overall, very nice...
hard crit...
his face needs to be thinned out a bit, and his forehead needs to be taller
but just a little bit
he's missing the bumps on the sides of his nose
ball on the bottom of his hose should be a bit fuller
ears are dead on
lower lip needs to be fuller and round further down... also needs the split in the middle
upper portion of mouth looks too full... lip needs to be flatter
(looks like it puffs out forward, and the contour looks wrong)
missing the raised line in the middle of the upper lip, and should have
a bit more of a point in the middle
bags under eyes need to be better defined
brow need to show musculature, especially above the eyebrow peaks
your on your way to a stunning likeness though