BANE'S back story

[BANE]

a short back story of the yautja/predator known as BANE

Name: WYLFEBANE, “BANE” for short

Age:2404

Gender: Male

Physical description: 7 feet 8 inches tall, a beefy 400 lbs(very lean and muscular), right eye has been torn out and in its place a partial face plate which is bolted to bane's upper jaw, and forehead area, has beige/white, and medium to dark grey dreads, dark fleshy skin tone, various shades of browns, grey and black spots, markings resemble a eastern diamond back rattle snake, bane suffered the loss of his right eye at the hands of his older brother during a pit/arena challenge. Bane also sports other facial and body scarring. Some of Bane's dreads are upswept into a small pointed ball giving him the samurai look. Usually wears leather loin clothes made from passed kills. has his name tattooed on upper right side of head in the Yautja tribal markings. Hands are gloved, and his feet are , sandaled for mild hunts or hot climates.

Weapons: wrist blades, smart disc, combi-stick, net cannon, Sheri ken ( not counted ceremonial dagger),his favorite weapon would be his hand axe, which has a unique look to it, as does most of the other weapons Bane employees, each of his weapons are of an ancient nature and look, on his bio helmet , hanging along the outer rim from temple to temple, is a decorative chains which at a glance look like his dreadlocks, as for his dreadlocks each one has at three dread beads on them, indicating a kill from his passed hunts, each bead symbolizes the prey/species Bane has hunted, some dread beads are more a human and or xenomorph nature.

Equipment: bio helmet with clear plasteel center head cover, so you can see bane’s head markings, as well his tat. bio is a silvery overall color except for clear section, goldish/copperish highlights, minigun plasma caster (not to be used yet) backpack, medikit, and skull cleaning gizmo. Left lower main fang is gold plated with scrimshaw markings in it.

Personal item(s): father's neck ring, has some various bead work on it, also wears mother's skeletal finger, he snapped off her after her death, he skinned and cleaned and polished the finger bones, (note his mother was killed in his early years.)

Personality: a loner mentality, bit of jokester around younglings on their first hunts, bane usually plays around with the kill, making the younglings jump some. loyal to his clan. a fighter, has scars to prove it.

History: as a child bane and his brother were fighting as siblings would and do, started as a training fight started by their father, sometime after bane's mother was killed in a long forgotten hunt, bane was there, also where some of his scarring came from, but his main scarring came from his brother, bane's brother in a grab and tare of desperation (bane was winning) bane's right eye and some of the flesh from his head was torn out and off, another unseen scar bane wears is from a nasty kick from again his brother, the claws of the feet tore some of the flesh from the chest and to the bone, a gapping wound, now covered by a cybernetic chest plate only for covering the wound as well a connecting point for his armor.
leg armor, shoulder armor, booted feet armor, gloves, chain whip( to use later on)

Bane, a forgotten warrior from a passed AVP warring, has a training compound on a tropical textured planetoid, where he trains youngling preds, and just about to come of age pred teens, preparing them for their first hunt, some will return pred adults, some will never return at all from their hunts. Bane is as brutal in the youngling training as he is a cut-up with the older preds.

Bane is also known as the scourge, the curse,, causes ruin, or misery. do to his nature.

 

[YAUJA WARRIOR]

wow now thats a story
got any pics of u as pred XD?

 

[BANE]

sorry no pix of me as pred, the back story and the armature and some weapons are all i have so far! for some reason i can't get the colors to work out right in my pc's paint shop everytime i try to color the body the color i selected it comes out grey or dark grey everytime. i am using the templates of the raw predator body and the varuos versions of the pred head, everything i shows up okay , like i said main problem is getting the colors to work right. i'll figure it out eventually, i hope,lol! anyways, thanks glad you like the back story. can't wait to read your prad's back story. or any of the rest of the hunters in here.

 

[YAUJA WARRIOR]

lol
idk i mostly paint at paper
dont rlly paint at pc

 

[BANE]

i figured it out, old pc paint was out of date, so i just updated, now i just have to figure that out, and use it the way i want ,lol!

 

[BANE]

so far these are the colors bane is suppose to be at least in the back story above. colors are based on this little snake.

 

[theman123]

cool paint up kinda looks like ms paint but probably not.
you've got quiet a backstory going too.

 

[BANE]

thanks, the paint is advanced paint shop not sure where exactly i got it but was a free download.

 

[theman123]

thanks, the paint is advanced paint shop not sure where exactly i got it but was a free download.

ok thanks for that ill have a look around.

 

[BANE]

the advanced paint shop i have,has oodles of stuff to figure out, i'm still trying to work it all out in my mind. good luck in your search.

 

[BANE]

a BANE story:

"THE PIT"


Mid-day, hot and steamy, the sun high in the home world sky, the atmosphere some what dense with higher carbons and hydogens, a perfect day. Home world buildings gleaming in the sun.distant noises, sounds of cheers, and roars of vitory. a tunnel slightly lit by the glaring sun, dark , blackened the further it is walked! The tunnel starts to brighten at the other end, the cheers and roars get louder, a stench of dead carcusses, an festering wounds fill the immediate are.

