yautjamaster27
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If it is, i'll repost it somewhere else.Snake14 said:
Predator Of A New Form
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Folsomaticustom
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This is really good!
yautjamaster27
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thanks, i need a name for the main character. any ideas?
yautjamaster27
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After a month, the child could walk and eat meat, and Dusk actually enjoyed his company. She thought he was pretty cute for a human. The baby was able to waddle around the ground of Dusk's living quarters. His meal's consisted of galaxy-wide choices of meat and flesh. He had taken a liking to Ti'Sheik, or Shreakers as they were known, meat, mostly rare. His dreads were at ear length by now and he was already a 3 feet tall. Many hunters believed Dusk was losing her touch raising the child, at hearing this she'd growl at them and they'd stop talking.
Other yautja mothers would be invited to the dwelling for the Ooman to meet Yautja his age. These accasions would have the children playing games like 'The Hunt' or 'Predator and Prey' while the mothers discussed how their children were growing and joke and discuss how their mates were doing. Not having a mate, Dusk would stay silent when the conversation took this turn.
"How is your Ooman, Dusk?" her neighbor, Brisk asked.
"He's fine and seems fond of your daughter!" she joked as the Ooman was chasing Brisk's daughter, making roar and growl sounds. He did get along with Lure. She didn't care that he looked different, she liked him and he thanked her for her acceptence. The other children didn't know better at this age, but they would. Someday.....
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After a month, the child could walk and eat meat, and Dusk actually enjoyed his company. She thought he was pretty cute for a human. The baby was able to waddle around the ground of Dusk's living quarters. His meal's consisted of galaxy-wide choices of meat and flesh. He had taken a liking to Ti'Sheik, or Shreakers as they were known, meat, mostly rare. His dreads were at ear length by now and he was already a 3 feet tall. Many hunters believed Dusk was losing her touch raising the child, at hearing this she'd growl at them and they'd stop talking.
Other yautja mothers would be invited to the dwelling for the Ooman to meet Yautja his age. These accasions would have the children playing games like 'The Hunt' or 'Predator and Prey' while the mothers discussed how their children were growing and joke and discuss how their mates were doing. Not having a mate, Dusk would stay silent when the conversation took this turn.
"How is your Ooman, Dusk?" her neighbor, Brisk asked.
"He's fine and seems fond of your daughter!" she joked as the Ooman was chasing Brisk's daughter, making roar and growl sounds. He did get along with Lure. She didn't care that he looked different, she liked him and he thanked her for her acceptence. The other children didn't know better at this age, but they would. Someday.....
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torredator
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I like this concept a lot!!!
yautjamaster27
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After what would have been 10 earth years, the boy had grown to the equivalent of 1 year. During this time, he was given a name. Reflecting his personality, intelligence, strength, stealth, and skill. But the name was also chosen from his unlikely upbringing. His name is Hybrid.
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After what would have been 10 earth years, the boy had grown to the equivalent of 1 year. During this time, he was given a name. Reflecting his personality, intelligence, strength, stealth, and skill. But the name was also chosen from his unlikely upbringing. His name is Hybrid.
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yautjamaster27
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"Hybrid!" an excited cry was heard throughout the travel center. Hybrid turned around to see his life-long friend, Lure, running toward him.
"Lure? What're you......" At that moment, Lure tackled him and they fell.
"You let down your guard agian~!"she teased. He smiled, this was what usually happened at their meetings. They embraced, Hybrid sitting up and Lure kneeling. "Remember to always do that. Anyway, hi! Your back!" He had been to a reserve planet nearby for some time.
"I'll be sure to remember that, now, could you get yourself off so i can stand?" She moved and he adjusted his chestplate. With this, they headed to Hybrid's dwelling.
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Who wants some romance between Lure and Hybrid? Seems like it's heading that way........
"Hybrid!" an excited cry was heard throughout the travel center. Hybrid turned around to see his life-long friend, Lure, running toward him.
"Lure? What're you......" At that moment, Lure tackled him and they fell.
"You let down your guard agian~!"she teased. He smiled, this was what usually happened at their meetings. They embraced, Hybrid sitting up and Lure kneeling. "Remember to always do that. Anyway, hi! Your back!" He had been to a reserve planet nearby for some time.
"I'll be sure to remember that, now, could you get yourself off so i can stand?" She moved and he adjusted his chestplate. With this, they headed to Hybrid's dwelling.
