Star Wars: The Force Awakens (Post-release)

If you read the more recent articles with Kasdan and JJ about their collaboration, it comes across much different then that. Read the Rolling Stone piece in particular. They spent weeks breaking out the entire story while taking walks together. Kasdan in particular has said they sort of started from scratch but JJ pointed out they didn't have enough time and they kept those core characters and locations. All of this is in these interviews, FWI. There also was an unsubstiated rumor that JJ almost left the project early and it may have been his unhappiness with the GL/Arendt treatment. But as you say, the eventual making of book will be very interesting!

Lucasfilm CEO Kathleen Kennedy says that while the Force Awakens doesn't follow George Lucas' original treatments for a sequel trilogy, they were an inspiration
"We had discussions based off of George's treatments," she says, "and then when J.J. and Larry came into the process, there were new ideas being discussed, which is normally what would happen in a development process. We didn't have a script, we didn't have an extensive treatment of any kind, so we were still trying to find the story for the movie, so it's not as though something was just read and then set aside, and everybody said, 'Oh, we don't want to do that, we're going to start on this new thing.' Everything emanated from what George had created with the original movies, and then some of the things he was talking about in this brief synopsis. We carried on from there."

And that's exactly what I said. The core characters ,locations and many action set pieces had already been fully conceived and written not to mention sets built. As you quoted JJ said they couldn't start from scratch even though Kasdan wanted to, the bulk of the story treatment had been established and moved into production. Given they say they spent weeks walking around and discussing this, how suddenly , within that six week period, do they then sit down and type out a first script?
No I don't buy it and if you read the Art of TFA you'll understand just how much of this was worked up from so many different peoples ideas, all at Lucasfilm. I think all the talk that, oh look this is a brand new story NOT based on anything George has suggested, was nothing but a bit of PR designed to reassure people that it was nothing like the prequels. Instead of them, just look how much of it is directly based on EVERYTHING George wrote for the OT. Thats the bit I find a bit galling for him particularly. If he had produced what actually was on screen he'd have been savaged beyond belief for exactly retreading his greatest hits.
Thats what feels so unfair about it to me. He and Arndt seem to have been almost written out when infact, from what I've read ( which are more than just a couple of press articles) but based on the on site behind the scenes month by month production of the film nearly all the essential story elements were there. What they may have written around that may have been different was the relationships, JJ says they made the decision to base it more on the emotion beats but that's like redecorating the house more to your tastes than building a brand new one from scratch. Read the Art of SWTFA, it changed so much of what I perceived as happening to what actually did.
 
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But he had the actual location on his map, no? What does R2D2's larger map actually contribute?

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Ok. I can buy the "uncharted regions" argument. That does make sense.



Also, we know that Luke fled to the First Jedi Temple after Ben went all Dark Side, and we know that it was located on an unidentified aquatic planet. Presumably, Luke didn't want the map to fall into the hands of the First Order, as it was one of the few Jedi Temples that weren't destroyed by the Empire, most likely because they didn't know where they were. I'm betting he split the map deliberately so he could be found again by Leia or another Force-sensitive, but also so that if the First Order got ahold of either part of the map, they'd have a long search ahead of them, giving him ample time to escape if need be. The two pieces in R2 and BB8 were split so the mating would be obvious, but the map that the First order had didn't have this split, nor did they even know about the split. If they got R2, they'd still have 10 percent of the galaxy to search. If they got a hold of BB8, they still would have had to match the area to the correct place in the galaxy, which could have taken some time.
 
My family and I went to see TFA for (my) second time. The only new thing I noticed this time around was when Hux has assembled the FO army, the Snowtrooper on the far left is losing his orange pauldron. It's visibly falling off!
 
Ok. I can buy the "uncharted regions" argument. That does make sense.

You were right the first time. It still didn't make sense with a piece that large. We could fit a piece that big in our own Galaxy just using the Hubble and they've been able to cross their entire Galaxy for at least four generations or more.


Thing is, it's actually WRITTEN ok. A small piece could be impossible to find lost in a galaxy without context.

It's not a writing mistake, it's an art mistake: they made the piece WAY too big in proportion.
 
So, there are a number of things that should be made more clear.

I was reading a Huff post article on 40 things wrong with the film, blah blah blah, and felt that some things should be clarified.

1. Finn: He worked a sanitation detail! It was just that, a detail. Doesn't mean he was only ever a janitor. He clearly displayed some skills to pay the Imperial bills.

2. Why did Finn defect during this key moment of slaughter? Perhaps that was the straw that broke the camels back. Maybe he's done some shiesty deeds, but never as bad as killing innocents.