A distant area of this loud and festring place layed a pile a various bodies, a few can be identified, couple look to be human, but the pile is thick and deep , only an arm or two can be truly seen by the gathered crowd, other corpses laying in the deep pile look to be xenomorph bodies, and a few criminal element predators, these bodies can only be seen inbits and peices. in the center of the pit, the sun glares inward and illuminates the center area only, leaving a shaded ten to fifteen fet from the walls and out croppings. The roars and cheers slowly become a quiet un heard noise, the sounding of rattled metal awkens the cheers once again, it stops! A sounding of thuds, the surrounding patrons stomp their feet ! aAfigure emerges from the shadow, the crowd cheers louder than ever, then stops abruptly and hisses are heard the figure standing in the center of the pit, is a slightly armored captured human, an orndinary man, his weapon a predtaor based flail. as if that will help him any! tensely he stands awaiting what he knows to be his demise, no doubt a bloody one!

Roars and clciking are made by the crowd....In the upper seat above the pit, cenetred location giving a a simple view of the entire areana floor, six predators enter each in casual dress, no weapons or armor, just their loin clothes, and sandals, and dress gauntlets, no wristvlades, their dreads up-swept and with varying decrative beading, the six of them stand around a throne looking stone chair! Enters a large slinder built femminie figure, very athleticly built, a pailed skined greyish spots, dreads of a pearl color, with decrative beads all over each one of them, a blood/maroon colored wrap around dragging the floor length cape, and dressed in her leather warrior garments, she sits and is attended to by the six preds that entered earlier. The human sees this and runs towards this boxed seat, the six attending preds surround her and are battle ready , even with no armor. He suddenly stops, and decides it's not worth getting killed for what looks to be a weak roayl figure. he drops his flail. his head hanging low he walks into what feels like a wall. and is knocked tohis backside. The human backs up as he sees the invisble wall slowly fade, as the camo fades the human scoots backwards trying to get to the flail...he see what now appears clearly to him, one of these alien creatures... a monsterous predator!

Standing before the crowd and his queen, tilting his head to the right, he see the small man( an average sized man of 175 lbs or more), this predator shakes his head and laughs, he looks to the queen, she nods her head as to start the battle, this monsterous predator turns to the crowd, the cheers and roars explode and are heard for miles around.

The human speaks....."this is gonna hurt, and hurt badly!" the predator before the human hears the man talk, he turns and goes into his let's fight pose, and roars fiercely, and intently, as to tell the human you're stealing my thunder!

The fighting preadtor runs towards the human, quickly reacting the human rolls out of the path of the charging beheomoth. and the human hits the predator in the left knee, with the jolt the predator trips. and the human charges!

In her throned seat the femme predator sees this and reacts her eyes widen and she can be seen getting into this first lick of the fight, she is impressed with the human so far! A weapon from the shadows lands at the human's feet, a pred dagger!
running for the dagger, he is thwarted by the monster he tripped earlier, the monster back hands the man and sends him flying back some 20 feet, he almost lands on the pile of corpses, steaming and stinking from the hot sun. the dagger still laying where it was thrown. The fight goes back and forth like this for at least 15 minutes,the human at his highest exhausted self now holding the dagger he makes his final attack, leaping /diving to the monster he stabs the montser pred in the thigh,then ripping the blade from the wound, tearing bone and sinue and a chuck of thigh meat, the predator roars in agony!

The human stands and kicks the predator in the helmet, which knocks it off! he then runs for the bio and the injured predator tries to stand but from nowhere the human smashes the bio into the predator's head cracking his skull open, the predator twitches but still manages to stand woozy and wobblely, the queen excited and impressed with the battle, stands and looks to the crowd, the crowd goes crazy! making a hand gesture, they quiet, from the distant tunnel a raspy old roar is heard! the queen sits, nods to the human, then she closes her hand making a quick fist, the human reacts and takes the bio and with his remaining stength he splits the predator's head into halves. the predator slowly drops to his knees, and the dead carcuss falling with a heave thud to the arena floor, green glowing blood shoots upward and then covers the back of the predator"s head! The queen awards the bio to the human, and the crowd hisses and displeased raors are heard. The queen sits back down and leans to one of her guardsmen, he runs from the throne!

"so who's next!" an exhausted and wierry voice is heard from the human!

On the other side of the pit/arena where the one roar was sounded from! the man hears the ratle of metal, and the thuding foot steps of something huge!

The queen singals by nodding her head, from no where an invisble hand knocks the man hard int the closest wall to them,in the sunny center of the pit a figure emerges from the sahows , the man staggers and makes his way to the same location , just a few feet from another monster,this predator de-cloaks, and looks at the dead predator a few feet from his right, he does a challenge pose, squating and opening his arms, the two walk in circle in the center of the pit, the human knows he is beat, he drops the dagger, and the bio, backing up from the predator before him, he stops then willfully stands his ground begins to get alittle cockier than before,

This second predator sees the human not baking down.

the monster predator looks to the queen, then to the crowd, then back to the human! The preadtor un plugs his bio, then with both hands he wraps them around the front of bio ( bio description, at a glance, the right eye seems to be covered, a make shift patch has been bolted to it, as the predator pulls it from his face the bolted on eye patch stays on the pred's face, and an opening is left behind on the bio.) the reveal shows an old war monger predator, scarred and battered, the tusks are larger than most predator's and they have an alien scrimshaw art work carved into themthe horns and brow have rings of various design peirced into them, some the dreads have been ripped away, and in their stead are a chain design , which also has beads, the neck ring highly beaded, and tatered, a deep black predator tattoo marks the right upper head, as the predator drops his bio to the ground very noticable and different bio, the upper head covering is clear steel which shows off the head art of this pred, the armor is similar to the P1 armor, the left arm has some sort of funky exo skeleton surrounding the outer arm, and also looks to be imbedded under the skin, the left eye is haunting medium/dark green, with a small pupil. the predator looks at the floor, and slowly raises his head, looks at the human, pausing slightly then goes into the pose, then the raspy roar is heard as the predator opens screams it out to the human. the sun dimming some the colors can be seen (look to the coloring book pages above.) .

