[WIP] My Indiana Jones Story Grail Diary Deluxe Project
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Yodatc
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i have glanced at your pdf for this diary, and really like the updates you have come up with from Marc’s Story Diary! I am very interested to see how your page 150-151 turn out. I can’t quite visualize how the “A”s and “B”s labels work with the window images, but do like the fact you worked in the in game text with them!
Pascal Kurosawa
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@Everyone: You find the PDF file Yodatc is talking about as an attachment of this posting. Please scroll down.
@Yodatc: Hi, do you have a copy of the Computer Game Diary? On the pages 42 and 43 there are not images from a window.
In the game you need to choose the correct 3 symbols to open a door.
@Yodatc: Hi, do you have a copy of the Computer Game Diary? On the pages 42 and 43 there are not images from a window.
In the game you need to choose the correct 3 symbols to open a door.
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Yodatc
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Pascal Kurosawa
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Yes, that is what I have did. You can see some examples of combinations in the screenshots I have posted.
The correct combination changed random every time someone has played the game.
The correct combination changed random every time someone has played the game.
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aramis2000
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Pascal Kurosawa , I'd like to thank you for sharing your story text. It's a wonderful starting point for anyone (like myself) looking to create a new story diary!
I'm about halfway through the text and I did spot some possible improvements which you may consider for a future version.
Many of the spelling & grammatical errors in Mark's original text have been corrected, however there are still quite a few remaining in the invented texts. Some perhaps on purpose, but others are clearly mistakes. I can send you the list of what I spotted so far if you're interested.
Additionally, certain sentence structures and expressions were clearly not written by a native English speaker and seem unnatural. It could be interesting to have the text reviewed/edited by a native speaker (which I am not) - especially since Henry is supposed to be a professor of literature.
Other than that, I'm really enjoying the construction of my diary based on your story line
. Puzzling together all the images and inserts needed to complete the diary is almost a form of archaeology by itself .
I'm about halfway through the text and I did spot some possible improvements which you may consider for a future version.
Many of the spelling & grammatical errors in Mark's original text have been corrected, however there are still quite a few remaining in the invented texts. Some perhaps on purpose, but others are clearly mistakes. I can send you the list of what I spotted so far if you're interested.
Additionally, certain sentence structures and expressions were clearly not written by a native English speaker and seem unnatural. It could be interesting to have the text reviewed/edited by a native speaker (which I am not) - especially since Henry is supposed to be a professor of literature.
Other than that, I'm really enjoying the construction of my diary based on your story line
. Puzzling together all the images and inserts needed to complete the diary is almost a form of archaeology by itself .
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