Enh... I can semi-agree @
Bryancd. I was barely old enough to even remember seeing Star Wars with my folks the first time, in the theater. I was well and thoroughly hooked by Empire, though, I know that. And
so eager for Jedi I have no words. And I remember, even before the age of ten, that something was off about that last film. It took me years to be able to nail down what all bothered me about it compared to the previous two -- everything from the story to its presentation. I spent a lot of time the years that followed delving deeper into the craft and the real-world genesis and timeline of the Saga, in part to understand how to make movies like that myself, and partly -- from an audience perspective -- to understand what worked, what didn't, and why.
I found out fairly quickly about George and Marcia divorcing between Empire and Jedi, and I got more and more evidence as time went on that she had been George's critical brain through the editing of the first two films -- telling him to leave in things that worked and that the audeince responded to, even if he didn't like them or thought they were reacting the wrong way... and prevailing on him to take out things he thought were great but that fell flat in test screenings. I attribute the burp and fart jokes that have been present from Jedi on to her absence.
I also learned more about the various drafts the scripts went through and who was responsible for what. I miss Leigh Brackett a lot. I seriously appreciate the melding of Irvin Kershner, Larry Kasdan, and the cast to make with Empire a film that was greater than the sum of its parts -- an organic synthesis I wish the other films had. I find it telling that it is most fans' favorite out of the six George had at least a hand in, and the one that George considers the weakest of those six.
I credit George
strongly with being the idea guy, and a
terrific idea guy. He has been at his best when he has a few people to brainstorm, spitball, and generally think out loud with. But he needs skilled storytellers to then bash those ideas into a workable, internally-consistent plot. I
definitely ding him for not being more aware of his weaknesses and finding the right people to shore them up.
I tracked the morphing length of the Saga through his interviews. When Star Wars came out, it was in the middle of a twelve-movie cycle. The latter half we were getting first were From the Adventures of Luke Skywalker, and -- going by his early-early scribbled notes -- the first half, once we got to them, were to be From the Adventures of Obi-Wan Kenobi. By the time he was making Empire, he had decided there was only enough story potential in his background notes for three films and Star Wars retroactively became Episode IV, and the Saga was now to be nine films.
After Empire, he was getting burned out and wanted to do other things, and did Jedi more out of a sense of obligation to not leave the story hanging, but still crammed four films' worth of plot points into one. Then he went on to do things that were more important to him. Like Howard the Duck.
When Rick McCallum came on board to help with the 20th anniversary Special Edition of Star Wars, he coaxed George into doing the Prequels, and also redefined the now-six-film arc to be about the rise, fall, and redemption of Anakin Skywalker -- even though that character had only enough of an arc to be peripheral in the Prequels at best. Obi-Wan was supposed to be the central Hero. But that also
utterly alters the impact of the Original Trilogy. All the revelations are gone. We know Anakin becomes Vader, we know Luke and Leia are twins, we know what Yoda looks like... Now we just spend three films waiting for Our Heroes to catch up with the audience, which is not a good position for an audience to be in.
It's an old industry aphorism that a film is made three times (George's love of tweaking notwithstanding) -- on the page, on the stage, and in the booth. George got into film-making wanting to be an editor. But to control the raw material he got to edit, he felt he needed to control the earlier stages in the process, too, rather than find people who were stronger in those areas (and liked doing them) to work with. I ache sometimes to think how things might have gone if he hadn't burned himself out trying to wear too many hats, had gathered around him a cadre of good writers and directors who got what he was trying to say and show and could deliver, and weren't afraid to tell him when one of his ideas needed to be changed for the sake of the story*.
[*Actually, I had a scriptwriting professor who gave me probably the best advice in this area I'll ever get. "Part of learning how to do this," he said, "is watching what's out there -- what other people have done. And, sadly, there's a lot of [crap] out there. When you notice you've gotten kicked out of the experience, don't just sit there bitching about it. Get a copy of the script and see if you can do better." So far, amongst others, I've rewritten Jedi and the Prequels, and undone what I perceive to be the larger damage done to the Saga and uncompressed things back into twelve films, the first half centering on Obi-Wan, the second on Luke. And everyone I've shown them to thinks they're far, far better than what we actually got.]
So I respect George for having an idea, like Gene Roddenberry. Like Gene, he has his flaws and blind spots. Like Gene, his creation outgrew his sole authority and he never really learned to share with others who might have been able to help. But George's actual attempts at
storytelling, like Gene's, are just kind of... embarrassing. Star Wars worked because of the actors and the production values and visual effects breakthroughs and, let's be honest, because at that time fewer people were familiar with
The Hidden Fortress, and also because he was fresh from a crash course on myth and the Hero's Journey. The story itself is pretty basic, but all of that other stuff lets us ignore that. Empire had to step it up a notch, in complexity, and it delivered. After that, though, things sort of fell flat, and that's mainly because George is an idea man, not a storyteller.
--Jonah