Returning the roar and and challenge stance the human tries to copy and intimidate the pred.(yeah right) the monster stops the crouching ,stands straight and looks at the man and raises his left brow, as to say this human is nuts. but a welcome challenge. both man and predator run towards one another then leap into the air, surprisingly from the shadows a xenomorph is let loose into the mix. Hitting the predator and slamming him hard into the pit floor, the man tries to atack the xenomorph! A large alien hand smacks the man and rips his skin severely, a tail whip slashes the predator's chest, the whip cuts the leather strap that is used as a necklace, and the skeletal finger that was attached hits the dirt and rocks. in a pissed off look the pred makes his attack, grabing the alien's tail the pred swings it into the pile, the man runa and tries to attack the pred. in a returning counter blow, the man is knocked to the ground.

Hissing and striking with its tail and inner jaw/mandibal the predator is wounded again, but is also pissed off, with a squeeze of his fist a rather different and somewhat nasty looking set of wrist baldes spring forth, not only do the normal two blades spring to life but a single blade opens from the top of the guantlet, and on both sides of the gauntlet two more blades open all in an outward fanning motion, the predator slashes and cuts the tip off the alien, and with another squeeze the top wristblade is ejected, and while in the air the predator jumps and spin grabbing the blad, which now becomes a hand axe. the same instance the pred feels the hand axe in his hand he throws it at the xenomorph's head, the attack cuts the alien's head in half, but cant be seen until the hand axe returns to the hand from which it was thrown, as the pred closes his hand around the axe ,the alien's head splits apart. The human recovered from his injuries from the alin's smack, he throws the dagger he retreived while the beasts were battling, the dagger hits the predator in the shoulder, just as quickly he rips it out and returns it to the human, the dagger quickly finds its home, striking the man in the left temple, killing him instantly. the crowd goes wild, and the queen and her court leave abruptly, dread rings and beads are thrown to the winner, walking to the location where the finger was taken from his neck, the predator sifts through the sand and finds the finger! the walks to the human and takes the head and back bone, and then he lets out a victorious roar!

The crowd dying down , the predator walks and picks his bio up and returns it to his head! thriugh the bio a set of clicks are heard, showing his respect for the human who showed great potential , he lays the dagger on the man's dead chest he then leaves.

A memory of BANE.............

 

[BANE]

a BANE story:

UNFORGIVEN !

An un-named planetoid in deep space, a hig carbon low oxygen atmoshpere.... tropical looking with alien plant life.


In orbit a large weirdly shape craft slowly crosses the heavens....four small torpedo shaped pods streak the skies....on lands off to itself, three land in close proxcimety to one another. they open unknowing the first and lone tube has opened ,nothing inside it, the occupant already on his hunt.

The gathered three, recon the area, and begin their own hunt....the tallest of the three is a female, the others are male, each abit shorter than the female, not really noticable, each of the three are dressed in a tropical hunt , sandals, shoulder and body armor, loin clothes, bios, their selected weapons, the basics, wristblades, a dagger, either a smart disc or sherikens, a plasma caster, back pack.....the single entity is also dressed for a tropical climate, leather and chain mail loin cloth, sandals, bio, shoulder and body armor, this pred's colors are an antiqued copper and gold look, textured in areas, and smoothe and rounded in others, small dread designed chains hanging from the bio's rim, a bulky bolted on eye patch on the right side of the bio the eye of the bio has a purplish /greenish hue almost changing in the light 9 a chromalusion affect.) some dreds have been ripped away from the remaining ones, and a distinctive looking chain dangles from these ripped dreds. the dreds are longer than usual, an up swept in the top back, the armor distinct in it own .

the first weapon is drawn, the single pred pulls a hand axe from his back belt, in a distant alien tree , a nasty looking insect scurries for cover, the insect approximately 20 feet long and 4 feet in diameter, the single predator with his right hand readies a throw, before he hurls it at the insect, he thumbs a hidden button on the handle, he frees it, as it closes in on the insect it opens one blade, then another, three blades located at 120 degrees from each other on their widest points, all connected to the one central spring loaded shaft. A buzzing noise is heard as the tri-axe cuts into the insect, then quietly it returns to the hand that threw it, and closed as the hand grasps it, back to the holster on the belt and back armor.

Walking by the obliterated carcuss of the insect the lone pred cloaks.

The trio also encounter a small heard of alien horse creatures....these horse looking creatures are scared off, by what, unknmown , the smallest of the three is mortally wounded, a rather large sliver of wood has impaled his head....he didnt know what hit him....the second male preapes for the immenant attack of whatever it is, the female also prepares herself....
a rhinosurous looking creature charges it almost looks like a alien porcupine, shootiing poisonous quills at it victims, the first pred that was impaled is now becoming food...the beast is eating it by large bites tearing rather large chunkfrom the body.