3. HOW DID HUX FIND REN??? Advanced scanners I'm sure.

4. HOW DID HAN FIND THE FALCON? I believe he said he had a Garmin or TomTom on board, don't quote me though.
 
You were right the first time. It still didn't make sense with a piece that large. We could fit a piece that big in our own Galaxy just using the Hubble and they've been able to cross their entire Galaxy for at least four generations or more.


Thing is, it's actually WRITTEN ok. A small piece could be impossible to find lost in a galaxy without context.

It's not a writing mistake, it's an art mistake: they made the piece WAY too big in proportion.

Well, when you take into account the travel times and distances involved, even having BB8s map would mean that they would have a pretty decent journey ahead of them. Plenty of time for Luke to book it out of there.

2. Why did Finn defect during this key moment of slaughter? Perhaps that was the straw that broke the camels back. Maybe he's done some shiesty deeds, but never as bad as killing innocents.

This was his first military action. The death of his squadmate really hit him, as he had helped him all through training to his own detriment, and then the complete slaughter of the innocent villagers didn't help. He knew his goose was cooked when Phasma told him to surrender his weapon for inspection. It would show to have fired exactly zero shots.

4. HOW DID HAN FIND THE FALCON? I believe he said he had a Garmin or TomTom on board, don't quote me though.

He'd been looking for it for years, trying to track down its signal. The fact that it was grounded and hadn't flown in years meant that no signal had been coming out. As soon as Rey flipped the power switch, Han got a bead on the Falcon and moved to intercept to take his baby back.
 
I'm expecting my first kid -- a daughter -- in early March. I always looked forward to showing her the (original) Original Trilogy, but I'm really excited to show her this new film, too, whenever she's old enough to handle it. I love the notion that there's a character like Rey for her to relate to.

Dan, my daughter is 20 months old - whenever she sees the Star Wars logo, a trailer, or even Clone Wars, she points and says, "STAH WAHS!!!" - melts the heart every single time ;)
 
As shown in the film, the maps parts are keyed into each other. When they are opened together in close juxtaposition , they mesh the smaller area into it's place in the larger Galactic map like a correct piece in a Jigsaw Puzzle. This kind of thing can be accomplished with software images today, why wouldn't it be possible in a Galaxy Far, Far Away?

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My Scottie dog, Mandy, howls when the Theme comes on the TV. Either she likes it, or something in the tones irritate her! I get goosebumps when I hear it.
 
So, there are a number of things that should be made more clear.

I was reading a Huff post article on 40 things wrong with the film, blah blah blah, and felt that some things should be clarified.

1. Finn: He worked a sanitation detail! It was just that, a detail. Doesn't mean he was only ever a janitor. He clearly displayed some skills to pay the Imperial bills.

2. Why did Finn defect during this key moment of slaughter? Perhaps that was the straw that broke the camels back. Maybe he's done some shiesty deeds, but never as bad as killing innocents.

3. HOW DID HUX FIND REN??? Advanced scanners I'm sure.

4. HOW DID HAN FIND THE FALCON? I believe he said he had a Garmin or TomTom on board, don't quote me though.

Yeah. I didn't have problems with any of that either.

Storm troopers are probably like any military, and a grunt could end up working any number of odd unrelated details during their career.

Also, for all we know this was his first real battle. Either way, this is hardly the first movie to show a soldier decide "f this" when they see some combat. Apparently, it happens.

And as Mad said: falcon was dormant. He found it once they turned it on. I just assume he had the Corellian version of find my phone.
 
Dan, my daughter is 20 months old - whenever she sees the Star Wars logo, a trailer, or even Clone Wars, she points and says, "STAH WAHS!!!" - melts the heart every single time ;)
Yeah, my two year old boy is addicted to the accapella jimmy Fallon star wars theme.

And my 4 year old daughter just took a toy falcon to school for show and tell.

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Interesting, but I don't think it would have played well with the audience. After all, Ep 1-3 was about the Fall of Anakin Skywalker and 4-6 was about the Redemption of Anakin Skywalker. To show him as part Vader would have cheapened the redemption story.

George can say 4-6 is about the redemption of vader all he wants, doesn't make it true.

There was nothing in 4 about the redemption. Period. It was all Vader killing people and being a general bad ass - nothing wrong with that.
You could argue the same thing about 5, too. Any misgivings there might have been were not present. Join me and defeat the emporer or I will kill you. Luke opts to jump off the tower. Nothing about redemption there.
6, ok, you can make the argument. Luke tells him from their first encounter he thinks he can return. Vader says too late for me son, only to flip when the emperor is about to kill him. Regardless, 6 is not about that, it's a subplot, and the plot is the rebels defeating the empire for what we though was for good.

