen the devil's eyes, felt him near us, we need to leave thiS place now! while we stll have our skinS about us!"
TO BE CONTINUED:
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a BANE thought.......
from a dark and dismal place, a lost predator scout ship, a frozen life form inside, floating aimlessly, and helplessly through the void of space..........
the ship a remnant of one familar to us all,more like an arrow or dart....inside a forgotten but familiar bio, panning from bio down most of chest,more familiarities in the chest armour,the shoulder armour, the gauntlets. everything familiar but forgotten,a warrior/hunter class larger than normal predator.... lies BANE!
a small planetoid ahead of the little pod of a ship, the ships controls come online,the controls on the cosole prep the pod for a landing, a planet see once before another hunt by different predators, and diffrent prey! the hunt pending is one that has coming for centuries..............the sleeping BANE stirs abit only his right hand moves slowly and methodically to his left gauntlet and turns his bio helmet on..........
alienesque trees and terrain...........atmosphere........to apredator's liking..........the pod soft lands..........smoke and hiss appear and sound as the hatch slowly opens.........red and green lights show through the mist from the pods cockpit, a largemuscular claf steps from the pod.......then the other follows........BANE stands there,scoping the area via his bio lenses and his cyborg right eye..........the computer gauntlet beeps, and BANE glances at the holomap which is flashing in the mist of the pods gases..........a wierd sounding whistle is heard in the distance...........wierd dog beats appear to be locked in on BANE.....BANE being BANE ia ready for his opponent's tests and trials.......BANE'S righ hand raises the arm some what cybornetnic, the gauntlet's micro smart disc launcher is fired, BANE doesnt even pay attention to their targets. he camos and leaps into the air as the alien dogs scent his location , from no wherre two of the beasties are slain by the micro smart discs...........
.........a whistle sounds re-calling the alien beast dogs, only one returns...........
........its master a similiar breed as a the bezerker and falconer preds, but different bios, and armour........(to be discussed and described at later point in new bane thought) the other new breeds with the lone beasties master we will call him.......BONES........ a totally albino predator, pinkish eyes, and pinkish ares around his teeth and fangs, and around his finger nails at the qutical areas and toe nails, a brassy,and silverish armour........but pail looking like his skin.........his dreads are longer and all white except the dread rings
the quills are longer and mostly bluiesh with white tint......................he stands wayches for his trained associates return.............
BANE.......smells the albino new breed pred .......and turns his holomap off, and closes his right arm gauntlet, the gauntlet and the micro disc launcher and blades all close into BANE'S some what new cyborg arm, to appear as if it were just a small gauntlet on the forearm..........BANE closes the pod but gathers his weapons he'll use in this savage hunt.............
........the weapons ............(to be described and designed later)............
to be continued:
from a dark and dismal place, a lost predator scout ship, a frozen life form inside, floating aimlessly, and helplessly through the void of space..........
the ship a remnant of one familar to us all,more like an arrow or dart....inside a forgotten but familiar bio, panning from bio down most of chest,more familiarities in the chest armour,the shoulder armour, the gauntlets. everything familiar but forgotten,a warrior/hunter class larger than normal predator.... lies BANE!
a small planetoid ahead of the little pod of a ship, the ships controls come online,the controls on the cosole prep the pod for a landing, a planet see once before another hunt by different predators, and diffrent prey! the hunt pending is one that has coming for centuries..............the sleeping BANE stirs abit only his right hand moves slowly and methodically to his left gauntlet and turns his bio helmet on..........
alienesque trees and terrain...........atmosphere........to apredator's liking..........the pod soft lands..........smoke and hiss appear and sound as the hatch slowly opens.........red and green lights show through the mist from the pods cockpit, a largemuscular claf steps from the pod.......then the other follows........BANE stands there,scoping the area via his bio lenses and his cyborg right eye..........the computer gauntlet beeps, and BANE glances at the holomap which is flashing in the mist of the pods gases..........a wierd sounding whistle is heard in the distance...........wierd dog beats appear to be locked in on BANE.....BANE being BANE ia ready for his opponent's tests and trials.......BANE'S righ hand raises the arm some what cybornetnic, the gauntlet's micro smart disc launcher is fired, BANE doesnt even pay attention to their targets. he camos and leaps into the air as the alien dogs scent his location , from no wherre two of the beasties are slain by the micro smart discs...........
.........a whistle sounds re-calling the alien beast dogs, only one returns...........
........its master a similiar breed as a the bezerker and falconer preds, but different bios, and armour........(to be discussed and described at later point in new bane thought) the other new breeds with the lone beasties master we will call him.......BONES........ a totally albino predator, pinkish eyes, and pinkish ares around his teeth and fangs, and around his finger nails at the qutical areas and toe nails, a brassy,and silverish armour........but pail looking like his skin.........his dreads are longer and all white except the dread rings
the quills are longer and mostly bluiesh with white tint......................he stands wayches for his trained associates return.............
BANE.......smells the albino new breed pred .......and turns his holomap off, and closes his right arm gauntlet, the gauntlet and the micro disc launcher and blades all close into BANE'S some what new cyborg arm, to appear as if it were just a small gauntlet on the forearm..........BANE closes the pod but gathers his weapons he'll use in this savage hunt.............