The second male roars loudly, distracting the beast, it turns, the second male cloaks leaving the female pred visible....as the beast scratches at the ground snorts, and begins its charge, the female predator stands her ground, poses and roars, the beast closes its distance to her.....she reaches to her back and pulls out what seems to be a combi stick, the beast closes more distance, she squeezes the handle both ends open and arch towards herover her left shoulder she pulls an arrow, it looks like a straightened backbone of some alien creature from a passed hunt, the distance is closed further a few feet seperate them, the female pred releases the arrow.....with the strength she showed in her arms, the power and speed of the arrow makes its introduction to the beast's head,, the arrow hits with such force it splits the beast's skull, and tears away some of the backbone, at that same instance the bow is returned to her backpack.....the second male pred de-cloaks, laughs in that predator haaaa! the two stand by the fal;en predator, they look at each other, and both cloak, and leave him there, and disappear into the alien jungle. afew hours have passed, the lone predator finds the felled predator, he squats down , and scavages the deceased, he takes everything he can use in his hunt....the lone pred pulls the dead pred's combi stick and opens it, then stabs into the ground..... he returns to the bodyand preapres for return to the mother ship....he takes the bio secures it to his belt.....from nowhere your friendly neighborhood xenomorph silently tracks the lone predator....and another, and another, a small pride of xenos encompass the lone pred....swiftly a net gun is pulled and fired to the right of the predator, capturing a struggling xeno, it tightens and cuts into the acid bleeding alien, until it has completely diced the beast....another xeno leaps for the lone pred, a smart disc is hurled at the xeno.....another attacks, and another,all small weapons used up, the lone predator reacts only way he knows how, his plasma caster......not one plasma bolt at a time but a consistent pulse of bolts are fired, most of the xenos take multiple hits (a minigun affect), two attack the predator....the first is decapited by a pulse blast from the left gauntlet of the predator, an explosion of alien hide and sinue, as well the spraying acid blood...the second xeno has actually accomplshed a body hit on the lone predator, the alien's tail in the predator's left arm (upper should area), his arm is limp but he manages to throw the xeno into an alien tree, the xeno stunnned.... the lone predator looks rather pissedoff by his psoturing.the xeno hisses and poses as well....it begins its charge at the lone predator, the wristblades are heard chinging as they open your normal pair of blades spring open, and two more on the side of the guantlet opens, and a single one opens on the top, this one can be removed, the lone predator waist for the xeno to makes its move, as it does so, the lone predator takes the single wristblade/axe and impales the xeno through the abdomen... another tail strike and another arm impaling same arm lower on the forearm....rolling to the combi stick the lone pred takes it rams it through the mouth of the xeno, some acid is released onto some of the armor, the lone predator hurls the beast into an opened area, the xeno stubborn stil advances, as it does the lone predator unloads his plasma min on the beast, simply tearand ripping it to peices........

The two predators now some miles away, they hear the roars of their comrade, but they continue their hunt!the female predator is attacked and severely wounded....the attacker unseen.......but the wounds were made by a plasma caster....the male predator is also attacked,the attacker decloaks, and the male predator is confronted by a rouge predatora larger predator.....an adavanced hunter.....an albino colored predator, greyish pale spots, armored. a high tech looking bio, nothing like the ones seen worn by the originsal four preds....without warning the younger smaller predator is impaled through the chin and out the top of his bio by the new predator's wristblades, he retracts them and makes his way to the female predator....she draws her bow and shoots this pred a couple times, this just pisses it off.....the larger male predator returns to the impaled predator's head, with his sword, this rouge pred seperates the head from its body, and with the dreds in hand it raises the head and roars victorious......the female predator shoots her bow again missing, the rouge fires his plasmacaster at her, no roar of pain, but a roar that sounds so familar to this rouge......the plasma bolt hits the first lone predator's trophy the first feeled predator's bio.

Rouge predator turns, and sees his old nemesis, the female predator watches as she tends her wounds.....the lone pred takes the tubes off his mask..... and takes it from his head, revealing the patched eye, and a nasty looking expression on the face.....the rouge predator fires his plasma caster at the lone pred.....bad idea! the lone pred's left arm wounded and useless, the rouge sees this and attacks again....the plasma bolt tears off chunks of the arm , but the lone predator, looks at the rouge is that all you got....the lone predator's plasma mini caster is just a click away from being deployed.......

The female predator fires her plasma caster at the rouge hitting his armor, and knocking him to his backside. the lone pred attacks the rouge, pulling the tri hand axe from his belt , he thumbs the button and hurls it at the rouge! seeing it coming he rolls out of the way.......this just leads to his own demise as he stands the tri-axe cuts through his back and one of the axe heads penatrates the rouges chest outwardly, a feirce painful screach and roar can be heard for what seems like miles....the rouge still has some life left in him, the lone pred goes over and drags the female predator to the rouge.....the lone predator walks off......the female predator takes her dagger and cuts the beastly head of the rouge predator off just above the neck rings.......she roars victoriously! T lone predator at the same time doctors his severely wounded arm, and the screams and roars of both predtors are heard for miles, as they had faded into one another!!!!!

 

[BANE]

a BANE story:

THE REASON FOR BANE !

.......Coming of age, right of passage. A hunt, a hunt not unlike any other right of passage hunt, this one, only having two yautja/predators. brothers, one slightly older than the other, one wanting the universe the other wanting a crown, a crown he will never wear, a title he will never be bestoed.....power and the universe.........

........Earth....... the hunt begins for these brothers, their mission to collect as many human heads as they can carry!

The numbers are close in their counts, each brother scowering the land for heads and weaponary, at least for of the brothers, it's the weapons one has that he collects. two alien crates marked in the yautja alphbet filled to capacity, one has his heads, the other heads and weapons.

Cloaked, and afoot, both hunters encompass a fuedal castle, one on each side, a war has raged the land for many days and nights, the ground glows crimson in the night's moon, un-aware of their families or their comrades, the well armored figures walking their perimeters, and standing at their posts. the lords and their families assleep in the castle........A courtyard, gaurds hear the thudding of something heavy and large walking through, amazed and afraid they begin to attack this demon..........the other side of the castle entering a room in a keep.... guards on alert and search the halls for a demon, any demon! Nothing! the guards scatter back to their posts, but are relunctant to go, for an alarm is being called out by the guards in the court yard!