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Who wants some romance between Lure and Hybrid? Seems like it's heading that way........
yautjamaster27
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I'm not making the suit, NightBlood is. I'm just giving it some history and story line. But i would like how he makes it too. I came up with the idea of blood transfusion off the top of my head. I'm glad you like it. I want some insight of how this should play out........... help needed, ideas wanted.
yautjamaster27
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if anyone wants to add their own characters, just message me.
yautjamaster27
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Hybrid didn't ave an elaborate home, his life wasn't very elaborate. But it was fine, and Lure was liked the dwelling. He sat inon his resting pad and she sat next to him.
"How was your hunt?" she asked, clearly interested.
"It wasn't very exciting. No interesting prey." he responded, distractedly.
"I missed you....."she said, looking away. "I mean,....... Things were boring without you here."
"I bet. We both know I'm great company." he laughed. Lure giggled at his sartasm.
"You are great company. Bulk and Haze mated while you were gone. Can't talk to either one without the other there. Really annoying."
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Hybrid didn't ave an elaborate home, his life wasn't very elaborate. But it was fine, and Lure was liked the dwelling. He sat inon his resting pad and she sat next to him.
"How was your hunt?" she asked, clearly interested.
"It wasn't very exciting. No interesting prey." he responded, distractedly.
"I missed you....."she said, looking away. "I mean,....... Things were boring without you here."
"I bet. We both know I'm great company." he laughed. Lure giggled at his sartasm.
"You are great company. Bulk and Haze mated while you were gone. Can't talk to either one without the other there. Really annoying."
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yautjamaster27
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Not sure where this is going. would appreciate some advice
yautjamaster27
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"That's great for them! They always did get along." Hybrid said joyously. "Hey are you hungry? I was going to the plaza for food anyway."
'He wants to eat with me? Why's he so nice?' she thought, a red tint on her yellow skin."Sure, that'd be great!"
And with that, they let for the city plaza. Hybrid kept the conversation going and Lure kept glancing at his face or hand, yerning to hold it. Many passer-bys gave the duo excited or curious glances. Hybrid was used to this, he was different, but didn't care. Lure, though, knew why they were looking at them like that. They had been bestfriends since being newborns. Sure he was different, but that was why she liked him. He seemed more open and passive. He hunted like all males, but didn't make an obsession of it. He always came back to visit her or his mother. Which reminded her.........
"Have you seen your mother yet?" she questioned.
" Not yet. I was going to pay a visit tomorrow." he responded.
"Why not go now? We could get food and all have dinner at her house."
Hybrid agreed, it was a good idea. He was already out and knew Dusk would enjoy seeing Lure. He bought meat at the market (Shrieker, mmmmmmmm) and headed to his mother's dwelling.
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"That's great for them! They always did get along." Hybrid said joyously. "Hey are you hungry? I was going to the plaza for food anyway."
'He wants to eat with me? Why's he so nice?' she thought, a red tint on her yellow skin."Sure, that'd be great!"
And with that, they let for the city plaza. Hybrid kept the conversation going and Lure kept glancing at his face or hand, yerning to hold it. Many passer-bys gave the duo excited or curious glances. Hybrid was used to this, he was different, but didn't care. Lure, though, knew why they were looking at them like that. They had been bestfriends since being newborns. Sure he was different, but that was why she liked him. He seemed more open and passive. He hunted like all males, but didn't make an obsession of it. He always came back to visit her or his mother. Which reminded her.........
"Have you seen your mother yet?" she questioned.
" Not yet. I was going to pay a visit tomorrow." he responded.
"Why not go now? We could get food and all have dinner at her house."
Hybrid agreed, it was a good idea. He was already out and knew Dusk would enjoy seeing Lure. He bought meat at the market (Shrieker, mmmmmmmm) and headed to his mother's dwelling.
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yautjamaster27
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Years before...........
"Don't you worry for him?" the Elder asked Dusk. " He may be ridiculed for his differences.
" He'll be fine, and if there's an incident, I'll fix it." She said.
" You care more for him than you let on don't you?" the Elder smiled.
Present time.............
"Hi, mother!" Hybrid said, overjoyed. "We brought Shrieker for dinner."
"Hi Dusk." Lure greeted.
"Oh hello Hybrid, Lure. It's nice to see you two after so long."
Years before...........
"Don't you worry for him?" the Elder asked Dusk. " He may be ridiculed for his differences.
" He'll be fine, and if there's an incident, I'll fix it." She said.
" You care more for him than you let on don't you?" the Elder smiled.
Present time.............
"Hi, mother!" Hybrid said, overjoyed. "We brought Shrieker for dinner."
"Hi Dusk." Lure greeted.
"Oh hello Hybrid, Lure. It's nice to see you two after so long."
nightblood
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i like it. maybe this should be a comic before i build a suit
yautjamaster27
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give it some backstory, and thanks
