berserkerelite
New Member
Ok so i tried writing before, but failed badly. So i decided to try again, but kick the humans out. I do hope this is better than my past attempts, just thought i would share it, hope you like it
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Predator
Home world war
The hunter moved through the vast jungle of Yautja prime, quickly upping his pace as he went, he was in a highly dangerous territory that he was in a hurry to get out of, there was stories amongst many Yautja clans about a vicious bad-blood who lived out here, that wore pure black armour to go with his grey skin, the Dark Blade, who cruelly killed other hunters and any other prey that dared to enter his territory.
As he ran, the hunter noticed a biomask on the floor, very damaged and covered in green blood, but he could still make out his clan mark he paused for a moment to respect his hunt brother's death it but didn't dare go near the mask in Case it was a trap.
He ran even faster this time, there were Yautja skulls on sharpened sticks in places, skinned hunters and hunters without their heads. This was enough even to strike fear into an experienced hunter's heart.
He stopped; there it was again, a noise like the movement of wolves as they stalk their prey. The hunter's plasma caster went up and he clenched a fist. Suddenly a smart disk came flying through the air, uncloaking as it came and sliced deep into his leg.
He roared in agony, and fell to the floor, he reached for his self-destruct device, if the dark blade was here, he was sure to die anyway, and he diden't want to be dishonoured like those others, but something attacked again, this time slicing his arm clean off, He cried out again, but another hunter appeared above him with grey skin and night black armour, the Dark blade!
The hunter realised in horror what had happened, and the Dark blade grabbed him by the neck and pulled him up, he looked at him for a few seconds and then let him go, but quickly smacked him so hard round the face in knocked his biomask off. The Dark blade loomed over him, like another one of the trees, and with a quick swing of his wristblade, beheaded him, and held the head high with pride. Around him more hunters appeared, his clan, also celebrating another victory.
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Predator
Home world war
The hunter moved through the vast jungle of Yautja prime, quickly upping his pace as he went, he was in a highly dangerous territory that he was in a hurry to get out of, there was stories amongst many Yautja clans about a vicious bad-blood who lived out here, that wore pure black armour to go with his grey skin, the Dark Blade, who cruelly killed other hunters and any other prey that dared to enter his territory.
As he ran, the hunter noticed a biomask on the floor, very damaged and covered in green blood, but he could still make out his clan mark he paused for a moment to respect his hunt brother's death it but didn't dare go near the mask in Case it was a trap.
He ran even faster this time, there were Yautja skulls on sharpened sticks in places, skinned hunters and hunters without their heads. This was enough even to strike fear into an experienced hunter's heart.
He stopped; there it was again, a noise like the movement of wolves as they stalk their prey. The hunter's plasma caster went up and he clenched a fist. Suddenly a smart disk came flying through the air, uncloaking as it came and sliced deep into his leg.
He roared in agony, and fell to the floor, he reached for his self-destruct device, if the dark blade was here, he was sure to die anyway, and he diden't want to be dishonoured like those others, but something attacked again, this time slicing his arm clean off, He cried out again, but another hunter appeared above him with grey skin and night black armour, the Dark blade!
The hunter realised in horror what had happened, and the Dark blade grabbed him by the neck and pulled him up, he looked at him for a few seconds and then let him go, but quickly smacked him so hard round the face in knocked his biomask off. The Dark blade loomed over him, like another one of the trees, and with a quick swing of his wristblade, beheaded him, and held the head high with pride. Around him more hunters appeared, his clan, also celebrating another victory.