Approaching soldiers and guards make their way to the court yard, but it isn't the way they saw it last.......piles of clothes,and armor lay scattered in different locations of the court yard......one sinle small man finds the bodies, skinned and danglling in a baracks, he backwardly walks , bumpinto a solid but invisible wall......an undisclosed number of guardsmen and soldier dangle upside down in th room! M eatl springing to life, the cloak turned off, the reveal a monster, the soldier dead before he could sound off! thrown into the room, a large gloved alien hand tears into the soldier's bodyand with a nasty sounding tear of flesh and sinue, the cracking and snapping of bones, a single jerk and the spinl column and skull are freed from their earthly host! the cloak turned back on, and the hunter disappears......!

Singular and beatiful, a young woman walks the halls of the keep/house... the gaurds close behind her....she pays them no mind.......one by one they turn up missing.......stopping trying to hear their footsteps, she hears nothing, but a devilish growl and a slight clicking noise. looking side to side and continuing her walk, she enters a room, beautiful ornate armor standing sisde by side, weapons abound, each sword rack has three beatuifully crafted swords, and spears, the cloaked figure de-cloaks, the girl ses the beast/demon, she draws a sword, the predator looks at her as if to say, yeah right! the girl knowledgable with the sword she attacks, the predator stands his ground, she blows a powder into its face, she then slices into the body of the predator........with a mighty back hand the girl is launched across the room, crashing through the armor, and paper walls, landing at the feet of the armor her father had worn before he was killed in the war. on the wall a bow, and a quiver of arrows. The girls most proficient weapon she loads the arow, takes her aim, anddraws the string, tension is heard building in the string of the bow,a thud is heard and a fast whisper, then a nasty roar of pain!

Cleaning the heads , and stowing them in the crates, he takes some from his brother's crate more than enough to prove he is the victor of this hunt.!

Hearing his brother"s roar and sqcream of pain he does the right thing and goes to help! taking a spiked ball from his pouch the courtyard predator has arrived at the location of the scream, he had used the locator in his bio. the younger ogf the two predators hurt and inb pain, three more arrows penatrate his armor and body, glowing green blood sprays the room, and hitting the girl's face, stunned she drops the bow.....wiping the green blood from her eyes, she now sees another demon.......reaching weirred for a crashed sword she stands her ground..... the keep predator pulls the arrows from his wounded body, targets the girl, three little red dots are seen on her shoulder by the court yard pedator, seeing this he re-acts to the keep predator......the girl runs from the room, sword still in hand, a bluish white light poofs from the shoulder cannon, the plasma bolt hits the girl in the bak, her chest explodes outwardly, she falls fast and hard with a some what of a slide as she was running, the momentum carried her through the fall....!

Spiked ball still in hand, a chain and handle are seen now, the keep predator injured, no one around to say other wise if the humans had killed him or not, the oldest of the two attacks with the mace the strike hits the youngest predator squarely in the chest, breaking bone, and tearing away meat, as well some of the broken bones, the keep predator re-talliates and fires the plaster caster the bolt hits flush and sends the oldest to the floor... the youngest limps to his fallen brother, looks down at him and fires the plasma caster once again, the bolt tears through the bio, and out the back of the head.....in serious pain, the youngest predator tries to attend his wounds. the screams and roars fill the halls of the castle, no one to hear them. headless bodies all around, and skinned bodies danglling here and there......!

Exiting the keep, into the courtyard, the youngest predator carrying his brother's bio ,looks for his crate, unknown to him, nothing in his crate except rocks, and a few weapons and armor peices of the period!

from nowhere several yautja/predators de-cloak around the younger predator, the elder looks to him as to say you're not worthy of my mark or seat in my house!The bio is taken from him and he is disgraced.....he carries his crate to the ship, he walks away to a remote location , opens the crate, stands there for a silent few seconds, then he lets out his war roar and hissing scream.......in front of him lay the body of the girl who fought so dillegently and bravely, a place of honor was givien her!

this is BANE........

 

[ancientpredator]

He Bane
Good story a realy good story. I don't know if you have read my first draft. It's about the predator warlord Ita Do or nicknamed Skullcrusher.
His favourite weapon is a club and his 2 weapon is a huge axe.
Your story and mine are fitting closely together. Mine is about 3 brothers in arms which had their first hunt in the time that dino's where on earth. Also they used cryo chambers when they have to stay a long while in hybernation. Also a pred queen is leader of the ancient world.
And the 3 bro's which are already elders go after many years of practice on differentr planets (for Skullhunter who was the smallest a small island on earth was his training place..Japan..)
And after a long and grueling battle on a special toxic planet the winer would become warlord of the predators..the highest rank..his real name..was never metioned..only his nickname was known...Skullcrusher..

See ya

 

[BANE]

thanks for the compliments, and sorry no i haven't read your story yest, sounds good, may look it over in a few. also the story entitled , reason for bane, also takes place in fuefal japan, i just didnt want to blurt it out, i wanted you guys' imagainations place bane there, as well fill in the colors and smells of all the hunts, treees, plant life in general, or the various beasties we preds have and will hunt. and mounted on outr trophy wall(s). i would love to read more comments of bane's life from all of you that read this back story(s). anayways again thanks for the compliments along with the side by side simularities bewteen our stories. i've always heard great minds think alike.