I still don't see how saving your son from being grilled to death lets you become a good side guy again. He only killed what? millions? Saving your kid wipes that out? This is why i say the hope is not lost for Ren...if vader is allowed to come back - anyone can.
 
If you read the more recent articles with Kasdan and JJ about their collaboration, it comes across much different then that. Read the Rolling Stone piece in particular. They spent weeks breaking out the entire story while taking walks together. Kasdan in particular has said they sort of started from scratch but JJ pointed out they didn't have enough time and they kept those core characters and locations. All of this is in these interviews, FWI. There also was an unsubstiated rumor that JJ almost left the project early and it may have been his unhappiness with the GL/Arendt treatment. But as you say, the eventual making of book will be very interesting!

Lucasfilm CEO Kathleen Kennedy says that while the Force Awakens doesn't follow George Lucas' original treatments for a sequel trilogy, they were an inspiration
"We had discussions based off of George's treatments," she says, "and then when J.J. and Larry came into the process, there were new ideas being discussed, which is normally what would happen in a development process. We didn't have a script, we didn't have an extensive treatment of any kind, so we were still trying to find the story for the movie, so it's not as though something was just read and then set aside, and everybody said, 'Oh, we don't want to do that, we're going to start on this new thing.' Everything emanated from what George had created with the original movies, and then some of the things he was talking about in this brief synopsis. We carried on from there."

I think the real question is one of quantity, almost. Like, saying "We based it on George's outline" is ultimately meaningless unless you know how detailed George's outline was, and how much they based on it vs. how much they deviated from it. At a guess, George's outline probably was pretty spare, and/or the amount they took from it was fairly spare. I'll be curious to find out the Arendt vs. JJ/Kasdan contributions, though.

George can say 4-6 is about the redemption of vader all he wants, doesn't make it true.

There was nothing in 4 about the redemption. Period. It was all Vader killing people and being a general bad ass - nothing wrong with that.
You could argue the same thing about 5, too. Any misgivings there might have been were not present. Join me and defeat the emporer or I will kill you. Luke opts to jump off the tower. Nothing about redemption there.
6, ok, you can make the argument. Luke tells him from their first encounter he thinks he can return. Vader says too late for me son, only to flip when the emperor is about to kill him. Regardless, 6 is not about that, it's a subplot, and the plot is the rebels defeating the empire for what we though was for good.

I still don't see how saving your son from being grilled to death lets you become a good side guy again. He only killed what? millions? Saving your kid wipes that out? This is why i say the hope is not lost for Ren...if vader is allowed to come back - anyone can.

I think it's a question of redemption vs. repentance. Is Vader redeemed? Well, that depends on who decides the question. I would argue that, in his son's eyes, yes, he's redeemed. In the eyes of, say, surviving Alderaanians? Yeah, maybe not.

Does Vader repent of his previous evil? That, I think, is pretty clear. He absolutely does.


When it comes to Kylo Ren, I think they're already laying the foundation for him being conflicted. He killed his father, likely killed a group of Jedi students, killed or ordered the deaths of dozens of innocents, but can he be redeemed? I don't know. He can certainly repent, though.


Another thing I noticed was the emphasis on how the division between light and dark seems...not quite as stark as the previous films have made it. When Rey fights Kylo Ren, it's clear she's fighting with anger. Does that mean she'll succumb to the dark side forever? I doubt it. Likewise, Kylo Ren struggles with his own desire to embrace the light, to be good again, and absolutely struggles to kill his father. We still don't know his motivations, but I would bet there's a deal of self-loathing involved.

Anyway, I kind of wonder if Luke will ultimately teach Rey that there must always be a balance to the Force, and that there can be no light without dark, and vice versa. Also, that Luke would ultimately reject the absolutist views of the old Jedi Order -- where anger, fear, hate, aggression were all just "The dark side, full stop," and must be banished from one's emotional compass at all costs. It's alright to feel these things, but the ultimate difference is what one chooses to do in response to those feelings. So, Rey can let herself feel anger in her fight against Kylo Ren, but she's gotta know when to stop short of killing him, rather than just blindly giving in to her anger. It's not that "these emotions are bad," but rather, acting selfishly especially when based on these emotions is bad behavior, which will lead to a cycle of self-hatred that is ultimately redirected outwards at the galaxy, indiscriminately, a la what we see Kylo Ren do.
 
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The Visual Dictionary shows this cut scene:

[h=4]Snowtroopers on the Falcon[/h]This scene you'd have found not long after the point at which the Millennium Falcon does its dive unto the Starkiller Base planet - as you'll have seen in the later trailers.

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