My VERY FIRST predator drawing

[theman123]

ok this is my first ever predator drawing. not the best in the world but you don't have to tell me that. i'm only new and im only 13.

give me some CONSTRUCTIVE critism. thanks

 

[dark hunter]

more dreads !!

 

[one and only]

Looks good.
Yes indeed more dreads.
Is this what your predator is going to look like?

 

[rocktuskpred]

thats a hole lot better than i can do

but i think on your next one you should bring up the shin armor and give it more dreads

 

[theman123]

Looks good.
Yes indeed more dreads.
Is this what your predator is going to look like?

yeah this is what my pred will look like except i might change skin colour.

 

[SilentObsession]

hey! that's better than what I can do. Good Job

 

[Gkei moun]

I think bigger chest armour my first pred pic was when i was your age, it was in the back of my english book i've never actually tried to draw the preds face. nine thumbs up

 

[theman123]

um yeah... thanks but....
a) dont revive old topics
its not that good, and ther is definately better
and c) i thought the chest armour was fine

 

[one and only]

The topic isn't that old, and your drawing is good for your age and experience of drawing predators.

 

[Yautjafanboy]

Constructive? the only thing i would work on, is his stance it looks a little blocky, leaf through a comic or two and get some ideas for dramatic poses and then sketch it out, its a really nice peice tho man, very good for a first attempt. keep it up.

 

[LemonFreshElder]

Very nice drawing, just two things. The stance is a bit awkward, I think there should be a bit more 'life' in him. Also, there needs to be more details. Overall, good work!

 

[theman123]

hey thanks everyone i know there isnt much life i am thinking of buying a pred toy or something poseable like that to give me some ideas.

 

[Moloch1]

Hey great first attempt, i was a drawing instructor for awhile and took a ton of figure drawing in college. So, my suggestion would be to get yourself one of those anatomy for the artist books and develop your skills. you obviously have the ambition. One great book is Constructive Anatomy by George B. Bridgman, I am sure you can find it on amazon. My dad bought it for me when I was about your age and it definitely helped me to learn realistic anatomy. All that aside, I would say once again fantastic first attempt, keep going, you have no idea how talented you can become when you simply have enthusiasm.

 

[theman123]

Hey great first attempt, i was a drawing instructor for awhile and took a ton of figure drawing in college. So, my suggestion would be to get yourself one of those anatomy for the artist books and develop your skills. you obviously have the ambition. One great book is Constructive Anatomy by George B. Bridgman, I am sure you can find it on amazon. My dad bought it for me when I was about your age and it definitely helped me to learn realistic anatomy. All that aside, I would say once again fantastic first attempt, keep going, you have no idea how talented you can become when you simply have enthusiasm.

hey thanks heaps for that i'll have a look into finding an anatomy book.