 

[BANE]

a BANE story.....

THE SCOUGRE........

On home world, a small gathering of predator elders, watch as the returning ship lands,and the dead bodies of the female elder and the small japanese girl are carried to a place of honor, cleaned and displayed, an inportant and high ranking elder this female was the child and honorable warrior that will never lnow her future.....The gathered elders, and clan members from all over home world, come to pay their respects.the oldest male predator follows his sister to the veiwing,who has become her clan's elder, the third, Bane is nowhere to be found. twilight , the gathered have scattered back to their homes, he enters the viewing area, he bows his head for his fallen mother.......He takes off his bio, and lays it beside her, turning to the child he snarls, and clicks his tusks, a muffled growl can be heard, looking around, seeing nothing or no one around, he places a hand made bone axe in the child's hand showing her respect enough to honor her abilities as a warrior. Bane leaves!

Morning of the creamation........All gather that were there the day prior, all but one! Bane enters with his sister, the new elder/queen of their clan, the oldest brother around anywhere......The elders come to see the cremation, they notice somethigns different from the night before, the child's body had been further mutilated and strewn around the room.....this is seen as the curtains are pulled opne to reveil the cremation chamber........the female elder's body not where it was the night before as Bnae left it..........The bio Bnae placed by his mother is all that remains.

The new female elder, roars, calling the ceromonial guard to arrest Bnae, a fight insues and three of guards are brutalized by the young predator......His older brother enters the chamber, clicks and roars are hear from him, challenging Bane, the high elder stops the cremation and conveighs court.........both brothers are put on trial!


the sister,elder of Bane's clan knows he is innocent, and efends him......the older brother is humiliated by this action and reasoning, he attacks her ! cComing to her defense Bane attacks his brother, in doing so, a mortal wound is inflicted to his sister, and a gapping wound tears from the chest of his brother.......as he falls bane takes his wrist blades and thrusts them into the throat/chin area the blade tips exit the top of the brother's head, instant death........the high elders, witnestt this, and instantly banish Bane from homeworld, but to be a big part of the training the younglings will endure! Bnae picks up his mother's bio, looks at it, turns and walks away, the guards try to stop him, but the high elder stops them and lets Bane leave........! Leave he does, gathering all that belonged to his mother and sister, as well his brother, he takes with him.......cryosleep tubes are in the background of his medium cruiser BANE alseep inside!


Many years and decades later, centuries in fact have passed, the medium ship in an orbit of a tropical planet, a hunting tube lay open and against a rock wall, inside a cave......decorated like his homeworld lodgings, one wall in particular stands out, on it bios , his mothers, sisters and even his brothers, a small one also on the wall, hand forged by bane for the small girl.............various weapons, and alien skulls , from ceiling to floor, a foge is seen at the entrancxe of the cave, on the alienesque anvil a bio , Bane reaches for it as he puts it on we see his face, a large plate is bolted to his brow, with three bolts , he places the bio on his face, the bio made to incorprate the eye plate once the bio is on and the hoses are locked in, the eye patch fits the bio so perfectly, it looks as if it is part of the bio.......some of BANE'S dreads have been torn away, and replacing the torn away dread peices are small predator designed chains, like an alien queen would be bound by, but smaller and scaled down, various marking on the bio's rim, the center skull area of the bio is claer made of plasteel a tatto has been self cut and can be seen . along with the aray of scars and markings from wounds and hunts he has encountered on this tropical world........

this is why BANE is the way he is....................

a BANE story..........!

 

[BANE]

A BANE STORY..............

"el diablo's caster"

sifting through the burned out rain forest of south america where two great warriors collided, nothing around ,maybe some scavaging animals, vultures, dogs, various wild life. a figure squated sifts through the debrit, a wild dog approaches, snarling and growling, the figure turns, flashes its two redish eyes, (BANE'S bio visor color) the dog attacks, without breaking his consintration, the figure looks at the dog, turns his head, the plasma caster on his left shoulder turns and blasts the dog, as the dog explodes in a bloody mess another attacks, the figure uses his wrist blades, as the dog pounces, the figure rips through the cacass, the small scuffle frees a metalic object.

picking the object up, the figure clears the dirt and muck from the object, he sees it was once a bio helmet, slowly swiping his finger across the brow, he laughs a predator laugh, hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! the figurte leaves and disappears into the jungle.

in the jungle another find, this more intact, this object ressembles a busted plasma caster, and a backpack, BANE gathers it up and disappears deeper into the jungle........at the small ship , BANE tilts his head side to side, cracking his neck, he pulls the metalic tubes from his bio, and removes it slowly covering it with both hands, and a slight tug and it's removed, fiddling with a console to his right, he hooks a usb looking plu to to bio from the console, the annnalysis is completed, the first object is a bio helmet, some 20 years in the burned out jungle.........the ship's computer transfers images from the busted up bio..........bane looks at the monitor with great interest, he sees a weapon of great power, being weilded by a muscular man , the booney cap 's brim folded up on the right side, a sleeveless black t-shirt but the focus is the weapon the man is carrying, bane isolates the footage, and fiddles with the console slider buttons. an image is constructed by the computer, BANE is pleased with what he sees.......a vicious/ smug snarl appears on his right mandible, the eye plate very prominate in the scene, once more the laugh, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! BANE speaks, imitating the voice that was recorded on the bio's memory chip. "WHAT........THE........HELL..........ARE...........YOU!!!!!!????
as this mighty pld predator talks to the ship's monitor.


going to the back of the ship BANE goes through some cargo crates, he pulls out a few plasma casters, small ones more suited for the younglings he would usually train. as he plunders his own cargo crates, the screen shot on the monitor is a shoulder mounted micro min igun plasma caster..........................noises are heard by passing animals, they scury away, afew animals remain near the ship, being cloaked the animals have no idea what is there. few days and countless testing hours , the BANE prototype caster is completed............

