stephen colbert 'Alien' magazine

great job! but im wondering about the font color on the "5 ways to make him chest burst" it looks a little more green to me personally

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agreed i think im still having a few sizing issues i need to fix as its still not split completly in half but i may do another revision tommorow
 
great job! but im wondering about the font color on the "5 ways to make him chest burst" it looks a little more green to me personally

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agreed i think im still having a few sizing issues i need to fix as its still not split completly in half but i may do another revision tommorow
I agree. I think you had the green color correct.
 
I think the "XENO" in 'xenomost' might be a lighter / thinner font than the "MOST" text. If you compare the "O" in 'xeno' to the "M" in 'most,' they look different to me. Just a guess.
 
I agree, the XENO in xenomost is definately a different thinner font. You can see the top of the X and side of the E in one of the frame captures that also supports this.
 
One thing ive noticed on the original the feet on the astronaut are on the bottom of the page versus what all are versions that have the feet in the lower quarter of the page


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One thing ive noticed on the original the feet on the astronaut are on the bottom of the page versus what all are versions that have the feet in the lower quarter of the page


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Ah yeah, that is right. It looks like the image was stretched down, which would also restore the roundness to mars and make the astronaut less fat.
 

Nice! I don't see anything else worth mentioning that needs to be adjusted.

The only things I might be seeing is that your main FACEHUGGER FANCY seems to be too close to the edges. Also, if you look at your green text in relation to the red text, it is not aligned correctly. I put a red line on the original and the same red line on yours so you can see how the green text should line up with the word "YOURS" in the red.
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After looking at it, I believe it is your red text that is off.

Please look at the following comparison where you can see the space from your red text to the purple text is off.
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I added arrows in those spots so you can see where I am referring to.

Here is your piece with the original laid over in that section. You can see once you enlarge the red text, it almost lines up with the green text correctly. You might have to bring the green text size down slightly so it lines up perfectly.
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And I also believe they might have adjusted the hue in Photoshop, giving the Doctor's scrubs a more blue color as opposed to the aqua coloring. They might have even selected out the facehugger and bumped up the brightness on that portion to make it look more white and washed out.
 
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