I was dissapointed to see Private Pyle getting eating so early. They could have had him just loose an arm, and come back as a villain in the sequel.
no body could equal no death, the raptors did get awfully distracted after we see the blood spatter. You never know!
I overall liked the film, but there were tiny things that I feel had they been changed would have really added to it as a whole.
I think instead of "heat sensors gone haywire" they should have had surveillance cameras and a bank of monitors for the security guy to check and see that she wasn't in the pen. In my opinion it would have more impact because humans are so reliant on our visual faculties, looking for something and SEEING that it isn't there is much more scary than heat signatures, something that we have no first hand reliance on or experience with. It would also serve to make Indominus a little less conveniently super powered, and the active camo made much more sense for a dino to be able to learn and observe the ability as she gets different reactions from the people observing her as she disappears. I've seen it mentioned in this thread, but it really is pretty unbelievable that she just KNOWS how to fool the heat sensors, that isn't intelligence that is magic.
Also the fact that no sane person's first step when a technical system goes down would be to enter the pen without first making a call to the tech center and getting a location read on the creature. I would have liked to see them go on a catwalk/skyway instead to physically look for her due to the monitors not giving her location, only to then be surprised as she smashes them and then Grady and the others could roll/fall off the walkway into the pen leaving the rest of the scene to play out basically unchanged.
My other little gripe, or a "if I had written it" would have been to get Claire some boots. Whether she found them at the old park where the jeeps were, or even later in one of the stores, I think it would have been a neat little character moment and subvert a bit of the high heeled damsel in distress trope (even though in my opinion she was far from that) aside from making sense practically. I know there is sex appeal in play, and they can't stop the movie for every little detail, but it seems to fit with her transformation and growing understanding of the situation at hand to discard the designer heels, stop being an executive, and let herself be a little freer.
Such a strange situation to be in with a movie when you really enjoyed it but almost hope they don't make a sequel for the sake of the world not losing the last shreds of believability. You want to believe that these people you grew to like over the course of the movie aren't dumb enough to repeat these mistakes (again!). I'll probably end up seeing it again, I know I missed a ton of easter eggs on my first viewing because it was packed! and I was sitting in nearly the front row.