.........existing the ship, as it un-c;oaks, unsuspectedly the gathered animals all stop and look towards the the beast before them. as quickly the predator fires the plasma mini gun at the animal targets, each blast simply obliderates the targets........! satisfied with his creation BANE returns inside the ship puts the bio on the wall next the back pack, and various animal skulls..................and afew human skulls he found in the burned out jungle.


hours later, in a small jungle village......some children are playing, their parents call them home, because it's getting dark. a brother and sister are playing in the front of the small building, if it is that. in the tree tops some meters and yards away, BANE watches them play, he laughs to himself.

the father comes outside and forcably makes the children come inside, the father pulls his belt and hit the girl, the brother tries to stop him.......seeing this bane lets out a feiroucious roar, heard throughout the jungle and village, the father stops, hitting the girl, then turns his attention to the boy, he back hands him, knocking him to the ground, as the father goes to kick the boy the little girl bites him (really not their father)(their mother's boyfriend, and drunk) the father kicks the girl sending her into the air, he proceeds to the boy, but listening for the girl to hit the ground......... she never did, being held in a ghostly hand, the flash of red eyes and a clicking from the tusks. the father begins to beat the boy with his fist, the last punch is stopped by the same ghostly hand................hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! the ghost speaks YOU'RE........ONE...........UGLY............MO..........! shots richochet off the ghost, sparks and comp noises cause the camoflauge to fail...........BANE fiddles with his arm comp, the cloaking is turned off , the little girl goes and helps her brother........the father runs to the villagers with the guns, a smart disc is pulled from his back, the villagers not knowing what this thing is or what the beast is about to do with it. a discuss hurl and the smart disc does its job, quickly and gore filled, siz shooting villagers are cut down to peices.......the father picks up a machine gun and fires, BANE is hit several times, but being BANE the shots only piss him off.........! the boy and girl run across the road as the father fires the gun, BANE'S eyes widen then he attacks once more. not with the conventional predator weapons but his hand axes, the little boy is shot, wounded severely, thelittle girl tries to help him with no avale, BANE see the boy fall, and the girl helping him, the father runs to the boy and kicks at his limp body........without predjusteBANE un-loads his mini-gun caster, in slow motion chucks are seen blown off the father, large through holes are visible, the man's head is seperated from his shoulders with BANE'S badass hand axe, the man is cleaved and the plasma caster turns white hot on the ends as the beast destroys the remainder of the body, a large puddle of blood, sinue, only recognizable body parts, are the father's lower legs, still in a walking position and still in his raggedy shoes.............................the beast turns to the wounded child,checking him for life, a breath is heard by the sister, BANE pushes her slightly away, and picks the boy up and leaves through the trees..................afew days later the boy is sitting in the middle of the burned out jungle, holding a trophy, his sister finds him, the wounds were healed, and the sister looks at the trophy the boy is holding, he is seen from the back we have no clue what the trophy is, until he stands and hands it to her........the refirbished bio BANE had found in the begining.

a BANE STORY............

 

[BANE]

A BANE STORY......

BLOODTEETH.........

on a wall we see various skull trophies, alien and human alike, other various trophies include armor from the roman empire, chest armor, helmets, swords, gladiator wear. one particular skull looks to be man made, though it has human features, it also has some varying odds and end machined peices, a flat crown on the misfit skull, a couple of l braquets which hild the flat of the crown to the forehead, the skull also oddly sized eye sockets one normal size, the other abit larger, part of the spinal cord is machined, from a time long since vanished. the skull in question also sports two freakishly placed what looks to be bolts on the lower neck, the mouth is mis-matched and the teeth are also out of place.....

another trophy skull an oddity in an upon itself, a large dog looking skull, with human features, some of the teeth are missing, and have been seen on the neck ring that is prominately placed on the wall.......in a vile seemingly in a hoover holds two small teeth, but larger than normal , pointy , old and gorey.

another trophy wall holds the displayed battered and amcient samurai armor, a helmet here, a chest peaice there, several suit of scattered, also displayed a perfectly honed and tuned katana, wakashashi, and tanto, an esquisite sight, also scattered in and amongst the samurai equipment, are bits and peices from the american indians, a cheif's head dress, a warrior"s beaded chest armor, and most prominate are four scalps, banded and feathered as if they were in a war party or hunting party...........also a few select weapons, arrows, and arrow heads, long and short bows, one spear, BANE looks at this spear intently, as he remembers it peircing his left shoulder as he claimed the warrior's life that impaled him.........a tilt of the head to the right, clicking of the left upper and lower mandibles, a twitch in the right brow, is seen just above the eye plate. BANE looks at the healed shoulder, then walks to a small one predator ship, launching, the dust some what disturbed, and the breeze from the blast gently moves through the trphy area, the feathers flkutter, and the beads rattle!


a warning alarm sounds through the small ship, a visual comes across the view screen, a brief message scrools across the screen from top to bottom, in varying spectrums of color, the message states a rouge bull predator has turned up on earth, and that any predators in the vacinity apprihend or take as a trophy this bull.

