odd predator chronicles

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darkbladeclan

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and ill reveal why later on into the story (not this part 1 it will be a really further part)

heres part1:the begging

whoaraa the toddler predator let out a roarish cry but nothing happened it had been abandoned by its parents and left to fend for itself on a faraway planet within the first few days the toddler predator found a source of food and how to catch them it was rock scorps(a small scorpion like creature) but one day when the toddler was searching the desert like ground for rock scorps it found a bunch of bushes and trees. the toddler walked towards the trees but as it got about half a meter away from the tree a cythonox(wolf like creature) jumped out from the bushes and growled at the toddler. the toddler tilted its head in confusion the only other creature it knew exists was rock scorps the cythonox ran at the toddler and then bit it on the left leg the toddler yelped and then frowned and roared at the cythonox with its mandibles spread wide. the cythonox once again ran at the toddler and bit its left leg the toddler gave one last roar as a warning but the cythonox ran at the toddler once again only this time as it went to bite it the toddler gripped its jaws and opened them until they broke then the toddler punched the cythonox to the floor and got on top of it and punched the cythonox to its death. now the toddler was prepared the next time it seen a cythonox which it seen many and broke their jaws too.2 weeks after its 1st cythonox battle the toddler went back to the spot where it found trees and began trying to climb them. after 3 weeks it could fully climb and leap from one to another on the trees. so now at the age of a toddler it knew how to climb trees which most yajuta wouldn't learn until their 1st earth hunt and it knew hand to hand combat from its cythonox experiences which most yajuta wouldn't learn until they were going to try out for a clan. when it next went tree climbing it was blocked from going out of the tree area the curious toddler got closer to what was blocking it and then realized it was an older and bigger yajuta. The older yajuta gave the toddler rock scorps to eat and then took it to its ship where over years it taught the toddler the ways of the yajuta,the dishonorable and honorable kills and when it got older weapon combat. the experienced yajuta felt no need to teach the now young predator hand to hand after the young predator showed its skills in a spar with the experienced yajuta and decided it was ready to take it to earth to show it a real earth hunt.so the experienced yajuta landed on earth in a jungle area and gave the young predator a cloaking device. Then the two left the ship in stealth mode and searched the jungle it wasn't long before they found some soldiers and when they did the experienced yajuta killed them one by one until they all grouped together in a circle and they were shooting in all directions so the experienced yajuta used its plasma caster to kill them all at once. it then showed the young predator how to skin its victims after skinning and hanging them they both left o go back to their ship ,on their way back they seen some other soldiers but just left them and continued on to get back to their ship. as they got to their ship there was an explosion and gunfire in the jungle behind them so they both ran back to find the army men they seen earlier they waited for the army men to leave and then investigated. the experienced yajuta picked up a dead scorpion and showed the young predator it reminded them of the rock scorps they used to eat. after that the experienced yajuta gave the young predator orders to go back to the ship and wait for it to finish its hunt. so the young predator followed its orders but after waiting for nearly 2 days in the ship it knew something was wrong so it put on the wrist blades it had been training with and searched the jungle for its friend. it found its friends bio helmet by some trees and then as it went further north and seen a man running away and its friend on the floor wounded laughing in self destruct mode quickly the young predator cut off the self destruct part of its friends arm off with the wrist blades and pressed reset so the bomb would still go off without killing its friend. the young predator picked its friend up and carried it back to the ship
but as the ship left earth its friend died. the young predator gave out a fierce roar and picked up its friend bio it had found and searched for what had killed its friend. when it seen it was the man it had seen running away it put its friends bio helmet onto its empty trophy wrack and then put on some extendable wrist blades and then it frowned and turned the ship back around to earth
 

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darkbladeclan

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part 2:hunting major allan dutch schaefer

after months of searching the young predator finally found its prey named dutch in los angeles stepping out of the back of a van. but it didn't attack him it stalked him instead after a while dutch started becoming paranoid and started constantly looking over his shoulder as it started to rain dutch headed through an alleyway and started walking fast then suddenly ROAR! the young predator jumped down from a rooftop and kicked dutch to the floor as it landed. dutch got back up and blue sparks were flying off the young predator as the rain affected its stealth mode, the young predator extended its wrist blades and dutch tackled it to the floor but it kicked him back off it and got back up and roared dutch ran at it again but it grabbed him by the arm and swung him around and then flung him into a wall. as dutch tried to get back up the young predator tried to stab him but dutch ducked and its wrist blades got stuck into the wall. as it tried to pull them out dutch pulled of a piece of piping but as he went to swing at it with the piping the young predator pulled out its wrist blades and blocked the attack with them and they cut the pipe in half. then dutch said"****" and the young predator gripped him against the wall and stabbed him in the stomach with its wrist blades. after taking his skull it returned to its ship where it used dutches skull as part of its shoulder armour. It had killed him with a weapon when he was unarmed and the kill was dishonorable but this kill was personal so it didn't care and it wasn't in a clan anyway. the young predator stood with its arms folded as t looked through the window of its ship and looked at a nearby planet.
 

CoolleKotten

New Member
Nice story, but would it be too much to ask for you to use the "enter" button ones in awhile?
This massive text seems a bit intimidating at first, and making it alot more lighter and not so compact would also make it easier to read.
Otherwise, good story. o_O

Kotten
 

darkbladeclan

New Member
i might come back to this story soon because iv still got the egyptian bio pred and the odd predator using alien heads instead of bios to write about
 

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