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Thankyou once again Jpro you have been very accommodating. Once I get it set up ill be sure to show it off :)
 
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So I've been making the bulldog from Marty's sister sweatshirt... I made it a bit randomly, but I wanted to have your thoughts on it:

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Looking great so far Emma, some constructive criticism would be that either the HV needs to be larger or the bulldog smaller it doesn't look like he is leaning on the letters like in the screen capture you provided. Also, on the bulldog I would make the lettering on the shirt larger.
 
Looking great so far Emma, some constructive criticism would be that either the HV needs to be larger or the bulldog smaller it doesn't look like he is leaning on the letters like in the screen capture you provided. Also, on the bulldog I would make the lettering on the shirt larger.

Oh yes, you're right haha xD!!! Thanks ^^
 
That looks much better, "class of 84" needs to be sized differently and realigned so that it matches now. I would try lining up certain letters with specific points. Also, I don't think the bulldog head needs to be slanted.
 
His right leg looks a tad bit too thick. And the outline of the right leg should go a little further.
 
Yes it might be the reason why I struggled aligning the text, because of the legs... but if I fix it, then the legs would be too far from the V. And I tried aligning the text with tracking and kerning but can't seem to fix it >< took me a good 3 hours to do this XD
 
Great artwork, Emma. :) I like your bulldog. If you need help with the typeface, here is my try.

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It's not perfect, but if you want to use it, the vector PDF is attached:
 

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