My First Cowl sculpt. Comic style. WIP

[SuperRyan21]

this is my first attempt at sculpting a bat cowl. It's still got a long way to go, and the right side is more finished than the other but you get the idea. It's ment for us that have large noggins. lol. anyway, Please give me some feedback as I do want to make this better.

 

[dmurano]

I think the primary issue with any form of modeling with clay is a lack of planes.

Bridgman's theory of form is that it's revealed by the shed line between planes.
This a good start, but you need more stark plane changes.