on earth , the rouge bull predator terrorizes a a community, taking whatever trophy he can, from anything that is worthy of being a trophy the onslaught continues, days have passed, the city's law enforcement bewildered by the deaths, and mayhem, people missing, that shouldn't be missing, body parts torn away as if they were a paper doll......the bul rouge rests atop a ledge of a building, he sees the streak in the sky, and the sonic boom the re-entry sounded off, as the bull rouge looks at the streak he tilts his head, we can see one of the trophies he has made into a neck ring decoration, a rosery, and crusifix he toke from an elderly preist that body was prominately displayed on the iron wors fence outside the church mangled and thrashed...... the cross and rosery jiggle nd dangle from the neckring!


the number of dead soars to mid to high double digits........... can this bull rouge be stopped!


the bull rouge predator watches the small craft plumit to earth, from a distance he prepares himself, honing his blades, and watching the small craft crash through an abondoned building.......the ship's hatch opens, a rather large, and armored figure emerges, cloaked of course, looking around the area, BANE hears what sounds like heavy metal playing, he quickly turns his head in the direction of the noise(to him anyways so far) he sees a boom box blasting, he opens his nasty wrist blades, an swipes the boom box, , before he destroyed it he recorded the song that was playing, a rather pissed man runs and attacks the nothingness, and is quickly dispatched, BaNE repaets the words the man was yelling "F'''''R"! BANE disappears down a dark blackened alley, the small ship cloaks and looks like a pile of rubble. BANE flashes to his bio helmet's recorder, and replays a few words of the song that was playing, he plays it until he has memorized the words.....

LET....LET....
THE.... BODIES....
HIT.... THE......FLOOR......

BANE sniffs around and finds trace ammounts of the bull rouge's scent, double checking the area for pred dna, he finds a scale imbedded in a crack in the wall, the sample peice is placed in BANE'S arm computer, and the reading appears quickly in BANE'S visor.......the visor depicts a small gun fight with thugs and the rouge, no bodies, no mess, BANE repeats the phrase again.....'*****r"!

dark stret corner, the ladies are out waking in drves, one walks off byhersef......the other ladiestry to keep her with them.

walking out a viewing distance, a large carg van hurries by the hooke, stops, and acoule guys pul her into the van........in th bent light ca, a lare ghostly shape watches ll ts from the roof top of a sleazy no tell hotel......the ghst lazzes the van, and as it drives out of sight the ghostly imae follows , not worrying if it is ost, the lazzing will help him rack it down............!


along the way, the ghostly image lp and stretches througte city........hearing loud noises, the ghost stops, n wtches a shoot out between couple of cops, and sme robbers........intesed the ghost gets closer to investigate.......on of the cops see hree green dots on his partner's badge. Mikey lokout man, you'vebeen marked, seeing the dots, the cop(mikey) thanks it came from the robbers he fires, taking of the crooks down, the shot ht the robber in the right brow area, in slow motion the got watches the shell bounce around inside the skul, and exit thgh he ack of the skull, lving a rather arg hole, h robber drops to his knees and falls flat on his face, the bullet ricochets and hit the ghost in thebio area, (mikey sees the blueish sparks appear rom nowhre, and the flasng of an image. Mikey's partne sees the eyes , a n evil looking redish hue, then nothing............ dstracted by he eyes, one ofthe robbers, pulls out a mac 11 and wastes the distracted cop, the bullets rip through the cop's body, the gost sill watching the bullets in slow motion, helahs in that evei predator laugh, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaahaaahahaha!, Mikey fires at the stobing image..... one of the crooks, noti tat the cop isn't worried abou he and his group, h turnsand folo the cop's head movemnts, and the aiming of the pistol.........thecrok sees the ghost and fires too.........the ghost distracted fromthecop, is hit in the cest area of his armor....
tir o this play thig, the ghost de-cloak fully, boththe cop and thcrooks stop firing for a second, the hey begin to freat the beast before them........tey see him fidewith his right arm, the green tri lasers find another target, the boldst o the crooks, as the predator rouge fiddle th thgauntlt, a rather large blueish wite ball ofplasma form, and is cast , the plasma bolt tears off the left arm of the crook, while thi takes place, the preator rouge cocks the left gauntlet like a shot gun........micro smart discs are launched at the others........ he cp runs for cover, the micro dscs chew through the crooks as if they were in a meat grinder........... they return to the launcher allbut one, it was lodged into the steel ad concrete of the buildings beindthe crooks.........Mikey stnd and fires his revolver at the beast, , now empty a nasty man scream i heard...........as if somhg was ripped from hi body.............still checking he dna BAN hear thedreadful man scream, and turns his headquickly, and crashes through the wall.........!


what sem like hours is realy in fact a few minutes..............BANE sits atop a building'roof, he ledge in fact, squing, he flashes through his bios visor modes and no can see all the mes below, the het blooms from he bodies are fading to black as they cool, one in particular catches his eye. he dead cop , flashin hrh the bio's sound recorder,BAN matches up th man scream. triaulating the bodies, BANE comes across the micro smart disc, he rips trug the concrete and tears the micro disc loose..... lookin at he disc, and it's makins, none, it was clear of markings, but h rouge bul's trace dna was still attacedto it.....!


hours later, the rouge bull preadtor finds the van, it sits outside a condemed building. the ouge in his cloakeform drops to theground from a old semi's wrecked trailer.......!

loking through the van the rouge picks up the feromones the fear scent, he locks in on his scent...... the hooker was scared to death.........!




TO BE CONTINUED:

 

[BANE]

TO BE CONTINUED:

 

[ancientpredator]

like the story. Strong, good begin of a triller/horror.. Because this predator.. the rouge..WHOEHAHAHAHAHAAAA... is unknown...