TUSKY
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Rogue Predator
That is the name I gave a pred character in a story I wrote six months after P2 came out.
He ignores the rules of the hunt and nearly all of the “codes “ that most of the predator clans follow.
Now days he would be called a “Bad Blood”
In the first treatment I knocked out, he came to earth to hunt, but also to get his revenge on a predator elder, which he knew would be sent after him.
The Elder does follow with a ship of seasoned hunters to eliminate any and all traces of the Rogue.
Of course, humans get caught up in the mix, couple of Police Detectives (remembering P2 was still fresh in mind)
And a few scumbag drug lord types.
Over the course of the tale, said Rogue kills humans and preds left right and centre, untill the final confrontation with the Elder and a lone surviving detective in a under construction building.
Spiderman 3 pissed me off when that came out,…
Somehow the SWAT turn up and the detective orders them to surround the building but not enter!
Of said SWAT rush in, after half the fight and make a mess of things (wounding the Elder)
The Elder with alittle help from the Detective manages to kill the rogue and smash his skull, (big shame on him)
As in P2 the Elder calls the ship and gives the cop a trophy (can’t recall what it was) and all is well.
I still have part of the script around (printout of Act 1)
When I get the time I will re type it and fix some of the errors.
We even did a rough cut on VHS of the first act, with predator costume and very bad FX.
Unfortunately that has gone to the tip along time ago.
I am thinking of making the costume of the rogue.
The sketch is just a basic look, no detail to the skin, armour or decorations
Looking at basing the look on the P2, at this point, will see with way to wants to go.
Will probably start off with the hands first,. Something nice and small.
My frustrations with the aborted scratch build have been sorted out
http://www.thehunterslair.com/index.php?showtopic=4701
Hopefully if I aim for at least 2 years I should be able to get this done (allowing for life stuff to pop up)
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee172/p...tusk/img001.jpg
That is the name I gave a pred character in a story I wrote six months after P2 came out.
He ignores the rules of the hunt and nearly all of the “codes “ that most of the predator clans follow.
Now days he would be called a “Bad Blood”
In the first treatment I knocked out, he came to earth to hunt, but also to get his revenge on a predator elder, which he knew would be sent after him.
The Elder does follow with a ship of seasoned hunters to eliminate any and all traces of the Rogue.
Of course, humans get caught up in the mix, couple of Police Detectives (remembering P2 was still fresh in mind)
And a few scumbag drug lord types.
Over the course of the tale, said Rogue kills humans and preds left right and centre, untill the final confrontation with the Elder and a lone surviving detective in a under construction building.
Spiderman 3 pissed me off when that came out,…
Somehow the SWAT turn up and the detective orders them to surround the building but not enter!
Of said SWAT rush in, after half the fight and make a mess of things (wounding the Elder)
The Elder with alittle help from the Detective manages to kill the rogue and smash his skull, (big shame on him)
As in P2 the Elder calls the ship and gives the cop a trophy (can’t recall what it was) and all is well.
I still have part of the script around (printout of Act 1)
When I get the time I will re type it and fix some of the errors.
We even did a rough cut on VHS of the first act, with predator costume and very bad FX.
Unfortunately that has gone to the tip along time ago.
I am thinking of making the costume of the rogue.
The sketch is just a basic look, no detail to the skin, armour or decorations
Looking at basing the look on the P2, at this point, will see with way to wants to go.
Will probably start off with the hands first,. Something nice and small.
My frustrations with the aborted scratch build have been sorted out
http://www.thehunterslair.com/index.php?showtopic=4701
Hopefully if I aim for at least 2 years I should be able to get this done (allowing for life stuff to pop up)
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee172/p...tusk/img001.jpg