........the weapons ............(to be described and designed later)............
to be continued:
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continued..........
sincing a presence she hasnt felt in a milliniea.........BONES........sniffs the air, and all the other gases these predators seem to like, as well terrains.......a smell of death, and decay..........of experience .......and victory...........BONES uses he laser scope to hone the weird looking gauntlet blades..........testing them for quickness and sharpness ,being BONES a true monster among preds..........she looks at the hunting beast, pets it on the head, it looks at her as a dog would its master, a sudden yelp and heavy thud can be heard in echo .........BANE hears the yelp, and hones in his cyborg eye's tracking unit........BANE closes in on the yelp.... and continues his hunt.........BONES on the other hand stands from her squatting position when she was petting her beast,s he stands looks all around ........she rasises her right hand, the beast's huge head sits in BONES hand...............tossing it aside as if it never mattered to her........
BANES back and he has a new story to be told one ,surely for the predator books, a true CLASH OF THE TITANS...........a hunt to the end................
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sincing a presence she hasnt felt in a milliniea.........BONES........sniffs the air, and all the other gases these predators seem to like, as well terrains.......a smell of death, and decay..........of experience .......and victory...........BONES uses he laser scope to hone the weird looking gauntlet blades..........testing them for quickness and sharpness ,being BONES a true monster among preds..........she looks at the hunting beast, pets it on the head, it looks at her as a dog would its master, a sudden yelp and heavy thud can be heard in echo .........BANE hears the yelp, and hones in his cyborg eye's tracking unit........BANE closes in on the yelp.... and continues his hunt.........BONES on the other hand stands from her squatting position when she was petting her beast,s he stands looks all around ........she rasises her right hand, the beast's huge head sits in BONES hand...............tossing it aside as if it never mattered to her........
BANES back and he has a new story to be told one ,surely for the predator books, a true CLASH OF THE TITANS...........a hunt to the end................
continue......................................
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continued.........
as the beast's head thuds to the ground BONES stands to attention a slight easement in her stance she twists her head from left to right cracking it .........BANE, cracks his neck also at the very moment, then he opens his left arm gauntlet just under his compunit, in it a vast ary of smaller beasonesque moduals.........Bane loads his micro smart disk launcher, the moduals quickly load up, BANE'S righ cyborg hand fists up, and the arm gauntlet slowly covers the fist, and the shelled looking bio gauntlet becomes a re=coiless power plasma cannon, he launches a modual at an alien tree, the tree silently explodes, but te modual contionues to reak havoc in the area...........impacting in a border , the modual opens,a nano size laser grid opens.........BANE fires in another direcvtion........same effect and result.........BANE fires in a third direction................an arial shotdownwards we see three brightly glowing dots in the familiar triangled pattern...........BANE , runs , then activates the grid. a futuristic version of a snare so to speak............the power plasma arm cannon, still active ......BANEgrids another area, and another.................he stops, and twists his right gauntlet with his left hand (like jesse ventura did in predator when he ****** his mini gun.)................a mondyrtous howl is sounded behind him..............BANE turns and sees some alien transplanted monster..........it snaps its tail at BANE............a small poisonious spike the size of a football.................barely missing BANE'S head, ...........BANE dodges it perfectly............as BANE dodges the spike, he fires the power plasma caster, a mini gun effect. chunks blown off the beast..............the beast attacka once again, just as it is struck dead by BANE'S onslaught...........the attack from the beast fails somewhat. one of the beast's teeth catches BANE'S claf armor.........just a slight scratch or netal tear.........BANE looks at the so called wound..........his right cyborg eye, attentive looking as the apeture of the out eye shell closes,then re-opens as quickly............
to be continued................
as the beast's head thuds to the ground BONES stands to attention a slight easement in her stance she twists her head from left to right cracking it .........BANE, cracks his neck also at the very moment, then he opens his left arm gauntlet just under his compunit, in it a vast ary of smaller beasonesque moduals.........Bane loads his micro smart disk launcher, the moduals quickly load up, BANE'S righ cyborg hand fists up, and the arm gauntlet slowly covers the fist, and the shelled looking bio gauntlet becomes a re=coiless power plasma cannon, he launches a modual at an alien tree, the tree silently explodes, but te modual contionues to reak havoc in the area...........impacting in a border , the modual opens,a nano size laser grid opens.........BANE fires in another direcvtion........same effect and result.........BANE fires in a third direction................an arial shotdownwards we see three brightly glowing dots in the familiar triangled pattern...........BANE , runs , then activates the grid. a futuristic version of a snare so to speak............the power plasma arm cannon, still active ......BANEgrids another area, and another.................he stops, and twists his right gauntlet with his left hand (like jesse ventura did in predator when he ****** his mini gun.)................a mondyrtous howl is sounded behind him..............BANE turns and sees some alien transplanted monster..........it snaps its tail at BANE............a small poisonious spike the size of a football.................barely missing BANE'S head, ...........BANE dodges it perfectly............as BANE dodges the spike, he fires the power plasma caster, a mini gun effect. chunks blown off the beast..............the beast attacka once again, just as it is struck dead by BANE'S onslaught...........the attack from the beast fails somewhat. one of the beast's teeth catches BANE'S claf armor.........just a slight scratch or netal tear.........BANE looks at the so called wound..........his right cyborg eye, attentive looking as the apeture of the out eye shell closes,then re-opens as quickly............
to be continued................
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