My 1St Predator Story

BoSkarr

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I currently do not have a title and I would like you all to come up with one.I will have one of the Predator symbols every chapter. The main characters name is David, and he fought along side a Predator who died on the Hunt and was accepted into their society and clan.
I will be useing Predator-ish names that you come up with or I see you have.
I would also like you to pick a clan symbol- other than Scar- for him to have.
I will update it from time to time.
Here it goes. 
         He woke on a cold concrete floor. As he tried to stand he felt light-headed, and realized he was bleeding from a cut above his left eye. He leaned against a wall for support while he scanned his surroundings. The walls were made of metal and there was a cot, but what puzzled him was the crease in the wall opposite the cot. As he approached the crease, he spotted movement in his peripheral vision. With a move so fast, only a snake could mimic he grabbed his silver-chrome M-1911 pistol and shot it dead on. Only there was no sound, no bullet, not even a gun in his hand. He looked at his waist where his home made leather holster should be. Nothing. It was at this point he realized he was not even in the clothes he put on. Instead of a grey t-shirt, a pair of faded Levi jeans, and a pair of size 14 brown leather work boots, he was wearing a robe that was the same color as the floor - flat grey.
He turned his attention back towards the movement. As he approached the corner, he realized it was a camera. Someone was watching him He did not know who, but he intended to find out.
    On the other side of the crease stood a large creature. It was humanoid, and wore a large mask. It had long smooth black tendrils protruding for the sides and back of its head that resembled dreadlocks. It wore a large plate of armor on its chest and armor on its shoulders, legs and back. It also wore a net that covered its entire body. There was a large serated blade on the creatures left boot. It had a curved container on its back. Attached to this was a cannon like weapon. One each wrist was a guantlet. On the right was what looked like a computer with several screens and a slide. Both guantlets had a pair of blades barely protruding from the front. It also carried a spear, along with a pair of short curved blades on its lower back on a belt that held up a loin cloth.
The eyes on the creatures mask flashed a light-blue color as it reached toward a control panel with several screens and touched three of them. The creature made a clicking noise.
    "David" it said, slightly distorted.
     On the other side of the wall, the man saw the crease slide open, almost as though slidinng in to nothing. He saw his chance, he lunged into the empty space, knocking the creature onto the floor. He got up and kicked it in the side, knocking the wind out of it. The creature let out a loud roar. Two more creatures came running down the hall, a male wearing armor that only covered half his chest and a female with only one blade in her gauntlets. The male's cannon went up and launched a small blue orb of light at the man. When it made contact, it exploded and he fell over. The creature had sent a low power plasma bolt at him, only strong enough to knock him out.
When he woke up, he was on the cot. His arms were shackled to the sides of the cot. He had a head-ache and his back hurt.
        Not much time had passed by when his head-ache faded and three of the creatures entered through the crease. The male he attacked and the two that stopped him. The one he attacked removed his mask. It was at this point he realized what it was- a Yautja or a Predator.He also realized who it was, Doyion, Koto-sa-tu's son. Koto-sa-tu was the Predator he fought beside in a Hunting temple on the jungle moon of Bk-67. They killed the queen after an earthquake released her and the other Yautja were killed. He died while fighting the queen, she' stabbed him in the arm and threw him at a rock. The rock was sharp and peirced his mid section snapping his spine. He died instantly. He tried to speak, but his head-ache returned four times as strong, and he passed out again. The female removed her mask, as well as the male who shot him. The female and Doyion had the same basic facial features, for they were siblings. Her name was Taranya. The male who shot him had a scar on his face that went down the right side and curved around a mandible. His name was Quan-gor-pa. Quan-gor-pa was Doyion and Tanya's uncle.
        David studied their armor, faces, weapons, and of course, masks. He noticed that they all had the same thing on their masks and foreheads. A mark that symbolized their clan. It was not long before he realized he had one too.
 
I keep trying to fix the post, but when I hit the backspace botton it sends me back to my profile.
 
"loved it mate...if you want a charactor name..what about .."Fiv"..ie the five planets that are in Predators..i like that flick i just want it to keep going..would be pretty damn cosmic lookin at the other planets.."Fiv" the sum of four and one..keep on with your work it was a great read..
 
This was a REALLY good read, love it so far, will be waiting for more.


As for a title.... I have no idea
 
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